Editing User talk:Magykalman (section)

== Oda Nobuna==
Some of the sentences need tweaking, I'll have a go through them when I am free. Also try and keep the sentence tense the same. For example I noticed you changed 'become' to 'becoming'. I am undoing the updates as of now.

Kcan. Just that I thought that it would be better. ^.^ it's okay if you changed it back. But erm...who are you? --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 15:32 7 September 2012 (CDT)

Oh yeah. Means I stop editing for now? --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 15:40 7 September 2012 (CDT)

Nah, it's good that you're doing it, but each series has a different style required for editing. I'll approve your edits once I have a go through them, I have been extremely busy over the past week due to RL stuff --[[User:Akuma|Akuma]] ([[User talk:Akuma|talk]]) 05:05, 8 September 2012 (CDT)

Okie. ^^ will get back after finish translating a chapter of Denpa. :) And good luck to your RL stuff. :D 
--[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 20:35, 8 September 2012 (CDT)

Actually I think it is still needed, unless you change "helmet" to something else. For example, if you change the order of "helmet" and "armor" in the sentence, "She wasn't wearing helmet or any armor" would be incorrect, but "She wasn't wearing a helmet or any armor" would be correct. You could also change it to "She wasn't wearing any armor or her helmet" or add another modifier. This would also apply to any other singular noun that Nobuna might have. Plural nouns would be okay without an "a". For example, "She wasn't wearing any armor or gear" would be okay because "gear" can be plural and refer to multiple items, but "She wasn't wearing any armor or sword" would require an "a" or the change of "sword" into "swords". A noun like "helmet" in the sentence does not require a modifier like "a" if it is a proper noun like a person's name, if it's a plural noun like "helmets", or if it's a mass noun like "information". Sorry for the long wall of text, we can ask Akuma or someone if we still disagree on this.
[[User:Sab|Sab]] ([[User talk:Sab|talk]]) 11:05, 23 September 2012 (CDT)

Ah hi there. Sorry it took me so long to reply. Kinda busy this period. It's okay. I don't mind the long wall of text. And I'm also not arguing with you for the sake of 1 letter. But I think it would still be better to ask from a higher personal or seek higher guidance. I mean, I can say it -- I'm not all that good in English, it's not my first language, so I think it would be better to seek guidance. But can you wait till 18 Oct when I'm back to write to Akuma or someone else? [[User:Chancs|Chancs]] ([[User talk:Chancs|talk]]) maybe? He is very good. :D Cause apparently I wouldn't be in. :( And thanks to even take the time to write that long wall of text :D that shows that you really care. :D p.s. Why not become an editor for real? :D --[[user:Magykalman|Magykalman]] 21:39 25 September 2012 (UTC+8)

Hi again, sorry for my delay in replying as well. Sure, we can wait until you're back, just remind me or I'll probably forget about doing it. I can't scan my grammar textbook for you, but I can link you some additional information on why I made the change if that would help.
P.S. I'm already editing Accel World; if an admin adds me to a project, that's fine, but otherwise I don't really care whether I'm credited as a project editor or not :S
[[User:Sab|Sab]] ([[User talk:Sab|talk]]) 02:24, 9 October 2012 (CDT)