Editing Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 8 Chapter 6 (section)

== To Unknown Person,==
# It is Okaa-sama or some variation of mother not Aunt
# It is parka-a type of jacket, not parker.
# Even if you are not going to register, you should probably read the General Format/Style Guideline and follow them out of courtesy to the editors
[[User:Sashiko|Sashiko]] ([[User talk:Sashiko|talk]]) 22:37, 25 February 2013 (CST)


I am sorry if I came off as rude but when I saw that you had not registered I thought whoever it was might be even more of a novice than me. I am still in the process of figuring out how to do the things listed there. For example, I should have probably requested help with the monkey metaphor I omitted in Presidential Elections and the Queen. And I know that have alot to be thankful for them since after when I go over my own work I am still finding a lot of simple punctuation errors and spots where I forgot to write an important clause or wrote mad when I meant made.[[User:Sashiko|Sashiko]] ([[User talk:Sashiko|talk]]) 23:18, 25 February 2013 (CST)

I only have a suggestion. When reading CH 6, I did not know when the time changed happened. May be it is just me. It would do for easier reading to put a marker that time in the story has shifted to the past. Just a thought, don't have to do it. But great work overall. I love it! --[[User:Popocatepetl|popocatepetl]] ([[User talk:Popocatepetl|talk]]) 13:16, 5 March 2013 (CST)

: It's at the start of the chapter? The 2092AD bit. You only have to remember two years 2095AD = present and 2092 = past. All the jumps in time have also be sectioned off as chapters (so the story doesn't time jump mid-chapter), that's why the chapters maybe short and why there are many of them. --[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 13:26, 5 March 2013 (CST)

My bad, I am still new to this format and I tend to be clueless. Thanks for the tip.