Talk:Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Prologue
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Original: He had not yet have power in his legs.
Suggested alternative: He had not any power in his legs yet.
Problem: "yet" doesn't seem to in correct location in the sentence. The sentence is awkward when I read it.
Original: Oh yeah. The direction facing the sea will probably be good.
Changed: Oh yeah, the direction facing the sea will probably be good.
Problem: "Oh yeah" this sentence isn't a sentence on it's own but a fragment sentence. It's seems the be better the construct the sentences to be one sentence. A side note, I see a lot translators placing periods where there suppose to commas.
