Editing Talk:IS:Volume6 Chapter1 (section)

==TL-Note 2==
Once you're finished helping let's once again together....(T/N note : The Japanese sentence structure enable this sentence to be cut before saying the verb, unlike the English language structure. Any idea how to fix it without removing the "again"?)" 

:Would it work as ''Once you're finished helping let's once again do together....'' ? --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 10:43, 16 February 2011 (UTC)

Well, it could work I guess. I'm not sure what kind of sentence would sound natural in English, but the point is the original sentence doesn't use any verb at all while retaining the "again"(although the author implicitly means that Ichika was going to invite Houki to hang around together again after she's finished helping before his words gets cut.) Just change it as you see fit since I'm not that fluent in English XD -- [[User:Kuroi shinigami|Kuroi shinigami]] 22:52,18 February 2011 (GMT+7)

:That "lets's" is in the origin? I think to keep that "again" wouldnt be that big of a problem, if there were other parts which could be removed. (Which elements has the origin sentence really? Would that work if that "together" is gone?: "When you're finished helping, once again we..." - And where she repeats that last part of the sentence could be "Once again..." ;) --[[User:Darklor|Darklor]] 05:23, 19 February 2011 (UTC)


That "let's" is not in the origin, but from the flow of the conversation, Ichika is inviting Houki, that's why I add the "let's". The "together" on the other hand is in the original sentence, but I guess using we should already cover the "together" so that can be removed. If I translate it into "When you're finished helping, let's once again...", will it imply that Ichika is asking Houki to go together with him?--[[User:Kuroi shinigami|&#91;&#91;User:Kuroi shinigami&#124;Kuroi shinigami&#93;&#93;]] 06:28, 19 February 2011 (UTC)