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"...It seems my glasses are stained."
 
"...It seems my glasses are stained."
   
The sweet echo sounded the same as ever. Contrary to its calm tone, fear clouded Celica and Nine's hearts as they began to understand the situation.
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The sweet echo sounded like usual. Contrary to its calm tone, fear clouded Celica and Nine's hearts as they began to understand the situation.
   
 
"Uh, umm, Trinity-san...? So-Sorry. I, um, never thought this would happen...!"
 
"Uh, umm, Trinity-san...? So-Sorry. I, um, never thought this would happen...!"
   
"Let's talk it through, Trinity! We surely will come into understanding!"
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"Let's talk it together, Trinity! We surely will come into understanding!"
   
 
"Wh-What? What's going on?"
 
"Wh-What? What's going on?"
   
Though he grasped the tension of the situation, seeing Celica and Nine apologizing profusely, Jubei couldn't understand what was happening. He became flustered while still holding his aching tail.
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Though he grasped the tension of the situation by watching Celica and Nine apologizing profusely, Jubei couldn't understand what was happening. He was flustered while holding his aching tail.
   
 
Nine then grasped his hand.
 
Nine then grasped his hand.
   
"I'll tell you the reason later. But for now, we should apologize. You too!"
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"I'll tell the reason later. But for now, we should apologize. You too!"
   
Turning around far enough that his neck clicked, Terumi, who was stretching his hand to get the black tea that had just come, raised his face.
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Being turned around strong enough to make a noise, Terumi, who was stretching his hand to get the black tea that had just come, raised his face.
   
 
"Huh? Me too!?"
 
"Huh? Me too!?"
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"Tch, dammit. What's with you? Her glasses are just dirty, so..."
 
"Tch, dammit. What's with you? Her glasses are just dirty, so..."
   
"'Just'? Did you say 'just'...?"
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"'Just'? Did you say 'just' before...?"
   
Trinity's whisper silenced Terumi's abusive words as he started to grumble. Normally, it wouldn't happen. But currently, Trinity wasn't her usual calm self.
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Trinity's whisper silenced Terumi's abusive words as he started to grumble. Normally, it shouldn't be happening. But currently, Trinity wasn't in her usual state.
   
 
In the end, Trinity slowly took a breath.
 
In the end, Trinity slowly took a breath.
   
"...Everyone, I have to tell you something."
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"...Everyone, I have to tell something."
   
 
Her smile was kind enough to be horrific.
 
Her smile was kind enough to be horrific.
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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
The moon was once again full in the sky of the endless night. It looked like a giant water basin.
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The sky of the endless night had a full moon again tonight. It looked similar to a water basin.
   
The silver light pouring forth from the white disc was serene and cold. It illuminated the castle which stood beautiful but solemn within a vast rose garden. It was like something from a fairy tale stood there alone in the silence.
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The down pouring silver light was serene and cold. It illuminated the erected castle. The beautiful but solemn castle like those from fairy tales was among the vast rose garden. It stood alone in silence.
   
A place belonged to nowhere, yet connected with every dark night of the world. Existing but nonexistent. Similar the dark side of the moon... Once, this place was described as such by the lord of the castle. The castle once belonged to a vampire who spent his life watching over the people of the world.
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A place belonged to nowhere, yet connected with every dark night of the world. Exist but nonexistent. Similar the other side of the moon... Once, this place was described as such by the lord of the castle. The castle of the vampire who spent his live watching over the people in the world.
   
Her predecessor, Clavis Alucard, had died around eight months ago, Rachel Alucard presently acted as the castle's lady. Still a young female vampire, this torn, small world recognized her as its new master. It was painted in the bountiful red of roses, befitting the youth of the castle's lady.
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As her predecessor, Clavis Alucard, died around eight months ago, Rachel Alucard presently acted as the castle's lady. Still a young female vampire, the torn, small world recognized her as the new master. It was painted in the bountiful red of roses, befitting the youth of the castle's lady.
   
The spectacle of the garden was magnificent to behold, as could be seen from a long vertical window installed at the front of the castle.
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The spectacle of the garden was very magnificent as could be seen from a long vertical window installed in a room of the castle.
   
Rachel touched the cold windowpane with the young fingers peeking from the sleeve of her black dress. Slipping away from her favorite scenery, she averted her gaze from it and elegantly turned around.
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Rachel touched the cold windowpane with the young fingers peeking from the sleeve of her black dress. Slipping from her favorite scenery, she removed her gaze from it and elegantly turned behind.
   
 
"...I see. You can't remember it still."
 
"...I see. You can't remember it still."
   
Following the girl's movement, her golden hair, tied at high position on both sides, swayed along with its large decorative ribbons.
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Together with the girl's movement, her golden hair that were tied at high position on both sides swayed along with the big ribbons.
   
A faint magical light flickered inside the room, revealing two figures beside Rachel.
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The faint magical light flickered inside the room, revealing two figures beside Rachel. At the same time, the light indicated a tall man with muscular body.
   
Sweeping over the tall man with the muscular body. The rose red pupils of the adolescent girl fixed on a taller figure. Illuminated by the faint light, the emerging white figure looked just like a ghost.
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The rose red pupils of the adolescent girl were directed toward the taller figure. Illuminated by the faint light, the emerging white figure looked just like a ghost.
   
 
"It appears that we cannot depend on your memories, Mr. Hero of the Future."
 
"It appears that we cannot depend on your memories, Mr. Hero of the Future."
   
Putting aside her slight disappointment, Rachel addressed the ghost.
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Putting her slight disappointment, Rachel addressed the ghost.
   
 
The ghost's name was Hakumen.
 
The ghost's name was Hakumen.
   
"...Do you know what he intends to accomplish?"
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"...Do you know what he intend to accomplish?"
   
He stared directly at Rachel without making even a slight movement, questioning her in a muffled voice. Those who didn't know Hakumen would think he was a talking sculpture.
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He stared directly at Rachel without making any slight movement, questioning with muffled voice. Those who didn't know Hakumen would see him like a talking sculpture.
   
Amused, Rachel slowly blinked her doll-like large eyes.
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Amused by it, Rachel slowly blinked her dollish large eyes.
   
"Compared to you who doesn't remember anything, I would say so."
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"Compared to you who don't remember anything, I would say so."
   
 
"Then, is that man really scheming something...?"
 
"Then, is that man really scheming something...?"
   
Between Hakumen and Rachel, the other man asked a little bit over-eagerly. When he took a step forward, the long hair tied at his back swayed anxiously. He was Valkenhayn.
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Between Hakumen and Rachel, the other figure of man asked with a little bit of eagerness. When he took a step forward, the tied long hair on his back swayed anxiously. He was Valkenhayn.
   
Toward the question from the loyal butler who had been serving since her father, Clavis' time, Rachel answered not with words. She turned toward the window again and only responded with silence and a distant gaze.
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Toward the question from the loyal butler who had been serving from her father, Clavis' time, Rachel answered not with words. She turned toward the window again and only responded with silence and distant gaze.
   
In his regret, Valkenhayn tightened a fist in front of his chest.
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In his regret, Valkenhayn tightened the fist in front of his chest.
   
"Regardless, that man has the scent of danger. He shouldn't have been released before... It is not too late. While Mind Eater is still in effect, I shall take his life!"
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"Regardless, that man has the scent of danger. He shouldn't have been released before... It is not too late. While Mind Eater is still effective, I shall take his life!"
   
 
"You must not, Valkenhayn."
 
"You must not, Valkenhayn."
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Contrary to their young appearance, her eyes contained deep wisdom. The blood red pupils faintly wavered.
 
Contrary to their young appearance, her eyes contained deep wisdom. The blood red pupils faintly wavered.
   
"That man must not be killed. He still has some value. No, his help is indispensable. If not, then there will be no significance in anyone's struggle."
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"That man must not be killed. He still has some values. No, his help is indispensable. If not, then there will be no significance in anyone's struggle."
   
 
After speaking that much, Rachel briefly sighed. When she closed her eyes, her long eyelashes made shadows on the pale skin around her eyes.
 
After speaking that much, Rachel briefly sighed. When she closed her eyes, her long eyelashes made shadows on the pale skin around her eyes.
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"...Besides, we are not able to kill that man."
 
"...Besides, we are not able to kill that man."
   
The whisper slightly shook the air under her breath.
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Her muttering voice slightly shook the air.
   
 
Groaning, Valkenhayn turned silent. Hakumen just stood there quietly.
 
Groaning, Valkenhayn turned silent. Hakumen just stood there quietly.
   
Without looking at either of them, Rachel lightly bit her flower bud-like lips.
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Without directing her eyes to anyone, Rachel lightly bit her flower bud-like lips.
   
 
Her eyes were watching everything in the world. Her ears were hearing everything in the world. Her mind was memorizing everything in the world. However, her hands couldn’t change the world. Even if she knew what awaited in the future.
 
Her eyes were watching everything in the world. Her ears were hearing everything in the world. Her mind was memorizing everything in the world. However, her hands couldn’t change the world. Even if she knew what awaited in the future.
 
 
"It is humanity's choices that will decide the future. It will never change now and forever. That is why, it is not something we can change."
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"It is humanity's choice that will decide the future. It will never change now and forever. That is why, it is not something we can change."
   
The red eyes looked at the white face. They held some sympathy.
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The red eyes looked at the white face. They had a sympathy somewhere.
   
There was a deteriorating sweet scent in the flowing silence. It might have come from Valkenhayn's master.
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There was a deteriorating sweet scent in the flowing silence. It might came from Valkenhayn's master.
   
Eventually, Hakumen moved and turned his back from the young lady of the castle. The tall, large sword he carried bore some kind of dignity.
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Eventually, Hakumen pulled his body and turned his back from the young lady of the castle. The tall, large sword he carried bore some kind of dignity into it.
   
"If that is your conclusion, then I will not oppose you. However, whether you choose providence, reasons, or neither, I have a different belief than yours."
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"If that is your conclusion, then I will not oppose. However, whether you choose providence, reasons, or none at all, I have a different belief than yours."
   
 
"You spoke of interesting thing. Will you try and do the impossible?"
 
"You spoke of interesting thing. Will you try and do the impossible?"
   
"My blade is to slay my enemy... the Dark One. I would cut reasons to carry that purpose if I had to."
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"My blade is to slay my enemy... the Dark One. I would cut reasons to carry that purpose if needed."
   
After leaving those words, Hakumen took a large step forward. With the long silver hair at his back swaying, he left the dim room.
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After leaving those words, Hakumen largely stepped forward. With the spilling silver hair on his back swaying, he left the dim room.
   
Watching over the retreating figure from behind, Rachel gave a weak smile. But her eyes were far from smiling as they gleamed with cold light.
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Watching over the retreating figure from behind, Rachel engraved a weak smile. But her eyes were far from smiling as they were gleaming with cold light.
   
"...Cut reasons... Then you would sever this tale? Would you, Mr. Hero?"
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"...Cut reasons... Then you would sever this tale? Do you, Mr. Hero?"
   
 
The moon in the sky of the rose garden didn’t reply. Of course, Rachel didn't have the answer to her own question.
 
The moon in the sky of the rose garden didn’t reply. Of course, Rachel didn't have the answer to her own question.
   
There was only her incomparably loyal butler bowing to her before exiting the room to brew her tea.
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There was only her incomparably loyal butler giving a bow to her before exiting the room to brew her tea.
   
While listening to the departing footsteps, Rachel opened the window wide. As she did so, the scent of the night and roses surged in.
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While listening to the departing footsteps, Rachel opened the window wide. Just as she did so, the scent of night and rose surged forward.
   
In the mood of the night. In the empty mood of the night, she longed to drink Valkenhayn's black tea.
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In the feeling of the night. In the empty feeling of the night, she longed to drink Valkenhayn's black tea.
   
 
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