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Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.
 
Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.
   
It was taller even than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was modeled after a lady in her middle age.
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Its height was even taller than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was modelled after a lady that looked a little old.
   
Judging from the face, as well as the clothes it was modeled with, something like a dress with long skirt, the doll must be a female type.
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Judging from something like a dress with long skirt that was worn, the doll must be a female type.
   
But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body proportions were also strange as its arms were big and long.
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But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body proportion was also strange as its arms were big and long.
   
 
"You wanted to show me this?"
 
"You wanted to show me this?"
   
Still wide-eyed, Celica's gaze repeatedly darted back and forth between Nine and the doll.
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While still wide-eyed, Celica compared Nine and the doll many times over.
   
Nine gazed at Celica with a warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.
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Nine gazed at Celica with warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.
   
 
"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."
 
"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."
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"Eh?"
 
"Eh?"
   
Unable to grasp what Nine had just so calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.
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Unable to grasp the sudden topic that had been calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.
   
Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine gave her a light smile.
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Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine put a light smile.
   
"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My remaining time in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying on the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I made a bodyguard for you, to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not at your side."
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"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My time to remain in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying in the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I have a bodyguard for you to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not on your side."
   
 
"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"
 
"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"
   
Celica gave her a wry smile.
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Celica put a wry smile.
   
Nine worried too much about Celica. She was thankful for the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine to go as far as to make a bodyguard.
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Nine worried too much for Celica's daily life. She was thankful of the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine doing as far as making a bodyguard.
   
"I'm not really in that much danger. And in the any case, I won't be leaving the island with you and the others. I don't think there's anything here that I need to be protected from."
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"I'm not really in that much of a danger. And in the first place, I won't leave the island like Onee-chan and the others. I think there's nothing here that makes me need to be protected."
   
Ishana was referred to as ''the world's safest island''.
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Ishana was referred as ''the world's safest island''.
   
The island was guarded by an invisible magical barrier. It could even handle physical attacks, like stopping a missile barrage for example. Anything trying to enter the island was examined by the barrier to see if it contained any risk related to organic or inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.
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The island was guarded by an invisible barrier made from magic. It could even handle something more physical, like stopping missile barrage for example. Anything that was going to enter the island would get examined to see if they contained any risk related to organic and inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.
   
Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and harm the people in Ishana was equal to zero.
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Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and harming the people in Ishana was equal to zero.
   
 
In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.
 
In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.
   
"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I wholeheartedly reject the opinion that you are not in danger."
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"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I will use all my power to reject your opinion about not being in danger."
   
"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly at risk or anything."
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"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly in risk or something."
   
Growing slightly more sullen, Celica argued with her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.
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Getting slightly sullen, Celica argued her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.
   
"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without going through the proper procedures? Who was it that could not be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"
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"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without doing procedures? Who was it that could no longer be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"
   
"T-That was, umm, a coincidence. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."
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"T-That was, umm, a coincident. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."
   
Still fresh in their memories, the incident that had developed into a quite a dangerous experience was being brought up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and her awkward smile.
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Still fresh in memories, the incident that had developed into a quite dangerous experience was being dug up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and awkwardly smiling.
   
Since that was when she had met Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that had shortened her life span considerably.
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Since she had been able to meet a man named Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to a very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that shortened her life span considerably.
   
 
Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.
 
Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.
   
"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat to your daily life we spoke of will be about to begin."
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"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat in your daily life we spoke of will about to begin."
   
 
"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"
 
"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"
   
"By all means, please be aware that I am."
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"Now that's a good penchant. By all means, please be aware of it."
   
Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With a pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.
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Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.
   
After that, anxiety flashed across her eyes, just for a moment.
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After that, anxiety showed on her eyes just for a bit.
   
"...It's fine for you to think I'm worrying too much. But four months time, it's hard to predict what will happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"
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"...It's fine if you're thinking I'm worrying too much. But in four months to come, it's hard to predict what would happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"
   
 
"I see... Only four months left."
 
"I see... Only four months left."
   
The Black Beast was being stalled for a year. Four months from now, that peace would be over.
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Black Beast was ceasing its activities for a year. Then four months later, the silence would be over.
   
It was something Celica was fully aware of. In preparation for that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.
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It was something Celica had known, too. To face that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.
   
 
But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people around her. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was immersed in her work.
 
But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people around her. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was immersed in her work.

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