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04:1704:17, 27 October 2011 diff hist −2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine corrected word
04:1504:15, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine normal phrasing
04:1404:14, 27 October 2011 diff hist −3 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine extraneous word
04:1004:10, 27 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine "underway" doesn't make sense; "by the time" implies duration, which is appropriate here
04:0804:08, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine we normally wouldn't describe a house as "protrubing"
04:0504:05, 27 October 2011 diff hist +91 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
04:0404:04, 27 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine moved modifier to proper place
04:0204:02, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine better rhythm
03:3303:33, 27 October 2011 diff hist +162 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
03:3203:32, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine correct typo
03:2203:22, 27 October 2011 diff hist +190 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
03:2003:20, 27 October 2011 diff hist −5 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine removed typo
03:1503:15, 27 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine changed to correct word
03:1403:14, 27 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine added missing word
03:1203:12, 27 October 2011 diff hist −8 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine fixed grammar
03:1103:11, 27 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine made tense consistent
03:1003:10, 27 October 2011 diff hist +9 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine got rid of et al again. If "and others" becomes to repetitive, maybe some could be changed to "and crew" or "and friends" or "and his cohorts"
03:0803:08, 27 October 2011 diff hist −17 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine more natural phrasing
03:0503:05, 27 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine changed to standard phrase
03:0403:04, 27 October 2011 diff hist +5 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine read awkwardly, and wasn't logically true (if some random person in Iowa knew about the recipe, they'd still be acting friviously; it isn't important that nobody knew about it, only that they didn't know about it)
03:0203:02, 27 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine changed to correct word
03:0103:01, 27 October 2011 diff hist +67 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
03:0003:00, 27 October 2011 diff hist +9 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine et al doesn't really read well in fiction
02:5802:58, 27 October 2011 diff hist +163 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
02:5602:56, 27 October 2011 diff hist +101 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
02:5402:54, 27 October 2011 diff hist +139 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator

22:3122:31, 26 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare correct form
22:2822:28, 26 October 2011 diff hist −1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare reads better
22:2722:27, 26 October 2011 diff hist −1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare "world of assumptions" doesn't really make sense
22:2422:24, 26 October 2011 diff hist −2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare flows better
22:1722:17, 26 October 2011 diff hist +3 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare could also be rephrased as "It certainly rubbed me the wrong way that her plan had succeeded." The original phrasing combines the two and can't be parsed correctly.
22:1422:14, 26 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare corrected phrasing
22:0922:09, 26 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Sweet Nightmare "strictly" doesn't really make sense
22:0722:07, 26 October 2011 diff hist +7 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate corrected awkward/unclear phrasing
22:0622:06, 26 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate make tense consistent
22:0322:03, 26 October 2011 diff hist −5 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate make it easier to follow who's saying what in this long exchange of dialog
21:5621:56, 26 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate use proper form of word
21:5321:53, 26 October 2011 diff hist +65 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate question for translator
21:5021:50, 26 October 2011 diff hist −9 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate removed extraneous "then"; used proper past tense of "weep"
21:4721:47, 26 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Bitter Chocolate correct typo
21:4421:44, 26 October 2011 diff hist −1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 In The Café Make it clear who's talking
21:4221:42, 26 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 In The Café better flow
21:4021:40, 26 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 In The Café corrected tense
20:5120:51, 26 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 In The Café corrected grammar
20:4520:45, 26 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 In The Café could also replace comma/colon with ", but"
20:3120:31, 26 October 2011 diff hist +65 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession question for translator
20:2820:28, 26 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession flows better
18:4418:44, 26 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession could also be "aspects of her plan"
18:4218:42, 26 October 2011 diff hist +89 Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession No edit summary
18:2718:27, 26 October 2011 diff hist +3 Gekkou:Volume 1 Confession "dubious" would mean she herself was doubting something, which isn't the case. "suspicious" could be read either way, but sounds normal; "puzzling" would make it absolutely clear it is describing how Nonomiya views her attitude

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