Editing User talk:Akuma (section)

== Oda Nobuna no Yabou Editing ==

Erm hi. Magykalman here. Requesting permission to edit Extract: "By the time he realized it, for some reason he was standing right in the middle of a battlefield during the Warring States period." into "By the time he realized it, he was standing right in the middle of a battlefield during the Warring States period." I've tried fitting the "For some reason" part into different places, but it seemed like the best way was to take it out...So just wondering if you want it changed. Have not edited yet, so don't worry. :) Oh and I think I'll only be requesting permission for major changes, so the minor ones, .... :P  --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 14:15, 7 September 2012 (CDT)


Ah yeah here again. I think I found this extract awkward, so maybe you would like to change it a little. Cause I don't know how the original looks like... Here's the extract: "The location can be found out later but it’s in the Nobi Plains." I don't really think that this sentence is fitting into the passage and kinda found it...weird. So maybe you can help check again if you're free. Thanks! And sorry if it's a little anoying for you to keep receiving these... Just want to make the novel better... :) --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 14:17, 7 September 2012 (CDT)

Hi again boss. Requesting permission to change extract: "Yoshiharu had received the nickname of “Ball avoiding Yoshi” in his dodgeball class and is good at running away." into "Yoshiharu had always been good at running away, and even received the nickname "Ball avoiding Yoshi".  --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 14:17, 7 September 2012 (CDT)

Argh. Never mind. I think I've changed a lot, and maybe too much that I'll spam this whole place if I put it here, so you may just want to re-look into Volume 1 chapter 1 again... Sorry for the trouble caused. --[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 14:30, 7 September 2012 (CDT)

Do-Done...Took me an hour and a half to complete editing just chapter one...Really, I wonder if anyone had edited it at all... T.T 
Urgh. I think I can't edit that much anymore... T.T
--[[User:Magykalman|Magykalman]] ([[User talk:Magykalman|talk]]) 15:30, 7 September 2012 (CDT)