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As if the world had been turned inside out in the blink of an eye, Celica's surroundings turned to bright white.
 
As if the world had been turned inside out in the blink of an eye, Celica's surroundings turned to bright white.
   
The courtyard's wind and rustling branches were no more. All sound and smell disappeared, it was hard to grasp which direction was up or down. She was even uncertain as to whether gravity existed. Inside the completely white space, only Celica remained.
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The courtyard's wind and rustling branches were no more. With sound and smell disappeared, it was hard to grasp which direction was up and down. It was even uncertain for gravity to exist. Inside the completely white space, only Celica was there.
   
No, there was something else. A mirror. When she turned her face around to look at the surroundings, the rectangular mirror had stood there unnoticed, reflecting Celica's whole body.
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No, there was something else. A mirror. When she turned her face around to look at the surroundings, the rectangular mirror had stood there unnoticed, projecting Celica's whole body.
   
 
(Where's this? Why is a mirror here...?)
 
(Where's this? Why is a mirror here...?)
   
She should have been able to form the questions as words, but somehow her voice couldn't come out again. It felt like everything had been sucked up and vanished.
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She should have had put the questions to words, but somehow her voice couldn't come out again. It felt like everything had been sucked up and vanished.
   
The bizarre thing was that she wasn't terrified.
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The bizarre thing was that she didn't get terrified.
   
Rather, Celica was drawn by curiosity and took a step toward the mirror.
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Rather, Celica was drawn by curiosity and took a step to the mirror.
   
On the other side of the mirror that looked as if it had made a rectangular cut across the room, Celica's amazed figure was reflected. Then she unconsciously tried to touch it.
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In the other side of the mirror that looked as if it had made a rectangular cut in the room, Celica's amazed figure was reflected. Then she unconsciously tried to touch it.
   
   
   
But just before Celica's fingers touched the mirror, suddenly it felt like she was smelling something.
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But just before Celica's raised fingers touched the mirror, suddenly it felt like she was smelling something.
   
   
   
It wasn't so much a smell as a familiar sensation.
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It wasn't something like an aroma that tickled her sense of smell.
   
It was more similar to the warmth of family sat around the table with her, or the calmness she felt when passing time alone, absentmindedly at her favorite spot.
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For example, it was very similar like the warmth when her precious family surrounded the same table with her, or the calmness when she was being alone absentmindedly at her favorite spot.
   
A burning feeling in her chest that spontaneously bubbled up when she was with someone special.
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A burning feeling in her chest that spontaneously bubbled up when she was being with someone.
   
 
Celica knew this feeling. She remembered.
 
Celica knew this feeling. She remembered.
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That moment, a gust of wind swept away the mist in the world. Quite naturally, the scenery returned.
 
That moment, a gust of wind swept away the mist in the world. Quite naturally, the scenery returned.
   
The pouring sunlight filtering through trees, branches rustling in the wind, the fresh and earthy smell of midsummer. The feel of the bench placed under the shade of a tree in the courtyard of the academy she commuted to everyday.
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The pouring sunlight filtering through trees, branches rustled by wind, the fresh and green smell of midsummer. The feel of the bench placed under the shade of a tree at the courtyard of the academy she commuted to everyday.
   
Without looking at them, Celica stood up while looking around. After that, she began to run.
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But without looking at them, Celica stood up while looking around. After that, she began to run.
   
She returned to the school building after leaving the academy's courtyard. Then she left the school proper, leaving the academy behind her. As if drawn by an invisible thread, Celica hastened her pace without so much as a look over her shoulder.
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She returned to the school building after leaving the academy's courtyard. Then she also left the building to get outside of the academy. As if pulling an invisible thread, Celica hastened her feet without so much as looking at her side.
   
 
Her chest throbbed. She herself understood what she was expecting.
 
Her chest throbbed. She herself understood what she was expecting.
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After all, this impression was... his.
 
After all, this impression was... his.
   
As though she was being guided by something, she went up the slope beside the academy before going around it to a hill located at the back. She reaced her destination in no time at all. At least, Celica felt only a few seconds had passed.
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As though she was being guided by something, she went up the slope beside the academy before going around it to a hill located on the back. She arrived immediately. At least, Celica felt only a few seconds had passed.
   
There was a little surprise in the corner of her mind that the hill was so close to the school's courtyard. It would usually take much more time.
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There was a little surprise in the corner of her mind that the hill was so close from the school's courtyard. It would usually take much more time.
   
She ran up to a gentle slope that was covered with grass.
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She ran up to a gentle slope that was covered with lawn.
   
The hill was slightly elevated; it was possible to see all of Ishana's townscape. White clouds, separating the sky from the sea, were floating in the distant blue sky.
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The hill was slightly elevated; it was possible to overlook Ishana's townscape. White clouds, which were acting as the boundary with the sea, were floating in the distant blue sky.
   
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On the peak, someone stood.
Someone was stood at the hill's summit.
 
   
The street, sea, clouds and city. With the scenery of Ishana's calm afternoon at her back, Celica shouted with all her might.
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The street, sea, and city. With the scenery of Ishana's calm afternoon at her back, Celica shouted with all her might.
   
 
His name.
 
His name.
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The first time she saw him was at the entrance of a deserted village inside a forest.
 
The first time she saw him was at the entrance of a deserted village inside a forest.
   
Sat leaning against the trunk of a tree, he had been gravely injured. On top of that, he had lost his memories. At first he could remember nothing but his own name.
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Sitting down leaning to the trunk of a tree, he had been gravely injured. On top of it, he had lost his memories. At first he remembered nothing else but his own name.
   
Together with him, Celica traveled to Japan... and encountered the Black Beast.
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Together with him, Celica travelled to Japan... and encountered Black Beast at the land.
   
Celica couldn't do anything. She couldn't stop him. He had directly challenged the Black Beast, and then disappeared along with it.
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Celica couldn't do anything. She couldn't stop him. That person directly challenged Black Beast, and then disappeared along with it.
   
 
He had said the he would return.
 
He had said the he would return.
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He had promised.
 
He had promised.
   
So Celica waited. She kept waiting because she wanted to meet him again.
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So Celica waited. She kept waiting as she wanted to meet him again.
   
   
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Responding to Celica's voice, the shadow standing atop the hill turned around slowly.
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Responding to Celica's voice, the shadow standing on top of the hill turned around slowly.
   
A gust of wind whirled past, disturbing the lawn, flowing through her. Celica endured the wind, slightly buffeted by it, holding her disheveled hair while raising her face.
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Strong wind whirled as it blew the lawn, flowing through her. Celica endured the wind with her body slightly pushed by it, holding her disheveled hair while raising her face.
   
 
"Ah..."
 
"Ah..."
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After she observed the figure once more, Celica involuntarily raised her voice.
 
After she observed the figure once more, Celica involuntarily raised her voice.
   
The figure was a tall man whose silver hair fluttered in Ishana's clear wind.
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The standing figure was a tall man whose silver hair fluttered because of Ishana's clear wind.
   
However even though his figure resembled a human, it also looked odd.
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However even though his figure resembled a person, it also looked odd.
   
His body was wrapped in white and black with something that might as easily have been clothes or armor as it could have been skin. The eyeless, earless, and mouthless face was concealed with pure white mask. Red orbs had been embedded around his body. The orbs might be the substitute for his barren face as every single one of them stared at her like eyes.
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His body was wrapped in white and black of something that was unclear whether it was clothes, armor, or otherwise skin. The eyeless, earless, and mouthless face was concealed with pure white mask. Red orbs had been embedded around his body. The orbs might be the substitute of his barren face as every single one of them were staring like eyes.
   
On his back, there was a long sword sheathed diagonally that was probably as long as he was tall.
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On his back, there was a long sword placed diagonally that probably was as long as his body height.
   
 
"Hakumen-san..."
 
"Hakumen-san..."
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Celica awkwardly called out the strange man again. A slight disappointment seeped in her voice.
 
Celica awkwardly called out the strange man again. A slight disappointment seeped in her voice.
   
Hakumen was Celica's acquaintance. Together with her sister Nine and her close friend Trinity, he was one of the warriors who had gathered in Ishana in order to defeat the Black Beast.
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Hakumen was Celica's acquaintance. Together with her sister Nine and her close friend Trinity, he was one of the warriors who had gathered in Ishana in order to defeat Black Beast.
   
 
The eyeless face and countless red orbs gazed at Celica indifferently.
 
The eyeless face and countless red orbs gazed at Celica indifferently.
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To cover her slip up for mistaking him for another person, Celica scratched her face and laughed.
 
To cover her slip up for mistaking him for another person, Celica scratched her face and laughed.
   
"I'm sorry for shouting at you so suddenly. Umm... I thought you were one of my friends."
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"I'm sorry for being so sudden. Umm... I thought you're one of my friend."
   
After bowing slightly, Celica soon took several steps toward Hakumen.
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After slightly bowed, Celica soon took several steps toward Hakumen.
   
Hakumen just looked at her from the edge of his vision. Then just as he had been before Celica addressed him, Hakumen turned around to face the townscape.
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Hakumen just looked at her from the edge of his vision. Then just like until Celica addressed him, Hakumen turned around toward the townscape.
   
 
Celica stood next to him.
 
Celica stood next to him.
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"Are you observing Ishana?"
 
"Are you observing Ishana?"
   
From on top of the hill, one could look down on Ishana with ease.
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From on top of the hill, one could look onto Ishana with ease.
   
Basked in the gentle midday's sunlight, the green and blue roofs, and the white walls supporting them, shone brightly. There were people living on the island going back and forth on the gentle stone-paved pathways. A thin forest surrounded it as if protecting against the outside world. Furthermore, the forest was also encircled by a vast sea.
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Basked in the gentle light of the noon, the green and blue roofs, and also white walls shone brightly. There were people living in the island going back and forth on the gentle stone-paved pathway. A thin forest surrounded it as if protecting against the outside world. Furthermore, the forest was also encircled by vast sea.
   
Looking at Ishana from here truly made it look just like a painting.
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Looking at Ishana from here truly made it looked just like a painting.
   
The scent of grass riding on the fresh wind floated past. While tucking her wind tousled hair behind her ears, Celica gazed at the city and smiled.
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The scent of grass riding the fresh wind came around. While tucking her disheveled hair onto her ear that was previously caused by the sudden gust, Celica gazed at the city as she smiled.
   
"This place is nice, isn't it? I come here from time to time. Though sometimes I get surprised by the sudden strong wind."
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"This place is nice, isn't it? I came here from time to time. Though sometimes I'd get surprised by the sudden strong wind."
   
Hakumen didn't reply, choosing to remain silent.
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Hakumen didn't give any answer and remained silent.
   
 
There was a weighty feeling about the suffocating silence, but Celica didn't pay it any heed even for a bit.
 
There was a weighty feeling about the suffocating silence, but Celica didn't pay it any heed even for a bit.
   
They didn't often talk, but Hakumen was always like this. Basically, he would just respond to unnecessary talk with silence. He would only speak if it was about the Black Beast.
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They didn't have many conversations, but Hakumen was always like this. Basically, he would just respond unnecessary talk with silence. He would only speak if it was about Black Beast.
   
Celica raised her chin and looked up at Hakumen. He was fairly tall compared to Celica. Looking at him for a long time would make her neck sore.
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Celica raised her chin and looked up at Hakumen. He was fairly taller compared to Celica. Looking at him for a long time would make her neck sore.
   
The white mask must have noticed Celica's gaze, but he didn't turn his face. He faced Ishana in silence as though he was a decoration.
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The white mask must have noticed Celica's gaze, but he didn't turned his face around. He faced Ishana in silence as though he was a decoration.
   
 
"But... it's strange."
 
"But... it's strange."
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"Why did I mistake Hakumen-san for him? Your appearance and atmosphere are completely different."
 
"Why did I mistake Hakumen-san for him? Your appearance and atmosphere are completely different."
   
But there was something similar. She wondered what it could be.
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But there was something similar. Even while wondering, she thought about that, too.
   
She would have a bit of trouble answering if she were asked what that was. The voice, demeanor, and body language were different. The resemblance was more obscure, an awfully subjective one.
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She would have a bit trouble in answering if she were asked what that was. The voice, demeanor, and gesture were different. The resemblance was more obscure, an awfully perceptive part.
   
If she really tried to put it into words... it was his scent, possibly his warmth.
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If she really should put it to words... it was his scent, possibly his warmth.
   
If she said that, even Hakumen might laugh at her thinking she was a dog or something. Celica had never witnessed him laughing. Surely no one else ever had.
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If she really said that, even Hakumen might laugh at her thinking whether she was a dog or something. Celica had never witnessed him laughing. Surely no one else ever had.
   
Immediately imagining it, he surely would look clumsy. Celica spontaneously giggled at that thought.
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Immediately imagining it, he surely would look too clumsy. Celica spontaneously giggled at that thought.
   
 
As if responding to her voice, Hakumen made a slight motion as he turned his neck. The white mask was looking at Celica.
 
As if responding to her voice, Hakumen made a slight motion as he turned his neck. The white mask was looking at Celica.
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"——Ragna."
 
"——Ragna."
   
The muffled voice resounded in a low tone.
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The muffled voice resounded in low tone.
   
 
Celica stared in wonder.
 
Celica stared in wonder.
   
He repeated the name Celica had mistakenly called him. He had only spoke, and yet it sounded like there was a hidden emotion in the name he muttered that didn't suit the expressionless swordsman.
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He repeated the wrong name Celica had mistaken him for just a while ago. He had only spoke, and yet it sounded like there was a hidden emotion that didn't suit the expressionless swordsman from the name he muttered.
   
Fixing the angle of his head toward Celica, Hakumen asked assertively.
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Fixing the angle of his head toward Celica, Hakumen asked strongly.
   
"I've heard you say the name before. Did you mean ''Ragna the Bloodedge''?"
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"You have definitely said the name before. Did you mean ''Ragna the Bloodedge''?"
   
 
"Bloodedge...? Nope. I only know him as ''Ragna''."
 
"Bloodedge...? Nope. I only know him as ''Ragna''."
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"Nevertheless... You did meet a man called Ragna, didn't you?"
 
"Nevertheless... You did meet a man called Ragna, didn't you?"
   
"Yup, I met him. I don't know if he's the same person you're thinking about, but he's tall and has white hair. It seems he could only see with his left eye, but his eye color was clear green."
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"Yup, I met him. I don't know if he's the same person Hakumen-san think, but he's tall and had white hair. It seems he could only see with his left eye, but the eye color was clear green."
   
Mixed with the gentle wind that flowed, she could hear that Hakumen inhale slightly.
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Mixed with the gentle wind that flowed, she could hear that Hakumen had his breath taken away slightly.
   
Celica reflexively opened her eyes wide. It was the first time she had seen Hakumen astonished.
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Celica reflexively opened her eyes wide. It was the first time for her to see Hakumen being astonished.
   
"Perhaps Ragna is your acquaintance?"
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"Perhaps Hakumen-san is Ragna's acquaintance?"
   
Pressing her inquiry, Celica watched for Hakumen's reaction, deeply focusing on his white mask.
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Inquiring about it, Celica searched for Hakumen's reaction as she deeply examined his white mask.
   
But without saying anything, Hakumen averted his face from her. He once again faced the city, remaining silent. Viewing his face from the side, it seemed he refused to give an answer.
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But without saying anything, Hakumen averted his face from her. He once again faced the city while remained silent. Seeing his face from the side, it seemed he refused to give an answer.
   
Celica had a slight wry smile. This behavior was more what she was used to.
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Celica had a slight wry smile. This behavior was also just like the usual.
   
But since he didn't leave, perhaps it meant that there was no problem in her continuing to talk. Since he indicated no readiness to reply, Celica continued on her own.
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But since he didn't leave, perhaps it meant that there was no problem for her to continue talking. Since he didn't confirm nor plan to reply, Celica continued on her own.
   
"By the way, I came here since I felt that Ragna was here. Since I can't sense people's power like Onee-chan can, I wonder what's actually happening... I suddenly felt a warmth like the feeling that Ragna had."
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"By the way, I came here since I felt that Ragna's here. Since I can't sense people's power like Onee-chan can, I wonder what's actually happening... I suddenly felt a warmth feeling that Ragna had."
   
Celica gently put her hands on her chest. The feeling she sensed back at the courtyard was still lingering there. With just that small feeling, faint happiness soaked in her whole body. It made Celica spontaneously smile broadly.
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Celica gently put her hands on her chest. The feeling she sensed back on the courtyard was still lingering there. With just that much, faint happiness soaked in her whole body. It made Celica spontaneously smiled broadly.
   
"Since Ragna always kept his chin up at all times, doesn't that mean he's the sort of person who always looks forward? No matter how strong the wind was blowing, his feet stayed firm and wouldn't move even a step. That's my image of him. That's why just thinking that I'm next to him makes me feel like i'm being protected."
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"Since Ragna always kept his face up at all times, doesn't that mean he's the people who always looking forward? No matter how strong the wind is pushing, his feet stayed firm and wouldn't move even for a step. That's my image of him. That's why just thinking that I'm next to him made me feel like being protected."
   
After her short speech, Celica gave a small laugh. Her ponytail drawing an arc, she looked up at Hakumen.
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After cutting her word at that point, Celica shortly laughed. With her ponytail drew an arc, she looked up at Hakumen.
   
"Oh, what am I saying? I'm the only one who thinks about him. He actually did protect me once, too. I wonder if the Ragna you know is someone different."
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"Oh, what am I saying? I'm the only one who think about it. I actually got protected once, too. I wonder if the Ragna Hakumen-san know is someone different."
   
If possible, she wanted to hear what Hakumen thought of Ragna.
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If possible, she wanted to hear about what Hakumen thought of Ragna.
   
However, she didn't sense anything from Hakumen besides his slight breathing. He was absolutely still as if he were a sculpture erected on top of the hill. On the contrary, his long silver hair, which waving slightly as it was blown by the wind, looked out of place.
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However, she didn't sense anything from Hakumen besides his slight breathing. He was absolutely still as if a sculpture erected on top of the hill. On the contrary, his long silver hair, which was moderately waving as it was washed away by the wind, looked unnatural.
   
 
"Hakumen-san?"
 
"Hakumen-san?"
   
She asked again to be sure. But the response was still obstinate silence.
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She called him again to test. But the response was still obstinate silence.
   
 
Celica suddenly noticed. Hakumen was no longer looking at the city.
 
Celica suddenly noticed. Hakumen was no longer looking at the city.
   
His face was facing the beautiful cityscape, but his chin was retracted. His appearance was that of a man sequestered in deep, deep thought.
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His face was facing the direction of the beautiful scenery, but his chin was sluggishly retracted. His appearance was that of people who sank into deep, deep thought.
   
 
===Part 3===
 
===Part 3===
   
The noise of the wind and the voice of Celica who was speaking right beside him didn't reach Hakumen.
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The noise of the wind and the voice of Celica who was speaking just right beside him didn't reach Hakumen.
   
His hearing only picked up the one name that had been mentioned several times. It made a ripple on the surface of the water of his thoughts.
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His hearing only picked up one name that had been mentioned several times. It made a ripple on the water surface of his thought.
   
 
Ragna.
 
Ragna.
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(Why... Why was Nii-san here? In this age...?)
 
(Why... Why was Nii-san here? In this age...?)
   
The man he had once called brother. Ragna the Bloodedge.
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The man he had once called a brother. Ragna the Bloodedge.
   
In this time, he definitely shouldn't exist.
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At that time, he was definitely supposed to have been gone.
   
   
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Whirling flames, surging heat. Although he was showered by the scattering spray of lava, they oddly weren't hot.
 
Whirling flames, surging heat. Although he was showered by the scattering spray of lava, they oddly weren't hot.
   
In a place deep underground where an artificial volcano named ''The Cauldron'' was created, he——Jin threw himself into said Cauldron. For the sake of saving a person who had fallen.
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In a place deep underground where an artificial volcano named ''Cauldron'' was created, he——Jin threw himself into the said Cauldron. For the sake of saving a person who had fallen before.
   
 
"NII-SAN!"
 
"NII-SAN!"
   
With his beautiful golden hair disheveled, with his jade eyes burning in flames, his voice broke as he shouted. Pushing his way through the heat, he extended his arm.
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With his beautiful golden hair disheveled, with his jade eyes burned in flames, his splitting voice shouted. Pushing his way through the heat, he extended his arm.
   
There were silhouettes ahead of him in the direction he sought. The body of a large man and one of a small woman. The two of them were lying on top of another as if caught in an embrace. They were connected by a huge sword, piercing their bodies like a giant stake. Similar to a gliding bird, they went into freefall.
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There were particular silhouettes ahead of the direction he sought before. The body of a large man and the body of a small woman. The two of them were lying on top of another as if they were embracing each other. They were connected into one as a huge sword pierced them like a stake driven in. Similar to a gliding bird, they went into freefall.
   
Jin wanted to stop the man. But his voice was swallowed by the roaring wind and his flailing arm couldn't reach him.
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Jin wanted to stop the man. But his voice was swallowed by roaring wind and his desperate arm couldn't reach him.
   
The woman was smiling. That woman had snatched the man Jin called brother.
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The woman at the direction where his hand were stretched to was smiling. The woman had snatched the man Jin called as brother.
   
He wasn't close enough that she could see him, yet her red eyes were glaring and looking up at Jin. Her face twisted into something hideous while letting out a shrill laugh. The deafening voice echoed inside his skull.
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It wasn't a range where she could see him, yet her red eyes were glaring and looking up at Jin. Her face turned hideous while letting out a shrill laugh. The deafening voice even echoed inside his skull.
   
 
Shut up. Stop laughing.
 
Shut up. Stop laughing.
   
Jin cried as he was engulfed in roaring wind and flame. Hatred and murderous thoughts gushed up from the bottom of his stomach.
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Jin cried while being engulfed in roaring sounds and flames. Hatred and murderous thought gushed out from the bottom of his stomach.
   
 
"I will never... ever forgive you! NEVER!"
 
"I will never... ever forgive you! NEVER!"
   
The apparently endless fall suddenly transformed.
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The fall that appeared to last forever suddenly transformed.
   
The figures that were solid until then melted and blended into one. The man and woman who were united by a sword lost their features and transformed into a black, writhing mass. Gradually swelling, it expanded and swallowed the surroundings. Inside the darkness, bright red eyes that shone in a sinister fashion could be seen.
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The figures that were sturdy until then melted and blended into one. The man and woman who were united by a sword lost their features and transformed into a mass of black object. Gradually swelling larger, it expanded and swallowed the surroundings. Inside the darkness, bright red eyes that were shining sinisterly could be seen.
   
 
As soon as he saw it, a needle of ice penetrated Jin's spine.
 
As soon as he saw it, a needle of ice penetrated Jin's spine.
   
At the same time, countless words of denial rushed through his mind.
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At the same time, countless denial words rushing inside his mind.
   
 
''Inexcusable.''
 
''Inexcusable.''
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''It mustn't be allowed to exist. It mustn't be deemed to exist.''
 
''It mustn't be allowed to exist. It mustn't be deemed to exist.''
   
The denials were the impulse of his instinct. In the accumulation of them, his will and ego were crushed to nothingness.
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The denials were the impulse of his instinct. In the accumulation of them, his will and ego were crushed without remain.
   
 
In the end, the mass that contained his brother and the hated woman tried to take the shape of something...
 
In the end, the mass that contained his brother and the hated woman tried to take the shape of something...
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Lured by the cold wind, he opened his eyes. There were no flames nor heat... What appeared before his eyes was the stretched, emotionless sky full of stars.
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Lured by the cold wind, he opened his eyes. There was no flames nor heat... What appeared before his eyes was the stretched, emotionless sky full of stars.
   
 
The figure of his brother was nowhere to be seen.
 
The figure of his brother was nowhere to be seen.
   
The same for the red-eyed woman, and the black mass he had seen.
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The same for the red-eyes woman, and the black mass he had surely seen.
   
 
But there stood a girl beside him. A girl that resembled the moon.
 
But there stood a girl beside him. A girl that resembled the moon.
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"Mr. Hero. How would you like to become a real hero?"
 
"Mr. Hero. How would you like to become a real hero?"
   
Jin didn't know how to answer the enigmatic question. He couldn't recall the correct words.
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Jin didn't know how to answer the enigmatic question. He couldn't recall the precise words.
   
But when the girl expressed a bewitching smile that didn't seem to match her girlish appearance at all, she summoned a suffocating scent of roses and whisked Jin away from that place.
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But when the girl expressed a bewitching smile that didn't seem girlish at all, she put on a choking scent of rose and took away Jin from the place.
   
 
Teleportation——.
 
Teleportation——.
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When he regained consciousness again, Jin was lying in the bed of a strange room.
 
When he regained consciousness again, Jin was lying in the bed of a strange room.
   
In the forefront of his vision was a dull colored ceiling, harmonized by a chandelier that seemingly had a flower and ivy motif.
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In front of his vision was dull colored ceilings, harmonized by a chandelier that seemingly had flower and ivy motif.
   
The room was spacious. It was furnished with moderately luxurious but good quality furniture. The faint scent must have been roses. The bedding was also considerably first-rate, it bore the illusion that one would sink if they were to lie there for too long.
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The room was spacious. It was furnished with moderately luxurious but good quality furniture. The faint scent must be roses. As the bedding was also considerably first-rate, it bore the illusion that one would sink there if they laid their body there.
   
 
The air fluctuated suddenly.
 
The air fluctuated suddenly.
   
Along with the sound of a door opening, someone entered. There was only one set of footsteps. Slipping through the door, a quiet wind and rose fragrance entered the room.
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Along with the sound of door opening, someone came in. There was only one footstep. Slipping next, a quiet wind and rose fragrance entered the room.
 
The footsteps stopped beside Jin along with the sound of wheels turning. After a short pause, a hoarse voice spoke gently.
 
   
 
"It seems you have awakened."
 
"It seems you have awakened."
   
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The footstep and noise of wheels stopped beside Jin. After a short pause, a hoarse voice asked gently.
Barely hearing it, Jin tried to move his neck. He found he could only look around by moving his eyes.
 
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Barely feeling it, Jin slightly moved his neck. He could only look around by moving his gaze.
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  +
There was a figure of old man beside the bed. A wrinkled face that had long white beard, and lengthy grey hair in addition.
   
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The old man was severely thin and worn out. His neck and arms looked like dead branches while his cheeks were the moss. Even then, the old man was wrapped in noble atmosphere that was breathtaking.
There was the figure of an old man beside the bed. A wrinkled face with a long white beard, and lengthy grey hair in addition.
 
   
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If he were to stand up against him, he might took a step back involuntarily. Even though it would be simple to restrain the aged body of its strength as it felt miraculous for him to hold out his hand, just as obvious from his appearance.
The old man was severely thin and looked very tired. His neck and arms looked like dead branches and his cheeks held the moss. That said, the old man was wrapped in noble attire that was breathtaking.
 
   
He was sitting in a wheelchair. The sound of wheels Jin's ears picked up earlier must have belonged to it.
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The old man was sitting on a wheelchair. The sound of wheels Jin's ears picked up earlier must have been this.
   
 
"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Clavis Alucard. This man is my butler, Valkenhayn R. Hellsing."
 
"It is a pleasure to meet you. My name is Clavis Alucard. This man is my butler, Valkenhayn R. Hellsing."
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A voice that shook the air gently, like a ripple on the surface of water.
 
A voice that shook the air gently, like a ripple on the surface of water.
   
With red eyes filled with the accumulated wisdom and dignity of many generations, Clavis hinted toward the restrained, well built man stood behind him.
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With the red eyes accumulated wisdom and dignity in exchange for the old age, Clavis hinted and gave a gaze behind. He introduced the abstinent man with sturdy figure.
   
After that, he proceeded to reach out his hand to a tiny silhouette at his side.
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After that, this time he proceed to reach out his hand to a tiny silhouette accompanying next to him.
   
"This child is Rachel Alucard. ...She is the one who brought you to this castle."
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"This child is Rachel Alucard. ...She was the one who brought you to this castle."
   
Clavis put his hand on the shoulder of the girl. It was the bewitching girl who had smiled before Jin lost consciousness, below the starry sky and annoyingly dazzling moon.
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Clavis put his hand on the shoulder of a girl. It was the bewitching girl who had smiled before Jin lost consciousness, with the descending starry sky and annoyingly dazzling moon as the scenery.
   
But something was different. Jin thought instinctively.
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But something was different. Jin thought so intuitively.
   
It could be the appearance, the age, or even her very existence. He was certain that she was the girl from that time, but he had a feeling that something was fundamentally different.
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It could be the appearance, the age, or even her very existence. He was certain that she was supposed to be the girl from that time, but he had a feeling that something was fundamentally different.
   
 
Jin gathered a little strength and knitted his brows.
 
Jin gathered a little strength and knitted his brows.
   
It wasn't just the girl. This place was anomalous. These people, the drifting air... even the flow of time.
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It wasn't just the girl. This place was anomalous. The existing persons, the drifting air... even the flow of time.
   
 
"Where am I...?"
 
"Where am I...?"
   
Placing his jarring arms to each side of his body, Jin tried to get up. However, even though his arms were moving, they slipped, unable to achieve any power as if they were hollow pipes.
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Placing his jarring arms to each side of his body, Jin tried to get up. However, even though his arms should be there, they slipped as he couldn't put power into them like they were hollow pipes.
   
It wasn't just his arms. It was like his whole body had been replaced with wooden doll. He even had to muster his whole strength just to move his lips.
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It wasn't just his arms. It was like his whole body had been replaced with wooden doll. He even had to wring his whole strength just to mutter his voice.
   
Toward the appalled Jin, the gentle voice spoke again.
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Toward the appalled Jin, the gentle voice made a speech again.
   
"You ought not do anything excessive. Let alone getting up, your body cannot move as you please. It is quite amazing just for you to have woken up in this short period of time."
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"You ought not to do anything excessive. Let alone getting up, even your body cannot move as you please. It is quite amazing just to wake up in this short period of time."
   
 
"Short period of time?"
 
"Short period of time?"
   
"It should be seven days in human time... When you were carried to this castle, you were gravely injured. The external wounds were treated by Valkenhayn, but you slipped into a comatose state due to your injuries."
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"It should be seven days for human time... When you were carried into this castle, you were gravely injured. The external wounds were treated by Valkenhayn, but you have been gone into comatose state by the reaction."
   
After speaking that much, Clavis smiled and looked at Jin with eyes like he was admiring a kitten taking its first steps.
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After speaking that much, Clavis smiled and looked at Jin with the eyes like he was admiring a kitten as he was struggling to get up.
   
"Do not force yourself. Try not to get up."
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"Do not force yourself. Try not to wake up."
   
 
He lectured Jin once again.
 
He lectured Jin once again.
   
For a moment, a glint of clear irritation passed over Jin. But looking at Clavis' peaceful gaze made his body lose its strength. Jin sank into his bed as if giving up. His fatigue and dizziness gave him the impression that it would be futile even if he struggled.
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For a moment, a glint of clear irritation went by on Jin. But looking at Clavis' peaceful gaze made his body lost its strength. Jin sank into his bed as if giving up. The fatigue and dizziness following after gave him the impression that it would be futile even if he struggled.
   
After being certain he had relaxed, Clavis answered Jin's first question.
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After being certain of it, Clavis answered Jin's first question.
   
"This place is my castle. It does not belong anywhere in the world. It is also connected to every dark night of the world... A place that exists but is also nonexistent. Similar to the other side of the moon."
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"This place is my castle. It does not belong anywhere in the world. It is also connected to every dark night of the world... A place that exist but also nonexistent. Similar to the other side of the moon."
   
The words he spoke were too obscure even for a fairy tale. But mysteriously they managed to sound logical for human interpretation.
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The words he spoke were too obscure even for a fairy tale. But it mysteriously sounded logical for human understanding.
   
At the very least, Jin had a vague understanding of it. Taking a deep breath, he spoke his next question.
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At the very least, Jin grasped a vague understanding of it. While taking a deep breath, he spoke the next question.
   
 
"...Why am I here?"
 
"...Why am I here?"
   
"Well, then. I do not know the details either. But young man, it appears that you have crossed the Boundary. The remaining damage to your flesh are all the result of crossing over it."
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"Well, then. I do not know the details as well. But young man, it appears that you have crossed the Boundary. The remaining damages in your flesh are all the result of crossing over it."
   
 
"Boundary..."
 
"Boundary..."
   
Just what is the Boundary? It seemed to be a word he should have known, but Jin didn't understand much about it for some reason. No, that was incorrect. He knew the 'information' regarding the meaning of the word Boundary. How could he know about it? Where did he obtain that knowledge?
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Just what is the Boundary? It seemed to be a word he should have known, but Jin didn't understand much about it for some reason. No, it was incorrect. He knew about the 'information' regarding the meaning of the Boundary. How could he knew about it? Where did he obtained that knowledge?
   
In the first place, just who was he? Clavis said that he arrived here after passing through the Boundary. But where was he and what was he doing before then? ...He didn't know.
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In the first place, just who himself was? Clavis said that he arrived here after passing through the Boundary. But where was he and what was he doing before then? ...He didn't know.
   
 
His mind was blurry. He wanted to put his hand on his forehead, but the hand wouldn't move.
 
His mind was blurry. He wanted to put his hand on his forehead, but the hand wouldn't move.
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He heard a sympathetic sigh from Clavis.
 
He heard a sympathetic sigh from Clavis.
   
"Are your memories in chaos? Perhaps that is also because you have been heavily affected by the Boundary. There is an enormous amount of information drifting in the Boundary. When your spirit connected with it, your individual memories as well as personality were swept away by the excessive knowledge. To put it simply, you cannot remember yourself well enough."
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"Is your memories in chaos? Perhaps that is also because you have been heavily affected by the Boundary. There is enormous information drifting in the Boundary. When your spirit connected with it, your individual memories as well as feeling were swept away by the excessive knowledge. To put it simply, you cannot recall about yourself well enough."
   
With the noise of clothes rustling, Clavis lightly moved his hands from the wheelchair's handles onto his knees.
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With the noise of clothes rustling, Clavis lightly put the hands that had been placed on the wheelchair's railing onto his knees.
   
Looking away from the sluggish gesture, Jin turned his gaze toward the ceiling. The light of the chandelier was awfully distant. It made it feel lifeless.
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Looking away from the sluggish gesture, Jin turned his gaze toward the ceiling. The light of the enkindled chandelier was awfully distant. It made it felt lifeless.
   
Clavis' drowsy voice continued.
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Clavis' voice that seemed drowsy continued.
   
"Crossing the Boundary is very dangerous. It is a wonder for an ordinary man to even retain his flesh. Even if it remained, one would lose himself as his will became engulfed by the Boundary. ...It appears that you possess a very strong spirit."
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"Crossing the Boundary is very dangerous. It is a wonder for an ordinary man to even have his flesh remained. Even if it remained, one would lose himself as his will became engulfed by the Boundary. ...It appears that you possess a very strong spirit."
   
Strong spirit. Those words were oddly amusing. Jin spat it out by taking a breath.
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Strong spirit. That word was oddly amusing. Jin spat it out by taking a breath.
   
 
If he truly possessed that thing, then —— wouldn't be ——.
 
If he truly possessed that thing, then —— wouldn't be ——.
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The floating thought dispersed at once before it formed a shape inside his mind. He couldn't grasp it. It was just he felt that he had lost something... Something that absolutely mustn't be lost.
 
The floating thought dispersed at once before it formed a shape inside his mind. He couldn't grasp it. It was just he felt that he had lost something... Something that absolutely mustn't be lost.
   
His head was heavy. He spontaneously closed his eyelids. With his vision shut in the dark, a spectacle was resurrected as if it had been waiting patiently.
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His head was heavy. He spontaneously closed his eyelids. When his vision was shut in the dark, a spectacle was resurrected as if it had been waiting patiently.
   
 
Red flames, burning air, falling figures... and then red eyes.
 
Red flames, burning air, falling figures... and then red eyes.
   
For the present Jin, it was his last and only clear memories.
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For the present Jin, it was the last and only clear memories.
   
 
"Black... I saw a black mass. Where is that thing?"
 
"Black... I saw a black mass. Where is that thing?"
   
That's right, a black mass. At the same time as he remembered, the emotions he had when he witnessed it were overflowing, gushing forth anew.
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That's right, a black mass. At the same time as he remembered, the emotions he had when he witnessed it were overflowing like they gushed out.
   
 
''That being shouldn't be allowed to exist.''
 
''That being shouldn't be allowed to exist.''
   
Jin's spine was shivering as his memories, along with thought, got swept away. Even his ego was engulfed by the impulse. It wasn't because of terror. If he put it into words then it would be murderous intent.
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Jin's spine was shivering as his memories, along with thought got swept away. Even his ego got engulfed by the impulse. It wasn't because of terror. If he put it into words then it would be murderous intent.
   
"That being is the Black Beast... It materialized from the Boundary. A being that is destroying the world."
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"That being is the Black Beast... It materialized from the Boundary. A being that is ruining the world."
   
 
Clavis' voice gently wrapped up the burning negative feelings.
 
Clavis' voice gently wrapped up the burning negative feelings.
   
"It seems it appeared in this world one month ago. After singlehandedly forcing a small island country into catastrophe, it presently rampages around the world searching for further destruction."
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"It seems to have appeared in this world one month prior. After singlehandedly forced a small island country into catastrophe, it presently rampages around the world searching for further destruction."
   
 
"It must..."
 
"It must..."
   
Slipping from his thoughts, Jin's mouth moved on its own and spoke. The words didn't completely sound; they didn't even reach Jin's ears himself. But as for the meaning of the enveloping emotions, it was too obvious not only to Jin, but also Clavis.
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Slipping from his thought, Jin's mouth moved on its own and spoke. The words didn't completely turn into voice; it didn't even reach Jin's ears himself. But as for the meaning of the enveloping emotions, it was too obvious not only to Jin, but also Clavis.
   
 
''It must be killed.''
 
''It must be killed.''
   
Jin clenched his teeth. His molars grating against one another made a noise. The inner corner of his eyes were burning.
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Jin clenched his teeth. His molars were grating and made a noise. The inner corner of his eyes were burning.
   
It was terribly confusing. Merely yielding to that confusion made the desire to immediately rush away from this place rampage inside his body.
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It was terribly confusing. Merely yielding to that confusion made the desire to immediately rush out from this place rampaging inside his body.
   
 
He himself didn't have any kind of intention, but he felt bad as if his body was taking control and doing as it pleased.
 
He himself didn't have any kind of intention, but he felt bad as if his body was taking control and doing as it pleased.
   
His head aching, Jin grimaced severely.
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As his head ached, Jin grimaced severely.
   
Watching the situation quietly, Clavis continued to speak.
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Gazing at his situation quietly, Clavis spoke to tell him something.
   
"Young man. This is still the time for you to recuperate. If you take a rest for a little bit more, you will be able to get up. Perhaps some of your memories will also return. If the time comes, if you still have the will to stand... there is a place I intend to show you."
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"Young man. This is still the time for you to recuperate. If you take a rest for a little bit more, you will be able to get up. Perhaps some of your memories will also return. If the time has come, if you still have the will to stand up... there is place I intend to show you."
   
 
"What...?"
 
"What...?"
   
"Until then, please rest to your heart's content. The reason you're here is because your destiny has not yet concluded."
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"Until then, please take rest to your heart's content. The reason is because your destiny has not yet concluded."
   
After he said that, Clavis casted his gaze to the silent Valkenhayn at his back as if urging him.
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After he said that, Clavis casted his gaze to the abstinent Valkenhayn on his back as if urging him.
   
Still with a gloomy expression, Valkenyhayn handled the wheelchair with a delicate manner that didn't suit his build and left the room with Clavis.
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Still with gloomy expression, Valkenyhayn handled the wheelchair with delicate manner that didn't suit his body build and left behind the room along with Clavis.
   
The girl who was following, Rachel, silently halted her feet in front of the door for a moment. With the ribbons in her long golden hair swinging, she looked back at Jin.
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The girl who was following them next, Rachel, silently halted her feet in front of the door for a moment. With the ribbon on her long golden hair swinging, she looked back at Jin.
   
 
The big red eyes of a doll were staring at Jin.
 
The big red eyes of a doll were staring at Jin.
   
But without saying anything, the girl's eyes continued to gleam with that cold color. Then a wind blew unexpectedly and in a flash the girl vanished to the hallway.
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But without saying anything, the girl's eyes remained gleaming with cold color. Then a wind blew unexpectedly and gone in a flash with the girl vanished to the hallway.
   
With the door closed the room was peacefully silent.
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The closed door was peacefully silent.
   
Jin glared at the solid wood of the door from his bed.
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Jin glared at the solid wood from on top of his bed.
   
 
''I couldn't——.''
 
''I couldn't——.''
   
The broken thought came in contact with the broken memories, revealing a whisper of regret.
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The broken thought came in contact with the broken memories, revealing a mutter of regret.
   
 
''Your destiny has not yet concluded.''
 
''Your destiny has not yet concluded.''
   
Clavis' words echoed deep within his chest. Feeling annoyed by it, Jin fell asleep before long as if fainting.
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The lingering words of Clavis echoed deep within his chest. While feeling annoyed by it, Jin fell asleep before long as if fainted.
   
   
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"...n. Hakumen-san!"
 
"...n. Hakumen-san!"
   
What had pulled up Hakumen from sinking endlessly into the lake of thought might be the voice of the girl who seemed to repeatedly calling to him while lightly hitting his arm, or perhaps it was the chimes of a bell sounding that the time was 3 o'clock before vanishing as if absorbed by the distant sky.
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What had pulled up Hakumen from sinking endlessly in the lake of thought might be because of the voice of the girl who seemed to repeatedly calling him while lightly hitting his arm, or the chimes of a bell telling the time was 3 o'clock that vanished as it got absorbed in the other side of the sky.
   
While his five senses were readjusting to the here and now, Hakumen turned his face toward the worried girl stood next to him who was looking up at him.
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While his five senses were regaining the proper timeline and the proper scenery, Hakumen turned his face toward the worried girl just next to him who was looking up at him.
   
As he moved, Celica sighe a breath of relief and smiled.
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As he had slightly moved, Celica took a breath in her relief and smiled.
   
 
"Thank god. I thought something was wrong since you were completely still."
 
"Thank god. I thought something was wrong since you were completely still."
   
After she said that, she noticed that she was still touching his arm. Then Celica retracted her hand behind her back while making a mischievous face.
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After she said that, she noticed that she was still touching his arm. Then Celica retracted her hand to her back while making a mischievous face.
   
Not minding it, Hakumen turned his head. What the white mask was seeing was the Mage's Guild that was located at the center of Ishana's townscape.
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Not minding it, Hakumen turned his neck around. What the white mask was seeing was the Mage's Guild that was located at the center of Ishana's townscape.
   
 
"...It seems to have ended."
 
"...It seems to have ended."
   
Lowly murmuring, he turned on his heels with the long silver hair on his head fluttering. Each time he stepped forward, the lush lawn made a noise.
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Lowly murmuring, he turned on his heels with the long silver hair on his head fluttering. Each time he stepped forward, the lushly lawn made a noise.
   
 
Before he went too far, Celica immediately chased after him.
 
Before he went too far, Celica immediately chased after him.
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"Wha, wait up. You're going to Onee-chan's place, right? I'll go with you!"
 
"Wha, wait up. You're going to Onee-chan's place, right? I'll go with you!"
   
Hakumen didn't give a reply, but he slightly shortened his large steps. Stepping after him, Celica jogged to catch up with a light trot.
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Hakumen didn't give a reply, but he slightly dropped his large walking steps. Taking a step behind him, Celica jogged to catch up with the walking manner of small animals.
   
As if urging both of their shadows to leave the hill, a strong gust of wind blew through.
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As if urging both of their shadows to leave from the hill, a strong gust of wind blew through.
   
 
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