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Revealing her discomfort, Nine coldly questioned him. The degree of coldness was different from what she had been directing at Hakumen.
 
Revealing her discomfort, Nine coldly questioned him. The degree of coldness was different from what she had been directing at Hakumen.
   
But instead of backing down even a little, Terumi shrugged his shoulders and continued to ridicule her.
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But instead of getting frightened even for a bit, Terumi made fun of her and shrugged his shoulders.
   
"Nuh-uh~. It's just funny seeing you guys making idiotic faces."
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"Nuh-uh~. It's just funny seeing you guys making idiotic face."
   
 
Interrupting Terumi's laugh, a white arm extended toward his throat and roughly grasped his collar.
 
Interrupting Terumi's laugh, a white arm extended toward his throat and roughly grasped his collar.
   
Hakumen pulled Terumi toward himself and stared at him with intimidating silence. Terumi glared at him like a venomous snake creeping out from darkness.
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Hakumen pulled him toward himself and stared at him with intimidating silence. Terumi glared at him like a poisonous snake creeping from darkness.
   
 
"What... Don't just casually touch me. I said something that hurt your feelings? Aah? Man, you just have to answer honestly."
 
"What... Don't just casually touch me. I said something that hurt your feelings? Aah? Man, you just have to answer honestly."
   
The white mask remained silent. But the hand that grabbed his collar wasn't gentle; it was wrenched violently.
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The white mask remained silent. But the hand that grabbed his collar wasn't gentle; power was put into it.
   
 
Although he was trying to tear off the arm, Terumi grinned and provoked him even more.
 
Although he was trying to tear off the arm, Terumi grinned and provoked him even more.
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"Okay, stop!"
 
"Okay, stop!"
   
Celica's voice suddenly cut in, interrupting Hakumen's words and freezing Terumi's grin.
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Celica's voice suddenly came in between, interrupting Hakumen's words and Terumi's grin.
   
"Quit with the fighting. You're getting into another argument so soon, even though Trinity-san just ended the last one?"
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"Quit with the fighting. You're getting into another arguments so soon, even though Trinity-san just ended it earlier."
   
 
"Good grief," said Celica as she grabbed both tall men's shoulders, urging them to separate.
 
"Good grief," said Celica as she grabbed both tall men's shoulders, urging them to separate.
   
But before he could be pushed aside, Terumi twisted his body forcefully to get away from Celica and Hakumen's grasps. He turned his face away and faintly clicked his tongue while backing away, moving a great distance from them.
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But before he got pushed aside, Terumi twisted his body to forcefully get away from Celica and Hakumen's hands. He turned his face away and faintly clicked his tongue while backing away, taking a great distance from them.
   
 
He was obviously avoiding them. But even if she was aware of it, Celica just held herself back and made a wry smile for a moment.
 
He was obviously avoiding them. But even if she was aware of it, Celica just held herself back and made a wry smile for a moment.
   
Every time Terumi happened to be near Nine and Hakumen, a quarrel would develop. Terumi's reaction was always the same. For some reason, Terumi had a weird dislike of being touched by Celica.
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Every time Terumi happened to be near Nine and Hakumen, a quarreling would develop. Terumi's reaction was always like he did now. Somehow, Terumi had a weird dislike from being touched by Celica.
   
 
Then Trinity clasped her hands together delightfully. She made a peaceful and earnest smile.
 
Then Trinity clasped her hands together delightfully. She made a peaceful and earnest smile.
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"Everyone~, why don't we have a tea now?"
 
"Everyone~, why don't we have a tea now?"
   
The voice that had the sweet scent of butter and sugar drifting about made Jubei scratch his head with a puzzled face.
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The voice that had the sweet scent of butter and sugar drifting about made Jubei scratched his head with a puzzled face.
   
"Tea, huh... Just like you to propose that, Trinity, but we're doin' it with these guys? It ain't like we're just goin' to fill a table and get along now, is it?"
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"Tea, huh... That's just like what you'd propose, but we're doin' it with these guys? It ain't like we're just goin' to fill a table and get along now, is it?"
   
"Isn't it fine? I'm hoping we can spend time quietly together taking a graceful tea."
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"Isn't it fine? I'm hoping we can spend time quietly by having a graceful tea time."
   
While fixing his collar, Valkenhayn took a step ahead. Following him, Trinity urged the others on.
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While fixing his collar, Valkenhayn took a step ahead. Following him, Trinity also urged the others.
   
 
"...I sure hope the coffee will taste good."
 
"...I sure hope the coffee will taste good."
   
Nine grumbled dejectedly, dropping her shoulders along with a sigh. Celica hugged Nine's arm to her chest and smiled gleefully.
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Nine grumbled dejectedly and dropped her shoulders along with a sigh. Celica took Nine's arm to her chest and smiled gleefully.
   
"This is the first time everyone will be having tea together, right? We've got quite a number here, but let's just go to the usual shop!"
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"This is the first time everyone having tea together, right? We've got quite a people here, but let's just go to the usual store!"
   
 
"Celica, are you serious? I don't want to see these guys' faces in that store... Ah, of course Jubei's a different case."
 
"Celica, are you serious? I don't want to see these guys' faces in that store... Ah, of course Jubei's a different case."
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"H-Hey. Stop talkin' like that in a place like this..."
 
"H-Hey. Stop talkin' like that in a place like this..."
   
Jubei looked downward as Nine made a surprise attack with her charming smile. His ears which usually stood straight up were also seemingly bending down.
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Jubei looked downward as Nine made a surprise attack with her charming smile. His ears that usually stood up were also seemingly bending down.
   
 
Nine, Celica, and Jubei followed Valkenhayn and Trinity who had gone ahead. Hakumen and Terumi also stepped forth without saying anything.
 
Nine, Celica, and Jubei followed Valkenhayn and Trinity who had gone ahead. Hakumen and Terumi also stepped forth without saying anything.
   
However, before they could go any further, a heavy noise resounded as the gate that led to the courtyard from Mage's Guild opened.
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However, before they took another few steps subsequently, a heavy noise resounded as the gate that led to the courtyard from Mage's Guild opened.
   
 
"Oh my~, everyone's present."
 
"Oh my~, everyone's present."
   
Together with the charming provocative voice, long boots' heels, which were even taller than Nine's, clacked along the courtyard's path.
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Together with the charming provocative voice, long boots' heels, which were even taller than Nine's, made a noise along the courtyard's path.
   
The woman entering the courtyard was wearing a dress that had a large gap at the torso, complete with long mantle decorated with extravagant fur. Her lips, thick with lipstick, and the gorgeous necklace decorating her chest were eye-catching. Her suggestive attire hinted at a slender, well kept figure.
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Who appeared was a woman wearing a dress that had a large gap on the chest part, complete with long mantle decorated with extravagant fur. Her thick lips with lipstick and gorgeous necklace decorating her chest were eye-catching. A slender figure peeked from her suggestive attire.
   
Beside her stood a man with silk-like blonde hair that had been grown long. With such a truly stylish outfit, he looked like some kind of royalty.
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Beside her, stood a man with silk-like blonde hair that had been grown long. With such a truly stylish outfit, he appeared like some kind of a royalty.
   
 
"It is not admirable of you bringing outsiders inside the guild, Nine."
 
"It is not admirable of you bringing outsiders inside the guild, Nine."
   
The blond man put out a modest smile along with calm tone of voice that had thorns of rationality in it. The cool ice-blue pair of eyes looked at the lined up faces in the courtyard in turn. The thin frame of his glasses emphasized his intelligence and dignity.
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The blond man put out a modest smile along with calm tone of voice had thorns of rationality in it. The cool ice-blue pair of eyes looked at the lined up faces in the courtyard in turn. The thin frame of his glasses emphasized his intelligence and dignity.
   
 
"Eight, Seven..."
 
"Eight, Seven..."
   
Nine dropped her voice in displeasure at the pair who were now standing in her way.
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Nine dropped her voice in displeasure as the pair of man and woman appeared and stood in her way.
   
 
Eight was the eighth and Seven was the seventh.
 
Eight was the eighth and Seven was the seventh.
   
Along with Nine as the ninth, they were Sages just like her. The proof was the conspicuously large triangular hats placed atop their heads.
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Along with Nine as the ninth, they were Ten Sages just like her. The proof was the conspicuously large triangular hat placed on top of their heads.
   
The Ten Sages——the honored people were outstanding magicians even among the Mage's Guild. They held the positions of highest authority over Ishana. The maximum number had been decided as ten people. But it was less than ten people right now. There were missing numbers as some positions in the Mage's Guild weren't filled.
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Ten Sages——the designated people who were outstanding magicians even among the Mage's Guild. They were existences that had the highest authority over Ishana. The maximum number of had been decided as ten people. But it was less than ten people right now. There were missing numbers as some positions in Mage's Guild weren't filled.
   
Seven, Eight, and Nine's ages were relatively young among the Ten Sages. The three of them also stood out in their abilities. But it was a well-known fact that Nine was especially young and blessed with a special talent.
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Seven, Eight, and Nine's age was relatively young among the Ten Sages. The three of them also stood out in their abilities. But it was a well-known fact that Nine was especially young and blessed with a special talent.
   
"Trinity. Sorry but go ahead and take Celica and the others."
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"Trinity. Sorry but go ahead and take Celica with everyone."
   
Without taking her eyes from the two Sages who stood on her way, Nine spoke in a terribly calm voice.
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Without taking her eyes from the two Ten Sages who stood on her way, Nine spoke in a terribly calm voice.
   
Trinity nodded quickly.
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Trinity nodded immediately.
   
 
"Understood. Everyone, let us go~."
 
"Understood. Everyone, let us go~."
   
"Is everything alright?"
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"Is it alright?"
   
Jubei was giving a concerned frown, but Trinity smiled to assuage his fear. Then she dropped her voice a little as she whispered into his ear.
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Jubei was frowning in his concern, but Trinity smiled to get rid of his fear. Then she dropped her voice a little as she whispered into his ear.
   
"It's okay. It'll be inconvenient if we have to leave the island for carelessly meddling in the Ten Sages' affairs~. Other than matters regarding the Black Beast, getting too deeply involved with Mage's Guild would put us into trouble."
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"It's okay. It'll be inconvenient if we have to get out of the island from being carelessly listening in Ten Sages' affairs~. Except regarding the Black Beast, getting too deeply involved with Mage's Guild would put us into trouble."
   
 
"I see..."
 
"I see..."
   
He was still not yet fully convinced, but Jubei swung his tails in the stead of nodding. The only people who had as much interest in the Mage's Guild and Nine as Jubei did were Celica and Trinity. Without needing to be urged by Trinity again, Valkenhayn, Hakumen, and Terumi promptly exited the courtyard.
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He was still not yet fully convinced, but Jubei swung his tails in in exchange for nodding. The only people who had as much interest in Mage's Guild and Nine as Jubei did were just Celica and Trinity. Without needing to be urged by Trinity again, Valkenhayn, Hakumen, and Terumi promptly went out of the courtyard.
   
Afterwards, Jubei, Trinity, and Celica followed. ...But as Celica passed Seven, he grabbed her arm.
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Afterwards, Jubei, Trinity, and Celica followed. ...But when she was passing Seven, he grabbed Celica's arm.
   
 
"Hey!"
 
"Hey!"
   
Nine shouted in anger. On the spur of the moment, Trinity stopped walking and Jubei put himself on guard.
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Nine shouted in anger immediately. On the spur of the moment, Trinity stopped her feet while Jubei put himself on guard.
   
But Seven didn't release any strength from the grip that held Celica.
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But Seven didn't reduce the strength he put in the hand that grabbed Celica.
   
Celica stared at Seven in wonder. It wasn't like she knew him well, but Seven was someone who gave the impression of a gentleman with a polite demeanor and gentle attitude. It was surprising for him to rudely seize someone's arm while displaying such an awfully stern face.
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Celica stared at Seven in wonder. It wasn't like she knew him much, but Seven was someone who had thick image of a gentleman who had polite demeanor and gentle attitude. It was surprising for him to rudely seize someone's arm while having an awfully stern face.
   
 
Still grabbing Celica's arm, Seven loudly spoke.
 
Still grabbing Celica's arm, Seven loudly spoke.
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"Listen to me. Just go, Celica."
 
"Listen to me. Just go, Celica."
   
Unable to just watch, Nine stepped up and roughly separated Seven's hand from Celica's arm. Since she took the opportunity to let a light electric current flow, Seven of course removed his hand.
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Unable to just watching it, Nine stepped up and roughly separated Seven's hand from Celica's arm. Since she took the opportunity to let a light electric current flowed, Seven of course removed his hand.
   
But from the side, Eight interrupted with frivolous talk while fiddling with her hair which was spilling from under her hat.
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But from the side, Eight interrupted with frivolous talk while fiddling her hair that spilled from the hat.
   
 
"Hmm? Why are you keeping your sister away? Don’t you feel sorry for hiding such an important thing from her?"
 
"Hmm? Why are you keeping your sister away? Don’t you feel sorry for hiding such an important thing from her?"
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"Oh, but I do. Right, Celica-chan?"
 
"Oh, but I do. Right, Celica-chan?"
   
While replying with a carefree attitude toward the furious Nine, Eight looked at Celica.
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While talking back with carefree attitude to the furious Nine, Eight looked at Celica.
   
Celica got the feeling from Eight's suggestive look that Nine knew something that Celica wasn't aware of. Now, she was desperately trying to keep Celica away from it.
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Celica took a guess by intuition from Eight's suggestive look. Nine had something that Celica wasn't aware of. Now, she was desperately trying to keep Celica away from it.
   
 
Once she thought about it, she couldn't keep quiet anymore.
 
Once she thought about it, she couldn't keep quiet anymore.
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"Eh, eh, but..."
 
"Eh, eh, but..."
   
At Celica's flat declaration, which showed no hint of hesitation, Trinity got flustered and then looked to Nine. Without saying anything, her gentle green eyes conveyed her uncertainty.
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Since Celica flatly declared it without any hint of hesitation, Trinity got flustered and then looked at Nine. Without saying anything, her gentle green eyes looked troubled and asked what to do.
   
 
Nine held her head. Nine knew Celica's personality better than anyone. When Celica looked up straight and spoke frankly like now, it would be futile for anyone to oppose her.
 
Nine held her head. Nine knew Celica's personality better than anyone. When Celica looked up straight and spoke frankly like now, it would be futile for anyone to oppose her.

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