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===Part 1===
 
===Part 1===
   
In the center of a dim room, a pale white light had been lit. It was a transparent sphere floating in empty space and was about the size of a human head. Rather than electrons, the borne light was made by magic utilising alchemical techniques.
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In the center of a dim room, a pale white light had been lit. It was a transparent sphere floating in empty space with the size of a human head. Rather than electrons, the borne light was made by a magic with the technique of alchemy etched as a name.
   
The sphere, which was hanging in the air as if set on an invisible pedestal, was surrounded by five figures.
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The sphere, which was hanging in the air as if there was invisible pedestal, was surrounded by five figures.
   
One was a petite girl wearing a full length robe. Beautiful platinum blonde hair was overflowing from the hood she wore, sparkling like sunlight as it was struck by the bland light.
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One was a petite girl wearing a full length robe. Beautiful platinum blonde was overflowing from the hood she put on, sparkling like sunlight as it was struck by the bland light.
   
Standing next to her was an even more petite silhouette. Its height was about that of a human child, but its appearance was like a bipedal cat. The tail protruding from its back was long, the odd thing was that it branched into two.
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Standing next to her was an even more petite silhouette. Its body height was about as tall as a human children, but the appearance was like a bipedal cat. The tail on the back was long. The odd thing was that it branched into two.
   
The third figure, in contrast to the other two, was a tall, middle-aged man wearing a grumpy look. He was wearing a refined attire including a high quality shirt and vest, but they couldn't hide the glimpses of the sturdy build underneath.
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On to the next one. In contrast, this time it was a middle-aged tall man with grumpy looks. He wore a refined attire with high quality shirt and vest, but they didn't hid the glimpses of his sturdy build underneath.
   
Standing in line with him was a tall man of a similar height, but with a far thinner figure. Standing with both hands inserted into the pockets of his long coat, he wore a low hood that meant even his eyes were hidden in shadow.
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Standing in line with him was a tall man with height approximately the same with the middle-aged man, but with far thinner figure. Standing with both of his hands inserted into the pockets of his long coat, he wore a low hood that made even his eyes hidden in the shadow.
   
And then giving each of them glances as they stared at the sphere, another girl stood. Long hair crossed over her waist, her skin was white enough to be called transparent. Her most obvious feature was the large triangular hat placed on her head.
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And then looking like giving them glances when they stared at the sphere, another girl stood. A long hair crossing over her waist, skin white enough to be called transparent. The most standing out was a large triangular hat placed on her head.
   
 
Her name was Nine.
 
Her name was Nine.
   
The thin man was Yuuki Terumi.
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The previous thin man was Yuuki Terumi.
   
 
The middle-aged man was Valkenhayn R. Hellsing.
 
The middle-aged man was Valkenhayn R. Hellsing.
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The platinum blonde girl was Trinity Glassfille.
 
The platinum blonde girl was Trinity Glassfille.
   
They stood silently in thought while staring at the sphere. Inside it, the shifting images of the current world situations were being projected.
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They gave each of their thoughts to as they were staring at the sphere. Inside it, the shifting of the current world situations were projected alternately.
   
"...So far, the representatives of many nations which have met with catastrophe are currently taking refuge in Ishana. There are preparation to devise a plan for the cooperation of each nation, with Ishana as the focus."
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"...So far, the representatives of many nations that are in catastrophe are currently taking refuge in Ishana. There are preparation to devise a plan for the cooperation of each nations with Ishana as the focus."
   
In the silent room, Trinity began to talk in her slow, soft voice that was like a ripple unfolding on water. Responding to her voice, the images of those catastrophe ridden countries were floating and disappearing in turn.
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In the silent room, Trinity began to talk with her slow, soft voice that was like unfolding ripple on water. Responding to her voice, the images of those catastrophic countries were floating and disappearing in turn.
   
Frowning with a sad expression for a moment behind those spectacles, Trinity pushed up her large round glasses up her nose a little and continued on.
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Frowning with sad expression for a moment toward those spectacles, Trinity pushed up her large round glasses for a bit and continued on.
   
"However as for the countries with relatively low damage, the nations are being cautious to ensure they participate in the efforts centered on Ishana. As yet, discussions are still ongoing and have yet to reach a conclusion as there are countries that do not deign to participate in the congress. No, if there's still no conclusion, then it's still okay but..."
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"However as for the countries with relatively low damage, the nations are being caution to have them participating in their policies that's centered in Ishana. As yet, the dialogue are still going on and has yet to reach conclusion as there are countries that denied participating in the congress. No, if there's still no conclusion, then it's still okay but..."
   
"So a confrontation is growing between the countries that have representatives in Ishana and those that don't. ...Even though this isn't the situation for quarreling between mankind."
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"So a confrontation is growing between the countries that have representatives in Ishana with those that don't. ...Even though this isn't the situation for quarreling between fellow mankind."
   
Taking over Trinity's sorrowful words, Valkenhayn spoke with a grimace. Looking at him with his large eyes, Jubei's cat mouth snickered.
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Taking over Trinity's sorrowful words, Valkenhayn spoke in grimace. Looking at him with his large eyes, Jubei's cat mouth snickered.
   
 
"There ain't gonna be any fair arguing. They're the lucky chaps. It's just natural."
 
"There ain't gonna be any fair arguing. They're the lucky chaps. It's just natural."
   
There was a degree of discomfort in the clear male voice of the beast, but no one in the room took it to mind.
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There was a somewhat discomfort in the clear male voice of the beast, but no one in the room kept it in mind.
   
Gazing at the shining sphere, the bridge of Jubei's nose wrinkled.
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Gazing at the shining sphere, Jubei's lower nose bridge wrinkled.
   
"They ain't gonna understand unless they see with their own eyes. About the terror... of ''The Black Beast''."
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"They ain't gonna understand unless they see with their own eyes. About the terror... of ''Black Beast''."
   
The Black Beast.
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Black Beast.
   
Seven years ago... between 2099 and 2100 AD, it appeared. A monster similar to a gigantic mass of shadow.
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Seven years ago... between 2099 to 2100 AD, it appeared. A monster similar to a gigantic mass of shadow.
   
Together with the appearance of the Black Beast, the world was filled with substance called ''seithr''. Guided by seithr, the Black Beast's destructive scars were marked all over the world starting with Japan.
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Together with the appearance of Black Beast, the world was filled with substance called ''seithr''. Guided by seithr, Black Beast's destructive scars were marked all over the world starting with Japan.
   
Without any means to fight, humanity was driven back. In merely six years after the Black Beast's appearance, the total population of the world was decreased by half.
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Without any means to fight, humanity got driven away. In merely six years after Black Beast appeared, the total population got decreased in half.
   
But last year, the last day of 2106 AD. At the very same day that marked seven years had passed since the Black Beast emerged. As quickly as the monster which terrorized the world emerged, it was suddenly gone.
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But last year, the last day of 2106 AD. At the very same day that marked seven years had passed since Black Beast emerged. The same like when the monster which terrorized the world emerged, it was suddenly gone.
   
"It has been eight months since the last appearance of that monster. This long absence of its activity must have dulled the nations' judgment. Among them, there are people beginning to appear who say the Black Beast is no more."
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"It has been eight months since the last appearance of that monster. This too much of an inactivity must have dulled the nations' judgment. Among them, the people who say Black Beast is no more are beginning to appear."
   
 
Valkenhayn lowly groaned as if to suppress his resentment.
 
Valkenhayn lowly groaned as if to suppress his resentment.
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Trinity gently pressed her chest and slightly drew her chin.
 
Trinity gently pressed her chest and slightly drew her chin.
   
"The threat hasn't disappeared yet... Even now the seithr mist is still blowing throughout the world. The remnants of the Black Beast are also still threatening people..."
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"The threat hasn't disappeared yet... Even now the seithr mist is still blowing throughout the world. The remnants of Black Beast are also threatening people..."
   
"Not gettin' the cooperation of the countries means the cooperation between Ishana and United Nations ain't going well. The investigation for the missing 'Kushinada's Lynchpin' is still going on. But since the UN's planning to do it their own way, gettin' intelligence is complicated."
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"Not gettin' the cooperation of the countries means the cooperation between Ishana and United Nations ain't going well. The investigation for the missing 'Kushinada's Lynchpin' is still going on. But since the UN's planning to do it with their ways, gettin' intelligence is complicated."
   
Jubei spoke in words mixed with sighs while the long tails on his back swayed, alert. At the same time, the floating lengthy image stirred in the sphere.
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Jubei spoke with sighs mixed in while the long tails on his back swayed in alert. At the same time, the floating lengthy image stirred in the sphere.
   
 
"...Eight months."
 
"...Eight months."
   
A noise from the five extending shadows resounded. A sharp, cold voice muttered. A large triangular hat stood out. It was Nine.
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A noise from the five extending shadows was resounded. Sharp, cold voice muttered. A large triangular hat was awfully standing out. It was Nine.
   
Staring at the sphere floating in the air, Nine folded her arms under her voluptuous chest and supported her chin with her fingers as she pondered.
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Staring at the sphere floating in air, Nine folded her arms under her voluptuous chest and supported her chin with her fingers as she pondered.
   
 
She recalled a certain man. Eight months ago, they met on the day of Black Beast's last appearance and parted with him on the very same day.
 
She recalled a certain man. Eight months ago, they met on the day of Black Beast's last appearance and parted with him on the very same day.
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——''One year. During that time, get the strength needed for humanity to battle the Black Beast.''
 
——''One year. During that time, get the strength needed for humanity to battle the Black Beast.''
   
Nine remembered clearly the words she had heard eight months ago, down to his tone of voice. No, those words didn't become clearer as the days went by. Day by day... as the period where the disappearance of Black Beast continued, she realized that he spoke the truth.
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Nine remembered clearly the words she had heard eight months ago, down to his tone of voice. No, those words didn't become clearer as day went by. Day by day... as the period where the disappearance of Black Beast continued, she realized that he was saying the truth.
   
There were still four months until the pronounced one year ended. If a year passed, it would likely, surely appear.
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There were still four months until the pronounced one year ended. If it had passed, it would likely, surely to appear.
   
 
"No conventional weapons could be used against Black Beast. Even if in the future some immensely powerful weapons were made, they wouldn't hurt the Black Beast. ...Isn't that so?"
 
"No conventional weapons could be used against Black Beast. Even if in the future some immensely powerful weapons were made, they wouldn't hurt the Black Beast. ...Isn't that so?"
   
Nine's sharply pointed voice was like putting ice on the stretched string of the room's tension.
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Nine's sharply pointed voice was like she put ice on the stretched string of the room's tension.
   
Beside the owner of the voice, stood a man. He wore a low hood that hid his expression and he hadn't opened his mouth until now. He was Yuuki Terumi.
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Beside the owner of the voice, stood a man. He wore a low hood that hid his expression and hadn't been talking nor opened his mouth until now. He was Yuuki Terumi.
   
His mouth, his only facial feature exposed by the dim light, began to speak.
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The mouth on his face which was exposed by the sole light plainly answered.
   
 
"Yeah, that's right."
 
"Yeah, that's right."
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"With the exception of ''magic'', hurting that monster requires utilizing seithr."
 
"With the exception of ''magic'', hurting that monster requires utilizing seithr."
   
"Eyyup. ...Also, don't make me explain the same thing over and over. You getting senile, bitch?"
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"Eyyup. ...Also, don't make me explain the same thing over and over. You grown old, bitch?"
   
 
He spat out a curse since he was getting tired of it. Then Nine scowled sternly and shot him a death stare.
 
He spat out a curse since he was getting tired of it. Then Nine scowled sternly and shot him a death stare.
   
But she immediately shook off the fury from her gaze and turned to the other direction, her hair spinning.
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But she immediately shook off the fury from her gaze and turned to the other direction with her hair fluttered.
   
 
"The means to attack Black Beast by utilizing seithr, ''armagus'', is almost complete."
 
"The means to attack Black Beast by utilizing seithr, ''armagus'', is almost complete."
   
"Armagus... If I remember correctly, it could make normal people who ain't a mage able to use magic. "
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"Armagus... If I remember correctly, it could make normal people who ain't mage to use magic. "
   
 
"It's a little different."
 
"It's a little different."
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Toward Jubei's admiration, Nine slightly slackened her mouth and answered.
 
Toward Jubei's admiration, Nine slightly slackened her mouth and answered.
   
"The fundamentals of magic and armagus are different. Magic borrows the spiritual power that's originally present in nature and then puts that to use. In regard to armagus, it's invoked by utilizing seithr. If there's no seithr, it can't be used. Since ordinary people can't handle seithr, a ''grimoire'' is necessary to make it feasible."
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"The fundamentals of magic and armagus are different. Magic borrows the spiritual power that's originally present in nature and then put it to use. In regard to armagus, it's invoked by utilizing seithr. If there's no seithr, it can't be used. Since ordinary people can't handle seithr, the ''grimoire'' is necessary to make it feasible."
   
 
"Grimoire?"
 
"Grimoire?"
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The one who tilted her head slightly as she asked was Trinity. Nine slightly nodded.
 
The one who tilted her head slightly as she asked was Trinity. Nine slightly nodded.
   
"Although I said grimoire, it doesn't mean that's the real form. It changes the gathered seithr in the armagus, kind of like a converter. Anyway, it makes it possible for even people outside Ishana to attack the Black Beast."
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"Although I said grimoire, it doesn't mean that's the real form. It changes the gathered seithr in armagus, kind of like a converter. Anyway, it makes it possible for even people outside Ishana to attack Black Beast."
   
 
Answering without pause, Nine shifted her gaze for an instant, stealing a glance of the man next to her.
 
Answering without pause, Nine shifted her gaze for an instant, stealing a glance of the man next to her.
   
The development of armagus had begun approximately half a year ago. Nine was the one who had fabricated armagus' base theory, but Terumi was indispensable in completing it in such a short amount of time.
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The development of armagus had begun approximately half a year ago. Nine was the one who had fabricated armagus' basis theory, but Terumi was indispensable to complete it in a short time.
   
Terumi possessed massive knowledge regarding the Black Beast and seithr. It was because of that knowledge that establishing armagus' form was possible.
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Terumi possessed a massive knowledge regarding Black Beast and seithr. It was because of that knowledge that establishing armagus' form was possible.
   
 
Again, Nine recalled the words of the man she had met eight months ago. He had also said something else. That she should watch out for Yuuki Terumi.
 
Again, Nine recalled the words of the man she had met eight months ago. He had also said something else. That she should watch out for Yuuki Terumi.
   
Nine had heeded those words, yet she had taken Terumi out from the deep basement of a certain castle. She also had firmly applied ''Mind Eater'', a magic that made him completely unable to defy its user, controlling over his will.
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Nine had heard those words, yet she had taken out Terumi from the deep basement of a certain castle. She also had firmly applied ''Mind Eater'', a magic that made him completely unable to defy its user, controlling over his will.
   
"But although I said ordinary people can use it, it doesn't really mean that anyone can do it. An aptitude is required in themselves. The manufacturing of the grimoire is going well, but there's an insufficient number of people who could use it. If it remains as it is, the counter measure for Black Beast would be imperfect. If possible, it should be a powerful measure, rather than being able to exhibit strength without having to be bound with seithr. For example..."
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"But although I said ordinary people can use it, it doesn't really mean that anyone can do it. An aptitude is required in themselves. The manufacturing of grimoire is going well, but there's insufficient number of people who could use it. If it remains as it is, the counter measure for Black Beast would be imperfect. If possible, it should be a powerful measure, rather than being able to exhibit strength without having to be bound with seithr. For example..."
   
"Like the weapons we use?"
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"Like the weapon we use?"
   
 
Jubei held out a single sword on his back. The sword that came out of the dark had been given to him by Nine about one month ago.
 
Jubei held out a single sword on his back. The sword that came out of the dark had been given to him by Nine about one month ago.
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Of course, it wasn't an ordinary sword. It was a specially made article that had alchemy and magic's techniques included in its making. Instead of clearing away a certain mass of seithr, the sharp blade could cut it up.
 
Of course, it wasn't an ordinary sword. It was a specially made article that had alchemy and magic's techniques included in its making. Instead of clearing away a certain mass of seithr, the sharp blade could cut it up.
   
Similarly, Trinity also held out the specialized weapon Nine had developed. The small cane could transform by taking the nature of magic Trinity wanted to use in mind.
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The same way as him, Trinity also held out the specialized weapon Nine had put her hands into. The small-sized cane could transform by taking the nature of magic Trinity used in mind.
   
"Yes. But even then, they're still weak. It shouldn't be like armagus which is only a substitute for magic or those prototypes given to you guys... We require weapons that have a more specialized ability in order to defeat the Black Beast."
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"Yes. But even then, they're still weak. It shouldn't be like armagus which is only a substitute for magic or those prototypes given to you guys... We require weapons that have more specialized ability in order to defeat the Black Beast."
   
 
Nine spoke stubbornly as if burdening herself with a new task.
 
Nine spoke stubbornly as if burdening herself with a new task.
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There was no wondering about the owner of the voice with the ridiculing tone. Nine looked at Terumi with cold eyes.
 
There was no wondering about the owner of the voice with the ridiculing tone. Nine looked at Terumi with cold eyes.
   
His slender body was turned toward the sphere floating in the room like always, but the glance that had a suggestive indication drifting about was aimed at Nine.
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His slender body was turned at the sphere floating in the room like always, but the glance that had a suggestive indication drifting about was peeking at Nine.
   
"You okay not telling our dear friends the details? It's looking like you're making the weapons in the dark here~ ...You hear me?"
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"You okay not telling our dear friends the details? It's looking like you're making the weapons in dark here~ ...You hear me?"
   
"I don't need you to interrupt this conversation. Be quiet, Terumi."
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"I don't need you to interrupt the conversation. Be quiet, Terumi."
   
As she spoke with a tone of voice as if holding him down, Nine hit the floor with her high heel. The rough but somehow graceful noise rang sharply around the room.
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As she spoke with the tone of voice as if holding him down, Nine hit the floor with her high heel. The rough but somehow graceful noise loudly rang out.
   
If Nine told him to be silent. Terumi would do so. Mind Eater was that kind of a magic. Terumi was silent, but he stood while still grinning like a maniac.
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If Nine told him to be silent. Terumi would do so. Mind Eater was that kind of a magic. Terumi was silent, but he stood while still making a grin on his mouth.
   
Drawing her gaze from the face that looked like it was holding back a burst of laughter, Nine sighed in annoyance.
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Drawing her gaze from the face that looked like holding a burst of laughter, Nine sighed in her annoyance.
   
As if to calm the irritated Nine, Jubei made a bitter smile. He then shrugged his small shoulders.
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As if to calm the irritated Nine after watching her, Jubei distorted his face and made a bitter smile. He then shrugged his small shoulders.
   
"So as of now, there's only one way to effectively attack Black Beast. If the weapons Nine spoke of have been completed, we'll be able stand on equal ground with that monster and challenge it."
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"So as of now, there's only one way to effectively attack Black Beast. If the weapons Nine spoke's been completed, we'll be able stand on equal ground with that monster and challenge it."
   
 
However, that speech resulted in a new irritation for Nine.
 
However, that speech resulted in a new irritation for Nine.
   
Playing her fingers around the brim of her large triangular hat which stood as a symbol of wisdom, Nine pointed her chin toward the space between Jubei and Valkenhayn.
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Playing her fingers on the brim of the large triangular hat that was also a symbol of wisdom, Nine pointed her chin toward the space between Jubei and Valkenhayn.
   
"...And? Where's the only person who has the means to attack Black Beast, Hakumen, gone?"
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"...And? Where's the only person who has the means to attack Black Beast, Hakumen, go?"
   
The empty spot where the harsh words were thrown to was supposed to hold a sixth person standing together with them.
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Originally, the empty spot where the harsh words were thrown to supposed to have a sixth person standing together with them.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===
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Ishana, an island floating on ocean.
 
Ishana, an island floating on ocean.
   
The island was painted with lush green nature and a lovely townscape. It was known as ''The Mage's Guild'' outside the island.
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The island was painted in lushly green nature and lovely townscape. It was known as ''Mage's Guild'' outside the island.
   
On the other side of history, the Mage's Guild had constantly influenced change in the world. The organization existed to protect and enhance alchemy and magic, the techniques that should have been forgotten in ancient times. They didn't belong to any country nor bend to anyone. At present, there was a grand academy established in the center to pass down the continuously inherited ancient wisdom and vast knowledge to the next generation.
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In the other side of history, the Mage's Guild had constantly influenced the change in the world. The organization existed to protect and enhance alchemy and magic, the techniques that should have been forgotten in ancient times. They didn't belong to any country nor bend to anyone. As present, there was a grand academy established in the center to pass down the continuously inherited ancient wisdom and vast knowledge to the next generation.
   
 
In the academy's courtyard, she stood alone.
 
In the academy's courtyard, she stood alone.
   
The raised tall trees were sparkling, bright green from the summer sunlight. Between those trees, the white sunlight filtering through and fell upon the small stone pavement that was like stitching on the ground.
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The raised tall trees were sparkling in bright green from the summer sunlight. Between those trees, the white sunlight filtering through trees fell upon the small stone pavement that was like stitched on the ground.
   
Although its vicinity was encircled by buildings related to the academy and Mage's Guild, this place didn't have a very enclosed feeling at all. Rather than a courtyard within a school, it appeared more like a hidden garden.
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Although its vicinity was encircled by buildings related to the academy and Mage's Guild, this place didn't have such enclosed feeling at all. Rather than a courtyard within a school, it appeared more like a hidden garden.
   
Sitting on a deserted bench set under the shade of a tree in the corner of the garden, Celica A. Mercury was swinging her feet.
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Sitting on a deserted bench set under the shade of a tree in at the corner of the garden, Celica A. Mercury were swinging her feet.
   
The academy uniform in shades of white and black had a magician's motif on it. The short mantle on her back was fluttering in the wind. Her thick, light brown hair that was tied in a high ponytail and the treetops of the courtyard were rustling together, making refreshing noises.
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The academy uniform in shades of white and black had magician motif on it. The short mantle on her back was fluttering in the wind. Her thick light brown hair that was tied on high position and the treetop of the courtyard were rustling together, making refreshing noises.
   
 
"Looks like Onee-chan isn't done yet."
 
"Looks like Onee-chan isn't done yet."
   
There was a brick building belonging to the Mage's Guild at the end of a path close to her. There was a meeting being held inside a council room which had barrier that wouldn't let any voices or information leak out. Celica's older sister, Nine, was participating in the meeting.
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There was a brick building of Mage's Guild at the end of a path close to her. There was a meeting being held inside a council room which had barrier that wouldn't leak any voice or information to outside. Celica's older sister, Nine, was participating in the meeting.
   
Celica was waiting for her sister and her companions to come out after the meeting ended.
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Celica was waiting for the sister and her companions to come out after the meeting ended.
   
The wind carrying the scent of greenery was softly blowing through.
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The wind carrying greenery scent was softly blowing through.
   
 
"...It feels good."
 
"...It feels good."
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Today, like always, Ishana's air was clear without any stagnation.
 
Today, like always, Ishana's air was clear without any stagnation.
   
Seven years ago, along with the appearance of the Black Beast, seithr had overflown throughout the world and polluted the atmosphere. It lessened the wind, weakened the waves, and made the soil barren. The seasons lost their characteristics as the weather became disturbed. The creatures that were constantly exposed to thick seithr would lose their original form and go mad, destroying everything.
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Seven years ago along with the appearance of Black Beast, seithr had been overflowing throughout the world and polluting the atmosphere. It lessened the wind, weakened the waves, and made the soil barren. The seasons lost their characteristics as the weather got disturbed. The creatures that constantly got exposed by thick seithr would lose their original form and go mad, destroying everything.
   
 
However, Ishana wasn't like that. The island that was managed by magic was protected by an invisible barrier. The air, water, and soil were pure, uncontaminated by seithr.
 
However, Ishana wasn't like that. The island that was managed by magic was protected by an invisible barrier. The air, water, and soil were pure, uncontaminated by seithr.
   
As a matter of fact, there was an incident last year when the barrier had been damage, resulting in seithr entering the island for a short period. But Celica didn't know much about that as the incident occurred immediately after Celica slipped out of the island on important business. When Celica returned to Ishana, the barrier had already been repaired completely.
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As a matter of fact, there was an incident last year when the barrier had damages, resulting seithr entering the island for one time. But Celica didn't know much about that as the incident occurred immediately after Celica slipped out of the island for an important affair she had to do. When Celica returned to Ishana, the barrier had already been repaired completely.
   
 
With the infiltrating seithr purified, Ishana was now thoroughly clean without any glimpse of the incident.
 
With the infiltrating seithr purified, Ishana was now thoroughly clean without any glimpse of the incident.
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"I wonder what his face would look like if I brought him to this island."
 
"I wonder what his face would look like if I brought him to this island."
   
While narrowing her eyes to block the sunlight shining into them, she smiled gently.
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While narrowing her eyes from the slipping sunlight shining on them, she smiled gently.
   
What she was picturing beyond the light and green curtains was the face of a friend important to Celica.
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What she was picturing beyond the light and greeneries curtains was the face of a friend important to Celica.
   
 
...Friend might not be correct. To tell the truth, Celica didn't know what she should regard him as. She didn't have a formal relationship to refer him as an acquaintance, but he wasn't what she would usually call a friend either.
 
...Friend might not be correct. To tell the truth, Celica didn't know what she should regard him as. She didn't have a formal relationship to refer him as an acquaintance, but he wasn't what she would usually call a friend either.
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In just a few days, he became awfully close to her. He had helped her. He had supported her. He had protected her.
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In just a few days, he got awfully close to her. He had helped her. He had supported her. He had protected her.
   
 
He was... such an irreplaceable person.
 
He was... such an irreplaceable person.
   
"Fufu, I'm sure he'd be amazed. Ah, but he might have actually seen a similar place. After all, he knew so much about magic even though he's not from this island... He's such a mysterious person."
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"Fufu, I'm sure he'd be amazed. Ah, but he might have unexpectedly seen a similar place. After all, he knew much about magic even though he's an outsider for this island... He's such a mysterious person."
   
Without realizing, she actively talked to herself in this place devoid of other people.
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Without realizing, she actively talked to herself in this place that had no indication of other person.
   
She met him eight months ago, during the end of last year. He was tall, had white hair and a green eye just on his left side. He was rough around the edges, but very kind.
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She met him eight months ago, during the end of last year. He had white hair and a green eye on the left side only. His posture was tall. He was rough around the edges, but very kind.
   
Since they parted so suddenly he had never told her much about himself, Celica didn't get to know him well enough. But a lot of the strength he'd given her was always burning inside Celica's chest.
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Since they parted so sudden on top of that he never told much about himself, Celica didn't get to know him well enough. But a lot of strength given by him was always burning inside Celica's chest.
   
There was never a moment when she forgot about him. He was important, precious...
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There was no moment when she forgot about him. He was an important, precious...
   
   
   
Suddenly, a light was glimmering at the edge of Celica's gaze.
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Suddenly, a light was glimmering besides Celica's gaze.
   
   
   
It was probably the sunlight filtering through the trees. But when the light blinded Celica for an instant, her sight was completely engulfed in the next moment.
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It was probably the sunlight filtering through trees. But when the light blinded Celica's eyes for an instant, her sight got completely engulfed in the next moment.
   
 
(Eh...!?)
 
(Eh...!?)
   
Her shout of surprise didn't manage to escape.
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Her voice of surprise didn't get resounded.
   
 
As if the world had been turned inside out in the blink of an eye, Celica's surroundings turned to bright white.
 
As if the world had been turned inside out in the blink of an eye, Celica's surroundings turned to bright white.

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