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Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.
 
Spontaneously, a surprised voice leaked from Celica's lips.
   
It was taller even than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was modeled after a lady in her middle age.
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Its height was even taller than Hakumen, the tallest person Celica knew. But if Celica had to say something, the doll had slender limbs. Its metallic face was modelled after a lady that looked a little old.
   
Judging from the face, as well as the clothes it was modeled with, something like a dress with long skirt, the doll must be a female type.
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Judging from something like a dress with long skirt that was worn, the doll must be a female type.
   
But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body proportions were also strange as its arms were big and long.
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But its body was a bit large for a doll. The body proportion was also strange as its arms were big and long.
   
 
"You wanted to show me this?"
 
"You wanted to show me this?"
   
Still wide-eyed, Celica's gaze repeatedly darted back and forth between Nine and the doll.
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While still wide-eyed, Celica compared Nine and the doll many times over.
   
Nine gazed at Celica with a warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.
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Nine gazed at Celica with warm look. She assured her by nodding and then moved her gaze to the doll.
   
 
"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."
 
"You see, this doll would act with the purpose of 'guarding' a predetermined person. It'd protect them from danger and then lead them to escape. Depending on the situation, it would chase away the attackers."
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"Eh?"
 
"Eh?"
   
Unable to grasp what Nine had just so calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.
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Unable to grasp the sudden topic that had been calmly said, Celica asked again with her mouth half-opened.
   
Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine gave her a light smile.
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Wondering if it sounded odd, Nine put a light smile.
   
"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My remaining time in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying on the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I made a bodyguard for you, to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not at your side."
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"From here onward, the state of things in the world will get worse. My time to remain in Ishana keeps decreasing. Even when I'm staying in the island, my time with you is quite limited. That's why I have a bodyguard for you to prevent any unexpected occurrence while I'm not on your side."
   
 
"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"
 
"Aha... But whatever the circumstances is, don't you think it's too exaggerated?"
   
Celica gave her a wry smile.
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Celica put a wry smile.
   
Nine worried too much about Celica. She was thankful for the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine to go as far as to make a bodyguard.
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Nine worried too much for Celica's daily life. She was thankful of the thought, but Celica didn't expect Nine doing as far as making a bodyguard.
   
"I'm not really in that much danger. And in the any case, I won't be leaving the island with you and the others. I don't think there's anything here that I need to be protected from."
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"I'm not really in that much of a danger. And in the first place, I won't leave the island like Onee-chan and the others. I think there's nothing here that makes me need to be protected."
   
Ishana was referred to as ''the world's safest island''.
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Ishana was referred as ''the world's safest island''.
   
The island was guarded by an invisible magical barrier. It could even handle physical attacks, like stopping a missile barrage for example. Anything trying to enter the island was examined by the barrier to see if it contained any risk related to organic or inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.
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The island was guarded by an invisible barrier made from magic. It could even handle something more physical, like stopping missile barrage for example. Anything that was going to enter the island would get examined to see if they contained any risk related to organic and inorganic matter. Even leaving the island required a number of procedures.
   
Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and harm the people in Ishana was equal to zero.
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Naturally, the possibility for seithr and seithr-induced mad creatures to get inside and harming the people in Ishana was equal to zero.
   
 
In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.
 
In response to Celica who was comfortably laughing, Nine on the contrary knitted her eyebrows to stress her concern.
   
"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I wholeheartedly reject the opinion that you are not in danger."
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"You leaving the island or not is a different story. I will use all my power to reject your opinion about not being in danger."
   
"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly at risk or anything."
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"Eeh, why!? I'm not particularly in risk or something."
   
Growing slightly more sullen, Celica argued with her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.
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Getting slightly sullen, Celica argued her. When she did that, Nine severely sharpened the glint in her eyes and frowned.
   
"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without going through the proper procedures? Who was it that could not be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"
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"Who was it again that slipped away from the island unauthorized without doing procedures? Who was it that could no longer be contacted for a month because of it, before finally getting stranded in the middle of a mountain? Hmm, I wonder who~?"
   
"T-That was, umm, a coincidence. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."
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"T-That was, umm, a coincident. It's because there were unclear circumstances..."
   
Still fresh in their memories, the incident that had developed into a quite a dangerous experience was being brought up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and her awkward smile.
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Still fresh in memories, the incident that had developed into a quite dangerous experience was being dug up. Celica blatantly averted her eyes and awkwardly smiling.
   
Since that was when she had met Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that had shortened her life span considerably.
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Since she had been able to meet a man named Ragna, the incident was a trigger that led to a very profound memories for Celica herself... But in Nine's case, it must be a matter that shortened her life span considerably.
   
 
Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.
 
Nine brazenly let out an astonished sigh.
   
"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat to your daily life we spoke of will be about to begin."
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"It's not just that. Tomorrow morning, the threat in your daily life we spoke of will about to begin."
   
 
"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"
 
"Aha... I get it. Are you worried?"
   
"By all means, please be aware that I am."
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"Now that's a good penchant. By all means, please be aware of it."
   
Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With a pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.
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Celica scratched her cheeks since she absolutely couldn't declare that she didn't remember. With pompous manner, Nine displayed a composed smile to her.
   
After that, anxiety flashed across her eyes, just for a moment.
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After that, anxiety showed on her eyes just for a bit.
   
"...It's fine for you to think I'm worrying too much. But four months time, it's hard to predict what will happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"
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"...It's fine if you're thinking I'm worrying too much. But in four months to come, it's hard to predict what would happen to Ishana. Don't you agree?"
   
 
"I see... Only four months left."
 
"I see... Only four months left."
   
The Black Beast was being stalled for a year. Four months from now, that peace would be over.
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Black Beast was ceasing its activities for a year. Then four months later, the silence would be over.
   
It was something Celica was fully aware of. In preparation for that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.
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It was something Celica had known, too. To face that day, Nine, Trinity, and the others were giving their all to work hard every day.
   
But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people around her. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was immersed in her work.
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But the thing was, Nine had always been prone to worry to the point that it astonished the people on her surroundings. It was easy to imagine her worrying about Celica even though she was being occupied.
   
Perhaps this doll might be the physical manifestation of her older sister's anxiety.
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Perhaps this doll might be the older sister's anxiety that had taken a form.
   
Thinking about it while looking up at her newly met bodyguard, a warm feeling gradually filled Celica. Then she began to smile broadly.
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By thinking about it while looking up at the bodyguard she met for the first time, a warm feeling gradually filled Celica. Then she began to smile broadly.
   
People viewed the beautiful, yet terrifying, Nine of the Ten Sages with awe. And yet, in secret, she was so afraid for the people close to her getting hurt. The anxiety she felt had always been unbearable.
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People saw the beautiful and terrifying Nine of the Ten Sages with awe. And yet in the back, she had been afraid for the people close to her getting hurt. The anxiety she felt had always been unbearable.
   
Celica loved that her sister held some fragility, just like everyone else.
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Celica also loved the fragile part of her persistent sister from the bottom of her heart.
   
"Got it. Well then, I guess I'll take the bodyguard since you've already built it. You did make it especially for me, after all."
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"Got it. Well then, I guess I'll take the bodyguard since it's already done. You've made it especially for me, after all."
   
After a short hop toward the doll, Celica turned to face Nine.
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After doing a hop toward the doll, Celica turned her face at Nine.
   
Standing with her arms folded below her chest like usual, Nine let out a sigh of relief and relaxed her eyes.
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Standing with arms folded below chest like usual, Nine let out a sigh of relieve and relaxed her eyes.
   
"That's right. I created it for you, to protect you. Something I made to protect my dear family."
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"That's right. I've created it for you, to protect you. Something I made to protect my dear family."
   
"Thank you, Onee-chan. Actually, I took a liking to this girl the first time I saw her. She's quite tall, but also seems beautiful and kind."
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"Thank you, Onee-chan. Actually, I've taken a liking to this girl from the first time I saw her. She's quite tall, but also seems beautiful and kind."
   
Completely focused, Celica stared at the doll with her large brown eyes. Nine stared at her in wonder, amazement and also admiration.
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Completely interested, Celica looked at the doll with her brown eyes. Nine stared her in wonder, feeling amazed and also admiration at her.
   
 
"What a girl. You know it's different from playing with a doll, right? Besides, I have yet to input her personality. The mouth also doesn't move."
 
"What a girl. You know it's different from playing with a doll, right? Besides, I have yet to input her personality. The mouth also doesn't move."
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Nine's astonishment changed into a wry smile.
 
Nine's astonishment changed into a wry smile.
   
Unable to exactly comprehend why her sister was so amazed, Celica tilted her head and replied with a smile too. She wondered if Nine wasn't pleased. It was so like her to be so worried.
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Unable to exactly understand why her sister got that amazed, Celica tilted her neck and replied with a smile too. She wondered if Nine wasn't pleased. It was so like her to be so worried.
   
In order to switch her feelings, Nine let out a deep sigh and let go of the strength in her shoulders. Then, she looked at Celica with a serious expression.
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In order to switch her feelings, Nine took a deep sigh and let go of the strength in her shoulders. Then, she looked at Celica with a bit of seriousness.
   
 
Getting roped in as expected, Celica straightened her back.
 
Getting roped in as expected, Celica straightened her back.
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"...Sorry, but I'm not going tell you what they are trying to do. But I can tell you this. If you cooperate with those lot, you'll lose your life for sure."
 
"...Sorry, but I'm not going tell you what they are trying to do. But I can tell you this. If you cooperate with those lot, you'll lose your life for sure."
   
From her voice and expression alone, Celica could understand how serious Nine was as she said it. But Celica didn't immediately nod. After biting her lip once, she looked straight at her sister.
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From her voice and expression alone, Celica could understand how serious Nine was when she was speaking. But Celica didn't immediately nod. After biting her lips once, she looked straight at her sister.
   
"But I will do my best to help. It doesn't mean I'd sacrifice myself, but maybe they just wanted some help with their research. They might find a solution that doesn't require my sacrifice."
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"But I will do my best if I can be useful. It doesn't mean I'd sacrifice myself, but maybe they just wanted some help with their research. They might find a solution that doesn't require my death."
   
Celica didn't know exactly what Seven and Eight were making and the significance of her being necessary. But whatever it was, if it could help Nine's plan, then Celica thought that her resolve wouldn't lose out to Nine's.
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Celica didn't know exactly what Seven and Eight were making and the significance of Celica being necessary. But whatever it was, if it could help Nine's plan, then Celica thought that her sincerity wouldn't lose to Nine's.
   
It wasn't about some sort of burning feeling to be recognised by Nine or wanting to help in the fight herself. But if there was a way for her to do something, then she wanted to give a bit of relief to others by doing it.
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It was nothing about some sort of burning feeling like getting recognized by Nine or wanting to help in the fight herself. But if there was a way for her to do something, then she wanted to give a bit of ease for somebody by doing it.
   
But looking into her sister's eyes as they became grim, Celica understood that she had made a careless remark.
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But looking at her sister's eyes that became grim, Celica understood that she had made a careless remark.
   
Celica thought that she was going to receive a harsh lecture, but instead Nine turned her face away to hide her dejected face before dropping her voice to let the hate out.
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Celica thought that she was going to receive a harsh lecture, but instead Nine turned her face away to hide her detested face before dropping her voice to let the hate out.
   
 
"What they're doing isn't that simple."
 
"What they're doing isn't that simple."
   
Celica understood a little.
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Celica understood for a bit.
   
She didn't have a complete grasp of it in the end. But from the bottom of her heart, Nine was disgusted with what Seven and Eight were trying to do.
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She didn't have complete grasp of it in the end. But from the bottom of her heart, Nine was disgusted with what Seven and Eight were trying to do.
   
"Celica. I want to protect your life no matter what. ...After all, that man risked himself to protect you."
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"Celica. I want to protect your life no matter what. ...After all, that man had risked himself to protect you."
   
 
That man. When she heard those words, Celica got attacked by a sensation that tightened her chest.
 
That man. When she heard those words, Celica got attacked by a sensation that tightened her chest.
   
Eight months ago, she met and parted with a man. Ragna. The promise he gave and exchanged with her. Many kinds of thought rushed through her mind.
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Eight months ago, she met and parted with a man. Ragna. The promise he gave and exchanged with her. Many kind of thoughts rushed to her mind.
   
Nine, who had been crossing her arms, embraced herself so tightly that her fingers sunk into her skin. It seemed the disordered wrinkles on her clothes showed Nine's emotions.
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Nine, who had been crossing her arms, embraced herself so tight that her fingers sunk into her skin. It seemed the disordered wrinkles on her clothes pictured Nine's emotions.
   
"To think that I was about to sacrifice you... I absolutely can't forgive myself."
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"To think that I was about to sacrifice you... I absolutely can't forgive myself. Even if someone does, I myself cannot."
   
 
"Onee-chan..."
 
"Onee-chan..."
   
What should she do? Nine endured herself to speak. To Celica, her voice sounded like she was condemning herself.
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What should she do? Nine endured herself to spoke. For Celica, her voice sounded like she was condemning herself.
   
 
Something. She wanted to do something. But since she couldn't let a single word out, Celica slowly reached out her hands to embrace Nine.
 
Something. She wanted to do something. But since she couldn't let a single word out, Celica slowly reached out her hands to embrace Nine.
   
When Celica's hand touched her arm, Nine let go of her superfluous strength after a short pause. Her mouth was soft, but a strong will resided in her pupils. Without changing that, she spoke to Celica.
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When Celica's hand touched her arm, Nine let go of her superfluous strength after a short pause. Her mouth was soft, but a strong will resided in her pupils. Without change, she made a speech at Celica.
   
 
"Got it? Even without those meddling losers, I will show you that I can defeat the Black Beast. Believe in your sister. There is nothing impossible for her."
 
"Got it? Even without those meddling losers, I will show you that I can defeat the Black Beast. Believe in your sister. There is nothing impossible for her."
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"Okay, got it. I'll trust you."
 
"Okay, got it. I'll trust you."
   
Celica nodded quite easily. It seemed as simple as when she was asked to do the weekly shop. But it was definitely not something trivial in her mind. It was just that easy. It was a thousand times easier than not getting lost when going to a bakery in the neighborhood.
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Celica nodded quite easily. It seemed as simple as when she was requested to buy groceries. But it was definitely not something trivial in her mind. It was just that easy. It was a thousand times easier than not getting lost when going to a bakery in the neighborhood.
   
Moreover, in Nine's opinion, Celica had to compare it with the difficulty to get to the bakery taking the shortest path, or she would get confused. But for now, Celica decided not to think about her own constitution of easily getting lost.
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Moreover, in Nine's opinion, Celica had to compare it with the difficulty to get her to the bakery using shortest path, or she would get confused. But for now, Celica decided not to think about her own constitution of easily getting lost.
   
 
"Hey, Onee-chan. What's her name?"
 
"Hey, Onee-chan. What's her name?"
   
If she were to trust Nine, she would have to befriend the bodyguard to reduce some of her sister's worries. Celica hopped to its front and picked took the doll's hand.
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If she were to trust Nine, she would have to befriend the bodyguard to reduce one of her sister's worries. Celica hopped to the front and picked up the doll's hand.
   
Its hand was big and cold, but she was growing to like even its improper modelling and unnatural feel.
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Its hand was big and cold, but she grew to like even its improper modelling and unnatural feel.
   
 
"She's Nirvana."
 
"She's Nirvana."
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After she answered, Nine began to chant a spell. A spell so that Nirvana would recognize Celica as the subject to protect.
 
After she answered, Nine began to chant a spell. A spell so that Nirvana would recognize Celica as the subject to protect.
   
But for Celica, it sounded simpler than a vow to protect or a contract between master and servant. If she were to explain it, then it might be a promise of friendship.
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But for Celica, it sounded simpler than a vow to protect or a contract between master and servant. If she were to speak of it, then it might be a promise of friendship.
   
 
"Let's get along, Nirvana."
 
"Let's get along, Nirvana."
   
Smiling, she gripped the hand she had taken in a handshake. After she opened her eyes, Nirvana awkwardly moved her neck and stared at Celica with her artificial eyes.
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Smiling, she gripped the hand she had taken to do a handshake. After she opened her eyes, Nirvana awkwardly moved her neck and stared at Celica with her artificial eyes.
   
   
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After Celica had left to prepare for dinner, Nine remained in the workshop alone, wanting to work on something.
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After Celica had left to prepare for dinner, Nine remained in the workshop alone as she wanted to do something.
   
Nirvana returned to the surface, following Celica. After using magic to confirm that the workshop's door had been tightly shut, Nine stood between the two bookshelves as if ensnared by them.
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Nirvana returned to the surface following Celica. After using magic to confirm that the workshop's door had been tightly shut, Nine stood between the two bookshelves as if lured by them.
   
 
The wall there was wide enough for two people. A number of drawings were pasted there in the place of furniture.
 
The wall there was wide enough for two people. A number of drawings were pasted there in the place of furniture.
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Nine faced the wall and held up her hand. As she did, reacting to its master, a small magic circle emerged from the other side of the drawings.
 
Nine faced the wall and held up her hand. As she did, reacting to its master, a small magic circle emerged from the other side of the drawings.
   
A few short phrases and a twist of her hand in the air made the magic circle rotate. Next, the wall itself started to turn.
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Short phrases and twisting her hand on the air made the magic circle rotated. Next, the wall in front of her eyes itself started to turn.
   
Beyond the now open wall, a staircase leading even further into the basement was formed.
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Beyond, a staircase leading to even further down was formed.
   
Nine stepped forward and then breathed life to the staircase that was normally shut in deep darkness by creating a faint light.
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Nine stepped forward and then breathed life to the staircase that was shut in deep darkness by creating a faint light.
   
This staircase was much, much, longer than the one leading to the workshop itself. Nine's heels etched noises as she walked.
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It lasted far, far, longer than getting down to the workshop itself. Nine's heels etched noises as she walked.
   
The air was cold, full of the characteristic feeling of being underground.
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The air was cold, full of the characteristic feels of the underground.
   
What awaited at the end of the prolonged journey was a large gate made of old wood.
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What awaited at the end of the eternal journey was a large gate made of old wood.
   
Nine used both hands to push the gate, which was so plain as to be unbefitting of its large size. An enormous magic circle manifested before spinning like a cogwheel. Then the gate solemnly and gracefully opened its mouth.
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Nine used both hands to push the gate that was so plain it was unbefitting of its large appearance. An enormous magic circle manifested before it stirred like a cogwheel. Then the gate solemnly and gracefully opened its mouth.
   
A noise of heels stepping inside.
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The noise of heels stepped inside.
   
Appropriate with the descending staircase, beyond the door was a room with a ceiling as tall as eyes could see. Different from the upper floor, the wall, ceiling, and floor were covered in metal. The considerable size of the area was enough to cleanly fit Nine's workshop in it.
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Appropriate with the descending staircase, beyond the door was a room with ceiling as tall as eyes could see. Different from the upper floor, the wall, ceiling, and floor were covered in metal. The considerable size of the area was enough to cleanly fit Nine's workshop in it.
   
But the inside that should have had plenty of space was occupied by something rather gigantic.
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But the indoor that should have had plenty of space was occupied by something rather gigantic.
   
The object was an upside down cone, barely suspended from the ceiling by chains.
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The object was an upside down cone barely suspended on the ceiling by using chains.
   
In accordance with its abnormal, or incomprehensibley coated silver surface, a great number of faintly shining green lines ran across it.
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In accordance to its abnormal, or incomprehensible balance of silver surface, a great number of faintly shining green lines ran on it.
   
Its structure made it hard to believe that it was manufactured by man's hands. The structure was lovely. If someone were to say that it was sculpted by god, a large number of people might firmly believe it.
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Its structure made it hard to believe so suddenly that it was manufactured by man's hands. The structure was lovely. If someone were to say that it was sculpted by god, a large number of people might firmly believe it.
   
The object that appeared to be a huge nail was encircled by a number of purple rings. They were seals Nine had created. They were so secure that they gave off a sense of tenacity over and over again.
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The object that appeared to be a huge nail of a wedge was encircled by many number of purple rings. They were seals Nine had created. They were so secure that they gave off a sense of tenacity over and over again.
   
"I've never thought... that I might have to borrow your power."
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"I've never thought... that I have to borrow your power."
   
With her back facing the closed gate, Nine hatefully gazed at the suspended silver and green object.
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With her back facing the shut gate, Nine hatefully gazed at the suspended silver and green object.
   
It was a device found at the location where Black Beast first appeared. Now the place was called ''District 1''. It was able to temporarily stop the flow of seithr that originated from the Boundary.
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It was a device found at the location where Black Beast first appeared. Now the place was called as ''District 1''. It was able to temporarily stop the flow of seithr that originated from the Boundary.
   
 
Its manufacturer was Shuuichirou Ayatsuki. Nine and Celica's father.
 
Its manufacturer was Shuuichirou Ayatsuki. Nine and Celica's father.
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Ishana was covered with a barrier which had been protecting it from seithr. The barrier was so strong that even the weather of the outside world was unable to affect the island.
 
Ishana was covered with a barrier which had been protecting it from seithr. The barrier was so strong that even the weather of the outside world was unable to affect the island.
   
Due to seithr, the climate had been disturbed and the planet had lost the concept of seasons. The usual traits that happened when summer turned into autumn were no more. The warmness on the air felt the same as ever.
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Caused by seithr, the climate had been disturbed and lost the concept of season. The usual traits that happened when summer turned into fall were no more. The warmness on the air felt the same as ever.
   
It was just perfect to wear long sleeved clothes since most of the days in August were in that condition. Speaking of change, Celica wondered if the color of the sunset would have been even prettier during other seasons.
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It was just perfect to wear long sleeved clothes since most of the days in August were in that condition. Speaking of change, Celica wondered if the color of the sunset would be even prettier during other seasons.
   
The pretty sunset was about to commence in the western sky when Celica was walking homewards as she had finished with today's lessons at the academy.
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The pretty sunset was about to commence in the western sky when Celica was walking toward her home as she had finished with the academy's lessons.
   
Nirvana was walking alongside her on the way back.
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Nirvana was going along with her on the way back.
   
The truth was, Celica had been thinking of leaving Nirvana waiting for her at home when she went to the academy. She wouldn't want to attract attention while just walking to school.
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The truth was, Celica had been thinking to have Nirvana waiting at home when she had to go to the academy. It was because she would attract attention when they were going to the academy.
   
However, Nine had been making Celica take Nirvana along wherever she went when she was not on the island. Since it was a request rather than an order, Celica resigned herself and decided to bear the odd looks from her surroundings.
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However, Nine had been making Celica to take Nirvana along thoroughly when she was not in the island. Since it was a request rather than an order, Celica resigned herself and decided to bear the odd looks from her surroundings.
   
Of course, Celica couldn't bring her into the classroom. Thus, Nine had been using her position as a Ten Sage to borrow an office inside the Mage's Guild for Nirvana to standby there while Celica was taking a class.
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Of course, Celica couldn't bring her to the classroom. Thus, Nine had been using her position as a Ten Sage to borrow an office inside the Mage's Guild for Nirvana to standby there when Celica was taking a class.
   
It took time and effort travelling to and from the Mage's Guild like she did every morning and evening. However, Celica enjoyed her bizarre accompanied commute a little. The reason might be because she hadn't had any company one her walk since Nine was gone and all of her close friends were living in the student dormitory.
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It took time and effort travelling from and to Mage's Guild like she did in morning and returning home. However, Celica liked this bizarre commuting for a bit. The reason might be because she had no one to accompany her going home since Nine was gone and that all her close friends were living in the student dormitory.
   
When she looked up at the tall doll that had been matching her walking pace, the light of the day that had begun to turn orange was reflected on Nirvana's metallic skin and glass-like clear eyes. It was pretty.
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When she looked up at the tall doll that had been matching her walking pace with Celica, the light of the day that had begun to turn orange got reflected on Nirvana's metallic skin and glass-like clear eyes. It was pretty.
   
"Come to think of it, I wonder how many days left until Onee-chan gets back. It's tiring to make just one dish every day."
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"Come to think of it, I wonder how many days left until Onee-chan back. It's tiring to make just one dish every day."
   
Kicking a pebble with her tiptoe, Celica dropped her shoulders and gave a faint sigh.
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While kicking a rolling pebble with her tiptoe, Celica dropped her shoulders along with a faint sigh.
   
Currently, Nine wasn't in Ishana. According to what she been told when she received Nirvana, her older sister would be more and more busy starting September or something. She would also have to leave the island for a few days.
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Currently, Nine wasn't in Ishana. According to what she had heard when she received Nirvana, her older sister would be more and more busy coming September or something. She would also have to leave the island for a few days.
   
It wasn't just Nine. It was also true for Trinity, Jubei, Valkenhayn, Hakumen, and Terumi. Even if she was in the Mage's Guild, Celica didn't know the specifics of what they were doing as she was just a mere student. But it seemed they spent day after day being busy and in a hurry.
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It wasn't just Nine. It was also true for Trinity, Jubei, Valkenhayn, Hakumen, and Terumi. Even if she was in Mage's Guild, Celica didn't know the specific of what they were doing as she was just a mere student. But it seemed they spent day after day being busy and in a hurry.
   
 
Taking a look at the school bag she held in her hand, Celica took another breath.
 
Taking a look at the school bag she held in her hand, Celica took another breath.
   
She wondered if it was okay to leisurely commute to the academy and study at a time like this.
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She wondered if it was okay to leisurely commute to the academy and studying at such time.
   
Unlike other students, she recognized the true state of affairs although only half of it. Because of that, she had been thinking about it far too much.
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Unlike other students, she recognized the true state of affairs although only half of it. Because of that, she had been thinking about it for too much.
   
As Nine and the teachers at the academy had said, the students should keep practicing every day and prepare themselves so they wouldn't get outdone by the Mage's Guild's magicians when the crucial time comes... or some kind of important duty like that.
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As Nine and the academy teachers had said, the students should keep doing practice every day and prepare themselves so they wouldn't get outdone by Mage's Guild's magicians when the crucial time comes... or some kind of important duty like that.
   
(Well, it's expected. I'm only a burden to Onee-chan now. I have to study hard so I can stop being a burden to her as soon as possible.)
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(Well, it's expected. I'm only a burden to Onee-chan now. Have to study hard so I can quickly stop being a burden one day.)
   
What she was telling herself had also become a routine for the past few days. After all, she wasn't fully satisfied with just saying it. Her real motive was that if there was something she could do, then she wanted to do it as soon as she could.
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What she was telling herself had also become a routine for the past few days. After all, she wasn't fully satisfied with just saying it. Her real motive was that if there was something she could do, then she wanted to do it as soon as possible.
   
"For now, I guess I've got a while to relax and tidy the house before Onee-chan returns."
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"For now, I guess it's been while for me to take it easy and clean the house until Onee-chan returns."
   
 
"Right?" said Celica to Nirvana. She responded by moving her chin and staring at Celica.
 
"Right?" said Celica to Nirvana. She responded by moving her chin and staring at Celica.
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Looking at her expression, Celica laughed a little.
 
Looking at her expression, Celica laughed a little.
   
The streets in Ishana were cobbled stone pavements. When she walked home, she would normally take the main street heading from the academy towards the port. Then, after a little while she would turn down a side street, taking a little detour past a quiet park.
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The streets in Ishana were practically stone pavements. When she was going home, she would use the main street heading from the academy to the port. Then after leaving the street halfway and taking a turn, she would take a little detour by walking beside a quiet park.
   
Since she had to do the shopping today, instead she stayed on the main street. Celica was lost in thought while waiting to cross at a junction. Then, it happened.
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Since she had to do shopping today, she headed toward the main street. Celica thought about it while trying to go past a junction. Then, it happened.
   
 
"Celica A. Mercury. I wonder if I can have a bit of your time."
 
"Celica A. Mercury. I wonder if I can have a bit of your time."
   
She recognised the refreshing voice of the man which called to her from behind.
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A familiar refreshing voice of a man could be heard from behind.
   
Celica turned to look for him. What she saw was a pair, a man and a woman. The man looked like some kind of a noble due to his graceful manner, and the woman of slender body wore a dress that was wide open at the chest. There were large triangular hats atop their heads.
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Celica stopped her feet and turned her body around. What awaited was a pair of man and woman. A man that looked like some kind of a noble when judged from his graceful manner, and a woman with slender body who wore a dress that was wide open on the chest area. There were large triangular hats on top of their heads.
   
 
"Ah, Seven-san, Eight-san. Good day."
 
"Ah, Seven-san, Eight-san. Good day."
   
She immediately recalled Nine's dangerous mood when she met them in August. But Celica greeted them with a smile.
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She immediately recalled Nine's dangerous mood when she met them on August. But Celica greeted them with a smile.
   
Nine would not be amused if she were here.
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Nine wouldn't make an amused face if she were here.
   
Eight stared in wonder, as if puzzled by something. Her long, curled eyelashes batted quickly.
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Eight stared in wonder like she was being puzzled. Her long eyelashes that had lovely curls went up and down frantically.
   
"It's surprising how pleasant you are. Are you really Nine's sister?"
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"It's surprising that you're a pretty likeable. Are you really Nine's sister?"
   
"Yes, of course... What do you mean by that?"
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"Yes, of course... Hmm? What do you mean by that?"
   
As she pondered on the meaning of the question, Celica reflexively looked down at her own body. It was the first thing that came to mind if when searching for the reason why her relation to her sister was in question.
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As she suddenly thought about it, Celica reflexively looked down on her own body. It was the first that came to mind if she was searching for the reason why her blood relations with her sister were being questioned. Certainly, if she was her younger sister, then she would have a louder voice or so as she thought.
   
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Just as she was thinking about it, a noise could be heard. Celica took notice and raised her face.
"Could it be that she's surprised that Nine's sister's breasts are smaller than hers...?"
 
   
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Still standing with both hands on her hips with lips making a smile, Eight's eyes twitched.
Just as she was thinking about it, a noise broke her from her musing. Celica looked up.
 
   
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"...But it seems like you have the similar tendency to upset me."
Still standing with both hands on her hips, flashing a smile, Eight's eyes twitched.
 
 
"...But it seems like you do have a similar tendency to upset me."
 
   
 
It was a taboo to talk about Eight's proportion.
 
It was a taboo to talk about Eight's proportion.
   
Celica instinctively put her hands over her mouth.
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Celica instinctively put her hands on her mouth.
   
  +
With a considerably amazed tone of voice, Seven interrupted with a cough.
Interrupting with a cough, Seven spoke in a calm tone of voice.
 
   
"...Would it be all right to begin our talk?"
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"...Will it be all right to begin our talk?"
   
Behind the thin metal framed glasses, his calm ice blue eyes stared at Celica and Eight who were facing each other. As his manner was like a teacher from the academy, Celica retracted her chin, straightened her back, and brushed it off with a laugh.
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Beyond the thin metal framed glasses, his calm ice blue eyes stared at Celica and Eight who were facing each other. As his manner was like a teacher from the academy, Celica retracted her chin, straightened her back, and brushed it off with a laugh.
   
 
"Ah, y-yes. Go on."
 
"Ah, y-yes. Go on."
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After she urged him, Celica let out an 'ah' as she suddenly realized.
 
After she urged him, Celica let out an 'ah' as she suddenly realized.
   
"But Onee-chan's not here this time though...?"
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"But Onee-chan's not here today though...?"
   
"It's alright if she's not here. Our business only concerns you."
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"It's alright if she's not here. We only have a business with you."
   
Having regained her composure, Eight teasingly winked at Celica while entangling a wisp of hair that had spilled from under her hat onto her shoulder.
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Completely pulled herself together, Eight teasingly winked at her while entangling a wisp of hair that had spilled from the hat to her shoulder.
   
It was Seven who took the initiative to raise the main issue. Putting a real serious face, he adjusted his glasses with his index finger.
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It was Seven who took after that and asked the main issue. Putting a real serious face, he adjusted his glasses with his index finger.
   
 
"I will ask bluntly. Cooperate with our research."
 
"I will ask bluntly. Cooperate with our research."
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"Research..."
 
"Research..."
   
Muttering, Celica stole a glance at Nirvana.
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Muttering, Celica took a glance at Nirvana.
   
Nirvana was standing behind Celica.
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Nirvana was standing by behind Celica.
   
She remembered what Nine had said the day she met Nirvana. Celica spoke in a more quiet voice.
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She remembered what Nine had said during the day she met Nirvana.
   
 
"That's what Onee-chan has been opposing, right? ...She said I'll lose my life if I cooperate."
 
"That's what Onee-chan has been opposing, right? ...She said I'll lose my life if I cooperate."
   
But she wondered if such dangerous research was really being performed in a place like Ishana. Moreover, by the hands of Nine's fellow Sages.
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But she wondered if such dangerous research was really performed in a place like Ishana. Moreover, by the hands of Nine's fellow Ten Sages.
   
Seven looked baffled and vigorously shook his head.
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Noticing the surrounding as Celica dropped her voice, Seven put a baffled face and greatly shook his head.
   
"Perish the thought that you will die. Nine has had quite the misunderstanding. Our research only requires a bit of magical power and the unique healing ability you have. Generally, an unusual disposition of magical power, like yours, is needed."
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"Perish the thought that you will die. Nine has quite a misunderstanding. Our research only requires a bit of magical power and the unique healing ability you have. Generally, an unusual disposition of magical power is needed."
   
 
"Is... that so? Then..."
 
"Is... that so? Then..."
   
"Perhaps Nine so strongly doesn't want you to be involved in this research that she felt she must make an exaggerated lie. She really is a difficult woman."
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"Perhaps Nine doesn't want you to be involved with this research so much that she made an exaggerated lie. She really is a difficult woman."
   
"Good grief", said Seven, placing one pale finger on his brow.
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"Good grief", said Seven as he put his white finger on his brow.
   
To brush the comment aside, Eight leaned forward.
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To brush it aside, Eight leaned her body forward.
   
"What we're making is a powerful weapon to defeat the Black Beast that we know is going to revive one day. If we can engineer it, then surely... no, we definitely can win against it. We can fight without the need for things like Armagus."
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"What we're making is a powerful weapon to defeat the Black Beast that will revive one day. If it exists, then surely... no, we definitely can win against it. We can fight without things like Armagus."
   
Her thick lips, which were painted in bright red lipstick, delivered a passionate speech so fast that it was dizzying. Her large eyes burned with passion. It was unthinkable that she was the same as the lighthearted person who had raised an eye over talk about bust sizes before.
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Her thick lips, which were painted in bright red lipstick, delivered a passionate speech so fast to point it was dizzying. Her large eyes were burning with passion. It was unthinkable that she was the same as the lighthearted person who had raised an eye over talk about proportion before.
   
The same passion dwelled even in Seven's calm gaze as it rested on her.
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The same passion dwelled even in Seven's calm glance that was looking at her.
   
"Understood? If our project is realized, we won't have to recruit a large number of people to create Armagus weapons for the war. Hence, your cooperation is necessary."
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"Understood? If it's realized, we won't have to recruit a large number of people to create Armagus force for the war. Hence, your cooperation is necessary."
   
 
Just what was the 'research' Seven and Eight had spoken of? Celica could only have a faint guess.
 
Just what was the 'research' Seven and Eight had spoken of? Celica could only have a faint guess.
   
A weapon to defeat the Black Beast. It must be amazing. If it existed, large numbers of soldiers wouldn't have to participate in the war. If it would truly become like that, then it was no great wonder.
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A weapon to defeat the Black Beast. It must be amazing. If it existed, large number of people wouldn't have to participate in the war. If it would truly become like that, then it was no great wonder.
   
 
The speech was something she would quickly agree with. But something still stuck in her.
 
The speech was something she would quickly agree with. But something still stuck in her.
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"If it's that amazing... then why does Onee-chan oppose it?"
 
"If it's that amazing... then why does Onee-chan oppose it?"
   
Celica spoke the one question that came to her mind.
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Celica spoke of the question that came to her mind.
   
 
Immediately, Eight frowned and made a troubled look while answering.
 
Immediately, Eight frowned and made a troubled look while answering.
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"Your magical power is required to control it. Maybe she doesn't want you to get involved with a weapon that will become a tool for war."
 
"Your magical power is required to control it. Maybe she doesn't want you to get involved with a weapon that will become a tool for war."
   
Putting her gloved hand to her cheek, Eight gave an anxious look as she took a breath.
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Putting her gloved hand to her cheek, Eight had an anxious look as she took a breath.
   
Celica looked downward. She didn't have confidence in her quick thinking. But still, she pondered as hard as she could.
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Celica looked downward. She didn't have self-confidence in quick thinking. But still, she pondered as hard as she could.
   
Certainly, Nine wouldn't allow Celica to get involved with war and weapons. Even if Celica was doing her fair share of cooking now, Nine was so prone to worry that she had made an uproar about the kitchen being too dangerous and had been making meals for them both by herself for the first two years that they had lived alone.
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Certainly, Nine wouldn't allow Celica to get involved with war and weapons. Even if they were doing their share of cooking now, Nine was so prone to worry that she had been making an uproar about kitchen being dangerous and doing everything alone for two years.
   
 
However.
 
However.
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At the end of her pondering, Celica frantically shook her ponytail from side to side.
 
At the end of her pondering, Celica frantically shook her ponytail from side to side.
   
On high heels that were so tall that Celica would fall down in three steps if she were to wear them, Eight approached her.
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With the high heels that were so tall that Celica would fall down in three steps if she were to wear it, Eight approached her.
   
 
Still, she was interrupted as Nirvana put her arms between them.
 
Still, she was interrupted as Nirvana put her arms between them.
   
Eight's face showed her frustration.
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Eight's face turned into frustration.
   
"Why!? It could all be completed if you participate!"
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"Why!? It can be realized if you participate!"
   
 
"Eight, settle down."
 
"Eight, settle down."
   
From behind, Seven reprimanded Eight who was shouting in rage. But it was hard to say that Seven looked calm.
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From behind, Seven reprimanded Eight who was shouting in rage. But it was hard to say that Seven's face looked calm.
   
 
"Please tell us, Celica-san. Do you have any discontent toward our explanation?"
 
"Please tell us, Celica-san. Do you have any discontent toward our explanation?"
   
The vigor in his gentle voice felt much heavier than Eight's angry roar.
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The vigor in his gentle voice felt much heavier than the roaring angry voice.
   
But without hesitation, Celica looked straight at Seven and Eight, glaring down at her.
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But without hesitation, Celica looked straight at Seven and Eight whose eye positions were tall.
   
"It's not that I have any discontent. It's just because I've promised that I'll believe in my sister."
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"It's not that I have a discontent. It's just because I've promised that I'll believe in Onee-chan."
   
Nine had promised that she would show Celica that she could defeat the Black Beast. Then in order for her promise to be realized, Celica couldn't afford to doubt Nine. Celica believed it not with logic, but with her intuition.
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Nine had promised that she would show Celica that she could defeat the Black Beast. Then in order for the promise to be realized, Celica couldn't afford to doubt Nine. Celica believed it not with logic, but with her intuition.
   
"Besides, sure, Onee-chan's worrying about me too much. However, she's real smart. If the research were something amazing that could defeat the Black Beast without any sacrifice like Seven-san and Eight-san said, then I think Onee-chan would take the initiative to use it instead."
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"Besides, sure, Onee-chan's worrying about me too much. However, she's real smart. If the research were something amazing that could defeat Black Beast without any sacrifice like Seven-san and Eight-san said, then I think Onee-chan would take the initiative to use it instead."
   
If her magical power was needed, then there was no doubt that Celica would give it her all to prevent any additional burden placed on her sister.
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If her magical power was needed, then Celica would put her effort so she could be a little less of a burden. And since this was about Nine, then Celica would definitely make it true if possible.
   
Above all, the matter of cooperating in Seven and Eight's research had reminded her of something. Before, there was a time when Celica was about to give her life in order to entrap the Black Beast.
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Above all, the matter of cooperating in Seven and Eight's research had reminded her of something. Before, there was a time when Celica was about to throw her life in order to entrap the Black Beast.
   
 
Now, Celica couldn't do the same as she did before. After all, her life had been saved by a person who was precious to her back then.
 
Now, Celica couldn't do the same as she did before. After all, her life had been saved by a person who was precious to her back then.
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"That's why, I can't cooperate. I'm sorry!"
 
"That's why, I can't cooperate. I'm sorry!"
   
After carefully straightening her back again, Celica bowed deeply.
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After carefully straightened her back again, Celica bowed deeply.
   
Then with the same strength as when she bowed, Celica raised her head and started to run. Nirvana followed closely behind her.
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Then with the same strength when she bowed, Celica raised her head and started to run. Nirvana followed her immediately.
   
 
"Hey, wait!"
 
"Hey, wait!"
   
Shaking off Eight's pursuing plea, Celica headed toward Ishana's main street.
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Shaking free from Eight's voice that pursued her, Celica went toward Ishana's main street.
   
While running, Celica looked up at Nirvana who was silhouetted against the setting sun.
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While running, Celica looked up at Nirvana who was dyed by the setting sun.
   
Nine was amazing. She made such a delicate bodyguard all by herself, even while she was first in line to fight the Black Beast.
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Nine was amazing. She made such a delicate bodyguard alone. She was even trying to get to the front row to fight the Black Beast.
   
Perhaps Celica herself had missed the chance to forge the same strength as her sister. If she had cooperated with Seven and Eight, she might have been able reduce Nine's hardships.
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Perhaps Celica herself had missed the chance to have the same strength as her sister. If she had cooperated with Seven and Eight, she might be able reduce Nine's hardships.
   
But Celica believed that Nine surely must have given Nirvana to her in case a situation like this arose. Celica's decision surely wasn't a mistake. Probably.
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But Celica believed that Nine surely had given Nirvana to her in case a situation like this happened. Celica's decision surely wasn't a mistake. Probably.
   
Nirvana turned her face to match Celica's gaze. When her eyes met the automaton's beautiful glass replicas, Celica laughed in embarrassment. It was like Nirvana was her other sister.
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Nirvana turned her face at Celica's presence. When her gaze met the beautiful glass eyes, Celica laughed in embarrassment. It was like Nirvana was her other sister.
   
 
"Ahaha, it's nothing. What should we have for tonight's dinner?"
 
"Ahaha, it's nothing. What should we have for tonight's dinner?"
   
"For the time being, let's go to the bakery. We should buy breads for tonight and tomorrow morning."
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For the time being, let's go to the bakery. We should buy breads for tonight and tomorrow morning.
   
   
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The western sky began to swallow the sinking sun. Before anyone realized, the sky that had been painted in orange changed into blazing flames.
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The western sky began to swallow the sinking sun. Before anyone realized, the sky that had been painted in orange changed into blazing flame.
   
Soon, the ominous sunset would burn shadows onto the pitch black stone pavements. The lined buildings, roadside trees, and the Sages who were seeing off the escaping girl were counted equally amongst the sinister shadows.
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Soon, the ominous sunset would burn shadows onto the pitch black stone pavements. The lined buildings, roadside trees, and the Ten Sages who were seeing off the escaping girl were counted equally amongst the sinister shadows.
   
 
"Aaah~, and there she goes..."
 
"Aaah~, and there she goes..."
   
Rocking a large earring with her finger, Eight intentionally made a discouraged face.
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Rocking the large earring with her finger, Eight intentionally made a discouraged face.
   
Glancing sideways at her, Seven took a step back and turned to look elsewhere. What he saw beyond the thin lens of his glasses was a thin alleyway. From the dense shadow that was born from the evening sun, several figures indicated their presences without exposing their faces.
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Looking at her with a side glance, Seven took a step back and changed his body orientation. What he looked beyond the thin lens of his glasses was a thin alley. From the dense shadow that was born from the evening sun, several figures indicated their presences without exposing their faces.
   
As the figures checked the surroundings, they asked Seven a question.
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As the figures checked the surroundings, they asked something to Seven.
   
The tip of Seven's lips moved only slightly as he answered.
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The tip of Seven's lips slightly moved as he answered.
   
 
"Yes, that's the girl in question. Her name is Celica A. Mercury."
 
"Yes, that's the girl in question. Her name is Celica A. Mercury."
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"You're aware, right? She's mentioned in Professor Ayatsuki's reports."
 
"You're aware, right? She's mentioned in Professor Ayatsuki's reports."
   
While putting the finger that had been messing with the earring to her mouth, Eight made a charming smile. Her eyes didn't match the ones she wore when her blunt proposal was refused; instead they were shining in curiosity.
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While putting the finger that had been messing with the earring to her mouth, Eight made a charming smile. Her eyes didn't seem like they had looked when the blunt proposal was refused; they were shining in curiosity.
   
 
A single figure dropped its voice as if in doubt. It sounded like the figure was finding fault in the two people.
 
A single figure dropped its voice as if in doubt. It sounded like the figure was finding fault in the two people.
   
Picking up on it, Seven sharply narrowed his brilliant eyes.
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Catching on it, Seven sharply narrowed the excellent eyes that a man could have.
   
 
"Be at ease. We will handle her accordingly whether she refuses or accepts. Of course, you will somehow collaborate with us, won't you?"
 
"Be at ease. We will handle her accordingly whether she refuses or accepts. Of course, you will somehow collaborate with us, won't you?"
   
Being fearlessly pressured by Seven, some kind of opening was born between the human figures.
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Being fearlessly pressed by Seven, some kind of opening was born between the human figures.
   
Eight put both hands on her hips and threw a glance to where Celica had gone.
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Beside, Eight put both hands on her hips and threw a glance to where Celica had gone.
   
 
"We have one chance. In that moment, the required control system and data will all gather. When that happens, it will completely be ours."
 
"We have one chance. In that moment, the required control system and data will all gather. When that happens, it will completely be ours."
   
Eight's passionate words fully fueled the expectations of those who lurked in the shadow. The words that served as encouragement and a reminder got several replies.
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Eight's passionate words fully fuelled the expectations of those who lurked in the shadow. The words that served as encouragement and reminder got several replies.
   
Seven adjusted his glasses using a finger.
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Seven adjusted his glasses using his finger.
   
"Both of us will prepare the required arrangements. All of you should be careful to make no mistakes. Proceed without fail."
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"The both of us will prepare the required arrangement. All of you should do no mistake without fail."
   
 
"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."
 
"Take care... the people of ''Orbis Librarius Norma''."
   
After receiving heated gazes from both Seven and Eight, the people known only by the name of their organization left two or three words of salute before quickly vanishing into the shadows.
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After receiving the heated gazes from both Seven and Eight respectively, the people who were called by the name of their organization left two, three words of salute before quickly vanishing into the shadow.
   
The sun sank further in the west. As the twilight sky burned an even deeper shade of red, the shadows gradually grew denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.
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The sun sank even more to the west. As the twilight sky burned even redder, the shadows gradually got denser and longer as they were etched on the ground.
   
As if putting on a shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where the figures had vanished. As she folded her arms beneath chest, she brought her cheek to rest on her mantle's fur trim.
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As if putting on the shadow, Eight waved her long mantle and turned her back from the alley where several figure people had vanished. As her folded her arms lifted up her chest, she brought her cheek near the flashy fur.
   
"I was worried about what had to be done there for a moment, but looks like everything will work out in the end. It's fortunate that we have a personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."
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"I thought about what to be done for a moment, but looks like everything works out in the end. It's fortunate that we have personal connection to Orbis Librarius Norma."
   
 
"Fortunate, huh."
 
"Fortunate, huh."
   
As if pouring cold water over Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.
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As if pouring cold water to Eight's good mood, Seven simply dropped a sigh.
   
His voice was quiet, but Eight could hear how nervous he was. She furrowed the eyebrows that had been so carefully groomed.
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His voice was small, but Eight could hear his nervousness. She strongly churned up the eyebrows that had been carefully groomed.
   
 
"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."
 
"What's wrong? I know that you want to say it was all thanks to that man. It's good that we listened to his story."
   
"I wonder. I have no faith in that man. Once a traitor, always a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."
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"I wonder. I have no faith for that man. Once a traitor will always be a traitor. You need to pay attention, too."
   
 
"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."
 
"Is that so? Thanks for the warning."
   
Seven's scolding clearly didn't amuse her at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. Her high heels, supporting her slender legs could be heard striking the pavements, long after she had left her field of view.
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Because Seven's scolding didn’t seem that amusing at all, Eight waved her hand over her shoulder. As the high heels that supported her slender legs hit the stone pavements, her thighs, freely exposed from the dress' slit, left the place.
   
 
"Hmph, what a detestable man."
 
"Hmph, what a detestable man."
   
After she was sure that she was out of earshot, Eight spat out those words. As if trampling the words as they fell to her feet, her feet began to move faster.
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After the distance was far enough, Eight spitted out those words. As if trampling those words as it fell to her feet, her heels made loud noises.
   
Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the Mages' Guild, Seven muttered to himself.
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Similarly, while gazing at the retreating figure of his extravagant associate as she headed toward the Mage's Guild, Seven slightly opened his mouth.
   
 
"...What a loud-mouthed woman."
 
"...What a loud-mouthed woman."
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The sun sank into the western sky.
 
The sun sank into the western sky.
   
The color of the sky that looked burning ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk towards the Mages' Guild.
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The color of the sky that looked burning also ran after its master and rushed to the west. As the city of Ishana gradually began to insinuate the presence of the night, Seven also began to walk to the Mage's Guild.
   
 
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