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|3|麻理|Mari
|3|麻理|Mari
|「客観的すぎ。杓子定規。枯れてる。淡泊。熱くない。<br>こんなの拾ったコメントを羅列しただけ」
|「客観的すぎ。杓子定規。枯れてる。淡泊。熱くない。<br>こんなの拾ったコメントを羅列しただけ」
|"Far too objective, unambitious, dull, and uninspiring. <br>All you did was list what you heard from the interview line by line."
|"Far too objective, unambitious, dull, and uninspiring. All you did was list what you heard from the interview line by line."
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|5|麻理|Mari
|5|麻理|Mari
|「一体なんなんだこの駄文？<br>読めば読むほど気持ち悪くなってくる。<br>得意なのは雑用だけだった？　頭使う仕事は無理？」
|「一体なんなんだこの駄文？<br>読めば読むほど気持ち悪くなってくる。<br>得意なのは雑用だけだった？　頭使う仕事は無理？」
|"What the hell did you just make me read? The more I read the more upset I got. <br>Was running errands the only thing you could do well? Can't handle anything that actually takes some thinking?"
|"What the hell did you just make me read? The more I read the more upset I got. Is running errands the only thing you're good at? Can't you handle anything that actually takes some thinking?"
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|『叩いて伸ばすという教育方針にのっとった』と<br>説明されても、にわかには信じられないくらいの<br>大酷評だった。
|『叩いて伸ばすという教育方針にのっとった』と<br>説明されても、にわかには信じられないくらいの<br>大酷評だった。
|Even if you justify it by saying "she's only yelling because she cares", her words feel much too harsh considering the author's inexperience.
|Even if you justify it by saying "she's only yelling because she cares", her words feel way too harsh considering the author's lack of experience.
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|7|麻理|Mari
|7|麻理|Mari
|「いや、これスキル云々じゃないな。<br>あまりにも問題外すぎる。<br>お前、読者になにも伝える気ないだろ？」
|「いや、これスキル云々じゃないな。<br>あまりにも問題外すぎる。<br>お前、読者になにも伝える気ないだろ？」
|"No, this isn't even a problem with your ability. <br>This is completely out of the question. <br>You have no clue what message to give to the reader, do you?"
|"No, this isn't even a matter of your skill. This is just completely out of the question. You have no clue what message to give to the reader, do you?"
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|いや、そもそもそんなフォローは信じようがない。<br>なぜなら、麻理さんの表情が全てを物語ってる。
|いや、そもそもそんなフォローは信じようがない。<br>なぜなら、麻理さんの表情が全てを物語ってる。
|Well, it's not like I'd believe those comforting words anyway. <br>If you ask me why, I can only say that Mari-san's expression gave it all away.
|Well, it's not like I'd believe those comforting words anyway. If you ask me why, I can only say that Mari-san's expression gave it all away.
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|9|鈴木|Suzuki
|9|鈴木|Suzuki
|「ま、麻理さん…<br>そのくらいにしといた方が…」
|「ま、麻理さん…<br>そのくらいにしといた方が…」
|"M-Mari-san... <br>I think that's probably enough..."
|"M, Mari-san... <br>I think that's probably enough..."
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|10|浜田|Hamada
|10|浜田|Hamada
|「そうそう。<br>北原、バイトだし。<br>自分で書くのは初めてだし」
|「そうそう。<br>北原、バイトだし。<br>自分で書くのは初めてだし」
|"Yeah yeah. <br>Kitahara's just a part-timer. <br>And this is his first solo article."
|"Yeah, yeah. Kitahara's just a part-timer. <br>And this is his first solo article..."
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|12|麻理|Mari
|12|麻理|Mari
|「初仕事で頼まれてもいない提灯記事書く奴がいるか。<br>しかも提灯なのに媚びてもいない。最低だこんなの！」
|「初仕事で頼まれてもいない提灯記事書く奴がいるか。<br>しかも提灯なのに媚びてもいない。最低だこんなの！」
|"Who just goes and writes some kind of glorified advertisement as their first article? <br>And despite looking like an advertisement it doesn't sound flattering at all. <br>This is absolutely worthless!"
|"Who just goes and writes some kind of glorified advertisement as their first article? And despite looking like an advertisement it doesn't even sound flattering at all! This is absolutely worthless!"
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|ただ単に記事がヘタクソでムカついてるだけなら、<br>こんなに心の底から悔しそうな顔するはずがない。
|ただ単に記事がヘタクソでムカついてるだけなら、<br>こんなに心の底から悔しそうな顔するはずがない。
|If she's only upset because the article's worth less than the paper it's printed on, she wouldn't look as disappointed as she does.
|If she were only upset because the article's worth less than the paper it's printed on, she wouldn't look as disappointed as she does.
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|19|麻理|Mari
|19|麻理|Mari
|「そうだよ。お前の人脈とか元々持ってる情報量とか、<br>そういう部外者にはないアドバンテージに期待したんだ」
|「そうだよ。お前の人脈とか元々持ってる情報量とか、<br>そういう部外者にはないアドバンテージに期待したんだ」
|"Exactly. I had high hopes for the connections and background information you had, details that outsiders had no access to."
|"Exactly. I had high hopes for the connections and background information you had. Details that outsiders had no access to."
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|21|麻理|Mari
|21|麻理|Mari
|「それが何だこれ？<br>そこらの子供だって聞き出せるコメントばかりじゃないか。<br>これなら松岡の方が全然マシ！」
|「それが何だこれ？<br>そこらの子供だって聞き出せるコメントばかりじゃないか。<br>これなら松岡の方が全然マシ！」
|"And this trash is what you bring me? <br>Even a kid could gather these kinds of facts. <br>If this is all you can do then even Matsuoka is leagues above you!"
|"And this trash is what you bring me? Even a kid could gather these kinds of facts. If this is all you can do, then even Matsuoka is leagues above you!"
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|22|鈴木|Suzuki
|22|鈴木|Suzuki
|「ほらほら松岡。やったじゃん。<br>あんた麻理さんに認められてるよ？」
|「ほらほら松岡。やったじゃん。<br>あんた麻理さんに認められてるよ？」
|"You hear that, Matsuoka? Good for you. <br>Mari-san finally recognized your abilities, see?"
|"You hear that, Matsuoka? Good for you. <br>Mari-san has finally recognized your abilities, see?"
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|23|松岡|Matsuoka
|23|松岡|Matsuoka
|「こんな評価のされ方はさすがに嫌…」
|「こんな評価のされ方はさすがに嫌…」
|"I'm not sure I'm actually fond of her comment just now..."
|"I'm not sure I can actually even take any of that as a compliment..."
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|24|麻理|Mari
|24|麻理|Mari
|「（んく、んく）ふぅぅぅぅ…<br>ちょっとクールダウン」
|「（んく、んく）ふぅぅぅぅ…<br>ちょっとクールダウン」
|"(gulp, gulp)Fuuu... <br>Finally cooled down a little."
|".........<br>Fuuu... That cooled me down a little."
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|27|麻理|Mari
|27|麻理|Mari
|「お前なぁ…<br>人と繋がってないと、この仕事できないよ？」
|「お前なぁ…<br>人と繋がってないと、この仕事できないよ？」
|"You know... <br>If you can't connect with people, there's no way you can handle this job."
|"You know... If you can't connect with people, there's no way you can handle this job."
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|俺にとっては、どれも誉め言葉だし、<br>一つも否定しようのない事実だと思ってる。
|俺にとっては、どれも誉め言葉だし、<br>一つも否定しようのない事実だと思ってる。
|To me, those sound like nothing but complements. <br>They're all facts that I wouldn't think of denying.
|To me, those sound like nothing but compliments. <br>They're all facts that I wouldn't think of denying.
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|…特定の条件を持つ相手を除いて、だけど。
|…特定の条件を持つ相手を除いて、だけど。
|...As long as you exclude that certain special someone from "other people", that is.
|... As long as you exclude that certain special someone from "other people", that is.
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|36|麻理|Mari
|36|麻理|Mari
|「もうちょっと彼女の素顔に迫れないかな？<br>探せばいるだろ誰か？<br>昔の担任とか、親友とか、彼氏とか…」
|「もうちょっと彼女の素顔に迫れないかな？<br>探せばいるだろ誰か？<br>昔の担任とか、親友とか、彼氏とか…」
|"Can't you dig out a little more of her actual personality? <br>If you ask around enough you're bound to find somebody, right? <br>Like her past teachers, friends, boyfriends..."
|"Can't you dig out a little more of her actual personality? If you ask around enough you're bound to find somebody, right? Like her past teachers, friends, boyfriends..."
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|37|春希|Haruki
|37|春希|Haruki
|「…一人だったんですよ、いつも」
|「…一人だったんですよ、いつも」
|"...She was always by herself."
|"... She was always alone, all by herself."
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|むしろ、人とのコミュニケーション能力がなかったのは、<br>あいつの方で。
|むしろ、人とのコミュニケーション能力がなかったのは、<br>あいつの方で。
|The one who's actually unable to communicate with others is her.
|The one who was actually unable to communicate with others was her.
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|そのせいで今回だって、<br>みんなあいつを知らないから、<br>おためごかしの美辞麗句ばかりで…
|そのせいで今回だって、<br>みんなあいつを知らないから、<br>おためごかしの美辞麗句ばかりで…
|And as a result, <br>because nobody really knew her that well, <br>all they could tell me were those words of praise...
|And as a result, <br>because nobody really knew her that well, <br>all they could give me were those words of praise...
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|41|麻理|Mari
|41|麻理|Mari
|「ほら、それ」
|「ほら、それ」
|"See that?"
|"That's it."
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|45|麻理|Mari
|45|麻理|Mari
|「ちゃんと本当のこと掴んでるじゃない。<br>なんで出し惜しみするの？」
|「ちゃんと本当のこと掴んでるじゃない。<br>なんで出し惜しみするの？」
|"You have a good grasp of her character already, <br>so why are you holding back?"
|"You clearly have a good grasp of her character already, so why are you holding back?"
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|51|麻理|Mari
|51|麻理|Mari
|「[R取材対象^どうきゅうせい]に配慮した？<br>せっかく賞も取ってこれからって時に、<br>ネガティブなこと書いて足引っ張りたくなかった？」
|「[R取材対象^どうきゅうせい]に配慮した？<br>せっかく賞も取ってこれからって時に、<br>ネガティブなこと書いて足引っ張りたくなかった？」
|"Were you just being considerate of [Rthe person in question^your schoolmate]?<br>Did you think writing something negative right after her triumph overseas would be detrimental to her?"
|"Were you just being considerate of your schoolmate? Did you think writing something negative right after her triumph overseas would be detrimental to her?"
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|自分でやるって決めておきながら、<br>吹っ切るって決心しておきながら、<br>逃げて、逃げて、辿り着いたその果ての、最低の結果。
|自分でやるって決めておきながら、<br>吹っ切るって決心しておきながら、<br>逃げて、逃げて、辿り着いたその果ての、最低の結果。
|I decided to tackle it myself, to throw away my doubts and hesitations. <br>Yet I ran away from it all, and what I arrived at is the mess you see on those pages.
|I decided to tackle it myself, to throw away my doubts and hesitations. Yet I ran away from it all, and what I arrived at is the mess you see on those pages.
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|馬鹿だな、俺…
|馬鹿だな、俺…
|I'm... such an idiot...
|I'm... Such an idiot...
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|好きな人を傷つけて傷ついた最低な自分を、<br>自分のやりたかった事にまで持ち込むなんて。
|好きな人を傷つけて傷ついた最低な自分を、<br>自分のやりたかった事にまで持ち込むなんて。
|To think I let my awful self that hurt the one I love get in the way of what I wanted to do.
|To think I let my awful self that hurt the one I love get in the way of what I wanted to do...
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|59|麻理|Mari
|59|麻理|Mari
|「というわけで総没。<br>さて、どうする？」
|「というわけで総没。<br>さて、どうする？」
|"At any rate, this article is headed for the shredder. <br>Now then, how do you plan to proceed?"
|"At any rate, this article is headed for the shredder. Now then, how do you plan to proceed?"
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|63|麻理|Mari
|63|麻理|Mari
|「今回は最初からそういうのを望んでる。<br>今まで北原が勝手に履き違えてただけよ」
|「今回は最初からそういうのを望んでる。<br>今まで北原が勝手に履き違えてただけよ」
|"That's what I hoped to see from the start. <br>You've just been misunderstanding my intentions is all."
|"That's what I was hoping to see from the start. You must have been misunderstanding my intentions thus far."
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|65|麻理|Mari
|65|麻理|Mari
|「そんな危ない話が書けるなら大したもの。<br>その時は大喜びで破り捨ててあげるわ」
|「そんな危ない話が書けるなら大したもの。<br>その時は大喜びで破り捨ててあげるわ」
|"I don't mind if you manage come up with something that crazy. <br>I'll tear it up with a huge grin on my face."
|"I don't mind if you manage come up with something that crazy. I'll tear it up with a huge grin on my face if it comes to that."
|As in it wouldn't be used, but she'll be happy to see it.}}
|As in it wouldn't be used, but she'd be happy to see it.}}


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|68|春希|Haruki
|68|春希|Haruki
|「…わかりました」
|「…わかりました」
|"...I understand."
|"Understood."
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|76|春希|Haruki
|76|春希|Haruki
|「大丈夫です。<br>麻理さんの指摘は全部正しいですから。<br>…俺が気にしようが気にしまいが」
|「大丈夫です。<br>麻理さんの指摘は全部正しいですから。<br>…俺が気にしようが気にしまいが」
|"It's fine. <br>Mari-san's criticisms were all legitimate, whether I'm worried about it or not."
|"It's fine. Mari-san's criticism was all legitimate, whether I'm worried about it or not."
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|77|鈴木|Suzuki
|77|鈴木|Suzuki
|「…やっぱ気にしてんのね」
|「…やっぱ気にしてんのね」
|"...So you are worried about it."
|"... So you are worried about it."
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|…この人たちのこういう甘さがあるから、<br>麻理さんは安心して下に厳しくあたれるんだろうな。
|…この人たちのこういう甘さがあるから、<br>麻理さんは安心して下に厳しくあたれるんだろうな。
|...It's probably thanks to these caring people that Mari-san can be strict to her subordinates without worrying too much.
|... It's probably thanks to these caring people that Mari-san can be strict to her subordinates without worrying too much.
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|79|松岡|Matsuoka
|79|松岡|Matsuoka
|「な、北原、今から飲み行くか？<br>俺も今日デスクに色々言われちゃってさ、<br>お互い溜まってること吐き出そうぜ？」
|「な、北原、今から飲み行くか？<br>俺も今日デスクに色々言われちゃってさ、<br>お互い溜まってること吐き出そうぜ？」
|"Hey, Kitahara, want to go grab a beer? <br>I got booked by the chief today, too. <br>How about we go drown our frustrations with the good stuff?"
|"Hey, Kitahara, wanna go grab a drink? I got booked by the chief today, too. How about we go drown our frustrations with some good stuff?"
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|80|浜田|Hamada
|80|浜田|Hamada
|「お前は誰も帰っていいなんて言ってないぞ。<br>俺が頼んだ修正、ちゃんと今日中に終わるんだろうな？」
|「お前は誰も帰っていいなんて言ってないぞ。<br>俺が頼んだ修正、ちゃんと今日中に終わるんだろうな？」
|"Nobody gave you permission to leave. <br>Those edits I asked for, you'll have them ready by tonight, yes?"
|"Nobody gave you permission to leave. <br>You'll have those edits I asked for ready by tonight, yes?"
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|81|松岡|Matsuoka
|81|松岡|Matsuoka
|「…えっと、２５時頃駅前で待ち合わせにしない？<br>俺の愚痴が倍に増えそうなんで朝まで飲み明かそうぜ？」
|「…えっと、２５時頃駅前で待ち合わせにしない？<br>俺の愚痴が倍に増えそうなんで朝まで飲み明かそうぜ？」
|"...Umm, how about we meet up at the station around 1? <br>I'll probably have double the steam to blow by then so let's drink until the sun comes up."
|"... Umm, how about we meet up at the station around 1 AM? I'll probably have double the steam to blow by then so let's drink until the sun comes up."
|25 o'clock just means 1 a.m.}}
|25 o'clock just means 1 a.m.}}


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|82|春希|Haruki
|82|春希|Haruki
|「…いえ帰ります。<br>早速家で書き直しやりたいんで」
|「…いえ帰ります。<br>早速家で書き直しやりたいんで」
|"...No, I'll be heading home. <br>I want to hurry and start rewriting."
|"... No, I'll be heading home. <br>I want to hurry and start rewriting."
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|で、この人たちのこういう甘さがあるから、<br>麻理さんは下に厳しくせざるを得ないのかもしれない。
|で、この人たちのこういう甘さがあるから、<br>麻理さんは下に厳しくせざるを得ないのかもしれない。
|Or maybe it's because of these caring people that Mari-san has no choice but to be stricter to her subordinates.
|Or maybe it's because of these caring people that Mari-san has no choice but to be so strict to her subordinates.
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|84|浜田|Hamada
|84|浜田|Hamada
|「まぁ、根詰めるなよ？<br>どうしても進まなかったら相談乗るからさ」
|「まぁ、根詰めるなよ？<br>どうしても進まなかったら相談乗るからさ」
|"Just don't stress out about it too much. <br>If you still can't seem to make progress I can offer some advice."
|"Just don't stress out about it too much. <br>If you get stuck, I can offer some advice."
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|86|鈴木|Suzuki
|86|鈴木|Suzuki
|「お疲れ～」
|「お疲れ～」
|"Good work today~"
|"Good work today!"
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|それまでに、一週間かけて取材までした記事より、<br>内容で数倍上回る新しい記事を書き上げる。
|それまでに、一週間かけて取材までした記事より、<br>内容で数倍上回る新しい記事を書き上げる。
|Before those two days are up, I'll have to prepare an article more packed with content than a week's worth of interviewed comments.
|Before those two days are up, I'll have to prepare an article more packed with content than a week's worth of interview comments.
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|…問題は時間でも、ネタでもない。<br>そんなものはどっちも十分にある。
|…問題は時間でも、ネタでもない。<br>そんなものはどっちも十分にある。
|...The problem isn't with the time, nor the available content. <br>I have more than enough of both.
|... The problem isn't with the time, nor the available content. I have more than enough of both.
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