Editing Talk:Seikai no Senki:Volume4 Chapter1 (section)

== Crosschecking with Japanese text ==

Since the chapter was translated from Chinese there are some discrepancies with the Japanese original in it. I found some (absolutely no guarantee that I found all of them) and corrected, with great help of Almael. Here's a list of what I changed:

- "Ion cannons" replced with "laser cannons";

- Gurinshia changed from male to female;

- The text correction (missing line added): from

:<small>"Captain, you can stop teasing me," replied Arubofu, "This also pertains to my life as well!"

:"Just thinking about my own insignificant life has already overwhelmed me!" Arubofu explains.</small>

to

:<small>"Captain, you can stop teasing me," replied Arubofu, "This also pertains to my life as well!"

:"And my life doesn't matter?" Ekuryua interjected.

:"Just thinking about my own insignificant life has already overwhelmed me!" Arubofu explained.</small>

- The text correction: from

:<small>"Is it repairable?" Lafiel asks Gurinshia.

:"Negative." The chief engineer answered without hesitation.

:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu took the initiative and shouldered the blame.</small>

to

:<small>"Is it repairable?" Lafiel asks Gurinshia.

:"Negative." The chief engineer answered without hesitation.

:"I guess." Lafiel glanced at the gunnery officer.

:"Forget it, there are always other ways." Arubofu refuted.</small>


So, the versions before 26th August are pure translations from Chinese and the version of 26th August is a translation from Chinese partially crosschecked and corrected with the Japanese original.

--[[User:Ushwood|Ushwood]] 14:31, 26 August 2011 (CDT)


Okay, since Japanese-crosschecked version was separated to its own page, I undid the changes I made here.--[[User:Ushwood|Ushwood]] 05:46, 27 August 2011 (CDT)