Editing Nura Rihan Talk:Mayo Chiki! (section)

===Chapter 2 Editing===

I have edited what we have so far of Chapter 2. I do have some questions about what the following lines mean.


'''While entering this year, I should have died and turned in 5 pieces already.'''

'''Normally, you would be resuscitated from the unanimated state at once.'''

'''Unfortunately, a little sister who fall at that point isn’t kind. Taking my futon in an incredible speed, that way deciding my movements with the flow.''' 

'''I can revolt myself with this little thing.'''

I changed "'''I acted spoiled to her courtesy'''" to "'''I took advantage of her courtesy'''". Is this fine?

'''“You have the rights to be hit by that!”''' 

'''“I will pass this time. You should let this right for the end of the year, for the people that ‘took care of you’.”''' 


Thanks.

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 21:30, 24 September 2013 (CDT)

:'''While entering this year, I should have died and turned in 5 pieces already.'''

::I don't know how to put it well, but he said that he would have died, and cuted in 5 pieces, like bronken in 5 pieces, can be interpreted this way
 
:'''Normally, you would be resuscitated from the unanimated state at once.'''

::I don't really know why do I put unanimated state, but he wanted to say that he would be resucited in one blow, like "isshun desa".

:'''Unfortunately, a little sister who fall at that point isn’t kind. Taking my futon in an incredible speed, that way deciding my movements with the flow.''' 

::Well, I think this one I really made a mess, he is wanting to say that she isn't kind, because she gone as far as jumping from that far for hit him. And that she took his futon and controlled his movements, because he's wrapped around it.

:'''I can revolt myself with this little thing.'''

::It was supposed to be '''can't'''.

:I changed "'''I acted spoiled to her courtesy'''" to "'''I took advantage of her courtesy'''". Is this fine?

::Yes

:'''“You have the rights to be hit by that!”''' 

::Subaru wanted to say, like he had earn the rights, like buying the license of something.

:'''“I will pass this time. You should let this right for the end of the year, for the people that ‘took care of you’.”''' 

::I also don't really understand this one, I will be back soon when I get some help *Runs away to not be lynched*

:--[[User:Nura rihan|Nura rihan]] ([[User talk:Nura rihan|talk]]) 21:12, 25 September 2013 (CDT)

:::Now the last doubt is fixed, it was just my bad skills showing up.

:::--[[User:Nura rihan|Nura rihan]] ([[User talk:Nura rihan|talk]]) 21:52, 25 September 2013 (CDT)


Okay, all of the problems have been edited...except for the last one, which I still don't understand. 

'''“No, I will pass this time. You should let this right to the people who helped you through the year.”''' 

Does this mean that the people that helped her have the right to be hit by her amnesia technique? This doesn't make sense...

-- [[User:神|神]] ([[User talk:神|talk]]) 22:46, 25 September 2013 (CDT)

:Jirou is trying to do a little joke there. That is not meant to have sense, I also asked to 2 other people, but they couldn't think anyway but that. 

P.S. how do you think about the change, I'm re-thinking about it, tell me you thoughts, about the Gakuen - Academy.
:--[[User:Nura rihan|Nura rihan]] ([[User talk:Nura rihan|talk]]) 22:54, 25 September 2013 (CDT)