Editing Talk:Mushoku Tensei:Web Chapter 82 (section)

== Edits Made ==

* Added headers and subheaders

* In the Garden of plants where the blossoming white flowers were collected. (Capitalized plants)

* also known as, The Garden of White Lilies. (Capitalized also)

* instantly kills the guard of the princess (changed kills to killed)

* protected the princess' life (added s after ')

* Such as thing happening (as to a)

* A Demon appearing in the Royal Palace is an unprecedented incident. (is to was)

* who is charge of the Royal Palace's defense (added in after is)

* it's tentative collapse. (it's to its)

* It is a matter of course to receive well the hero (switched well and receive)('''Maybe change in future to warmly instead of well?''')

* well, The second princess Ariel (lowercase the for The)

* would not (contracted to wouldn't)

* time, The Princess and Luke would both be dead (The to the)

* Among those questions asked was,  (was to were)

* [If the Princess say so.] (say to says)

Give me a sec be right back, computer problems

* Changed Sylphie to Sylphy a couple of time

* His soft smiling face makes one relieved. (makes to made)

* He was possessed of such pride. (of to by) Alternative could be removing was and of

* Still to this day there was the child in Buina village who glanced at her with hostility. (was the child to were children)

* Oh, What's this? (What's to what's)

* You are still too young for something like this, Give it up already!] (Give to give)

* From here, It starts from here!] (It to it)

* I am sorry, Have I given you reason to be afraid? (Have to have)

* Still, If you will allow me to (If to if)

* You of the beautiful White-washed Hair (White to white and Hair to hair)

* he meant by White-washed hair (White to white)

* Luke who was no longer necessary to be made to keep her company (removed to be made)

* Fittoa Territory (changed to Fedoa Region since Name Guidelines)

* daughter of the Hunter in Buena Village, and who learned magic from my friend Rudei. (the Hunter to a hunter, removed who and Rudei to Rudi)

* A story, A genius boy, who defeated the minions of the Senior Minister. (A genius boy to a genius boy)

* A story, A genius boy, who the Sword King Ghyslaine acknowledged superiority. (^ same as above)

* A story, He who managed the Boreas' violent daughter, (He to he)

* Most, if any of the story is true. (Changed Most to Well)(Feedback for this would be helpful)

* If Sylphiette said that she was not that Genius boy (Genius to genius)

* The real name of that Genius is Rudeus Greyrat (^ same as above)

* When the Full Name was spoken, a [Hm?] was uttered and many nobles puzzled. (Full Name to full name and were added after nobles)

* And this it is allowed for those mistress' to call themselves Greyrat. (this to thus and mistress' to mistresses)

* There decided that the names of the four protected sides they would be called by would be: (There to They)

* Notos, Boreas, Euros, Zephyrus. (added and after Euros, since it's a list)

* However, Though an ordinary name (Though to though)

* That he started out with with the Boreas (removed extra with)

* Sauros' so-called illigitimate child (Sauros' to Sauros's)

* struggle was of far more important than anything trivial, (important to importance)

* News about the disappearane of Fittoa Territory (Fittoa Territory to Fedoa Region)

* They reported on the situation and the nearest town. (and to at)

* A second knight succeeds the first, continues on a horse without rest for a day, and relays the information to the next big city. (succeeds to succeeded, continues to continuing, and relays to relayed)

* Everyone became missing. (became to was)



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