Editing Baka to Tesuto to Syokanju:Volume1 The Third Question
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Actually, this really was nothing special. If I could order my Being freely, it would be a wonderfully useful ability. Even a relatively weak Being, summoned by someone with a low score like mine, had much more power than a human could dream of. Crushing a rock is as simple as ABC. |
Actually, this really was nothing special. If I could order my Being freely, it would be a wonderfully useful ability. Even a relatively weak Being, summoned by someone with a low score like mine, had much more power than a human could dream of. Crushing a rock is as simple as ABC. |
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− | Sadly, I was never able to benefit from it; if anything, it caused the opposite result. |
+ | Sadly, though, I was never able to benefit from it; if anything, it caused the opposite result. |
The Being could only be used under a teacher's supervision, and teachers would only allow me to summon it when they needed it for heavy work: that was the truth. And to me, there was no benefit at all. Since it can be used only while under a teacher's supervision, I almost never get the chance to use it for my own purposes. |
The Being could only be used under a teacher's supervision, and teachers would only allow me to summon it when they needed it for heavy work: that was the truth. And to me, there was no benefit at all. Since it can be used only while under a teacher's supervision, I almost never get the chance to use it for my own purposes. |
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"That's right. I need to break you in." |
"That's right. I need to break you in." |
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− | "'Break me in'? Shouldn't you use words like 'train' or 'tutor |
+ | "'Break me in'? Shouldn't you use words like 'train' or 'tutor?'" <!-- this sentence could use some help... --><!-- maybe use indoctrinate, instruct, teach, or educate instead? I believe the German word directly translates to "break" --> |
"Then I'll pick the one in the middle, and use ''Züchtigung'' instead." |
"Then I'll pick the one in the middle, and use ''Züchtigung'' instead." |