Editing Talk:High School DxD:Volume 4 Life 5 (section)

== Grammar Corrections ==

I've corrected some paragraphs, following the flow of previous chapters/volumes. I'm still confused whenever — should be changed to … or deleted. I'm afraid that — its used to open a dialog, but we use quotations marks whenever a Character talks (except for Ddraig and Albion inside the Sacred Gears), thus inside "" mustn't used (ex. “—! Impossible, they’ve transferred here!”). I'll keep an eye on these to ease the work of editors.--[[User:Braiam|Braiam]] 03:56, 22 April 2012 (CDT)

Hmm, I see your point. Personally, I think that using "—" is fine, since it basically represents a short pause of breath, and in the case of "—!", it just shows a dramatic moment of silence or shocked intake of breath. Still, I understand that it does look a bit awkward in English writing. Well, for now I'll simply keep adding it to remain as close to the original text as possible, and should the main editors decide to change it, I won't raise any complaints. Could you leave it be until then? --[[User:Eternal Dreamer|Eternal Dreamer]] 06:37, 22 April 2012 (CDT)

Also, please don't change narration that starts with "—" into speech passages. It's still Issei's first person narration even if it starts with —, okay? And the "Kah" is narration, so don't displace it and turn it into speech. (I'm changing back the changes you made there.) I respect your right to edit, but these line breaks were in the original text, so I don't want to simply get rid of them unless I'm explicitly told to by Code-Zero and the other editors. --[[User:Eternal Dreamer|Eternal Dreamer]] 06:53, 22 April 2012 (CDT)