Editing Talk:IS:Volume6 Chapter1 (section)

==Diction&word choice==
I've marked several part where I'm not sure about the words I use. Could ''editor no minna-san'' helps check the part I mark with '''T/N note''' and either change that part to a more suitable word or just erase the T/N note if they think it is good enough? Thanks. ^^ [[User:Kuroi shinigami|Kuroi shinigami]] 22:52,18 February 2011 (GMT+7)

Kuro, I have a suggestion to demarcate the pages, especially those where you have problems. like this <nowiki><!-- PG ## --></nowiki>, it'll be easier to cross-check the raws. --[[User:Larethian|Larethian]] 16:28, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

Sure, or maybe I should write the original Japanese word too so it will be even easier? --[[User:Kuroi shinigami|Kuroi shinigami]] 10:58,19 February 2011 (GMT+7)

Hmm...I just will tell you what i honestly think about a few lines, to be honest i´m quite busy to do any elaborate work here so i guess this is just the least i can do....  
:-That was a complete burst of anger, but that day, Houki's mind keep wandering into that thought until she sleeps. 
:"...until she falls asleep" or "...until she finally falls asleep", there will be times where you´l have to add words or verbs to a translation to give it a better context or make it more simple so that the meaning can be expressed, the idea is that she was quite frustrated and though about it until she fell asleep so any of those phrases would do the trick. 
:-Her personality...could be described as wild, or likes to do as she pleases(T/N note : how do you say a personality that likes to do as he/she pleases? ><). She's a very cat-like person.                                                                                            Whimsycal or spontaneous, it depends, though i figure the former is more apropiate.                                                            
:-"Aha. Ecchi.(T/N note : is it better to keep it as "ecchi" or is it better to change it to pervert?)"                                                                                                                                     Well, i think that most of the people that reads novels here, know what that means so it´s just about which term you prefer, as for me i´ll say leave it as it is it sounds better. 
[[User:Caramu|Caramu]] 16:37, 18 February 2011 (UTC)

Thank you. Whimsical is the word I'm looking for.--[[User:Kuroi shinigami|Kuroi shinigami]] 10:58,19 February 2011 (GMT+7)