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"Please! I want to do it no matter what! I'll run away when it gets dangerous. I'll obey your instruction. So please…!"
 
"Please! I want to do it no matter what! I'll run away when it gets dangerous. I'll obey your instruction. So please…!"
   
The sisters continued throwing demands at each other for a further 30 minutes.
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The sisters continued throwing their demands for a further 30 minutes.
   
 
But then Celica joined her hands and kneeled in front of Nine, prostrating herself like a beggar before a king. The excessively direct request left Nine at a loss for words.
 
But then Celica joined her hands and kneeled in front of Nine, prostrating herself like a beggar before a king. The excessively direct request left Nine at a loss for words.
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"I get it, I get it! You're such a stubborn kid. You must have thought tons of excuses to persuade me."
 
"I get it, I get it! You're such a stubborn kid. You must have thought tons of excuses to persuade me."
   
Actually, even if the theories she lined up against Nine might seem all over the place, they needed a little more accuracy in pin pointing The Black Beast's arrival in order to intercept it.
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Actually, even if the theories she lined up against Nine might seem all over the place, they needed a little more accuracy in pin pointing Black Beast's arrival in order to intercept it.
   
 
There weren't many alternatives that would go smoothly even when the certainty wasn't in 100% percent, or even if they had to rely on the vampire girl's prophecy. In fact, there were only a few of them.
 
There weren't many alternatives that would go smoothly even when the certainty wasn't in 100% percent, or even if they had to rely on the vampire girl's prophecy. In fact, there were only a few of them.
   
If the Black Beast could be drawn to Celica, then it would greatly smooth the proceeding of the plan.
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If the Black Beast would get drawn to Celica, then it would greatly helped the proceeding of the plan.
   
Nine wouldn't have any complaints if Celica didn't do it.
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Nine wouldn't have any complain if Celica didn't do it.
   
 
"…But remember, your duty is just to lure out that monster. You absolutely cannot participate in the battle. Get to a safe place after that. You hear?"
 
"…But remember, your duty is just to lure out that monster. You absolutely cannot participate in the battle. Get to a safe place after that. You hear?"
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"Yes! Thanks, Onee-chan!"
 
"Yes! Thanks, Onee-chan!"
   
With the hard-fought battle of wills finally won, Celica's expression returned to its usual bright, carefree smile. Then she gripped her sister's hands.
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With her confidence to not lose to Nine went away, Celica put her usual bright, carefree smile. Then she gripped her sister's hands.
   
Nine didn't have the slightest idea how she should feel when looking at that smile.
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Nine didn't have the slightest idea about what she should feel when looking at her smile.
   
   
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…The day of the decisive battle approached. Although the arrangements had been finished by this point, Nine was in violent remorse. She couldn't help but think that it might be better if she had dismissed Celica's opinion using whatever means necessary.
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…The day of the decisive battle approached. Although the arrangement had been finished at this point, Nine was in violent remorse. She couldn't resist to think that it might be better if she had dismissed Celica's opinion using whatever means necessary.
   
 
Nine crushed the deployment scheme of the foreign armies in her hand. She immediately switched her long gaze to the direction where Celica was supposed to be.
 
Nine crushed the deployment scheme of the foreign armies in her hand. She immediately switched her long gaze to the direction where Celica was supposed to be.
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"You have to take command of the Armagus unit, you know. No one but you is able to do it."
 
"You have to take command of the Armagus unit, you know. No one but you is able to do it."
   
The Armagus unit was organized from the candidates around the world that had been tested for their aptitude. Today would be their first live combat.
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The Armagus unit was organized from the candidates around the world that had been tested for their aptitude. Today would be their first combat.
   
 
Even with their skill, the armies had insufficient combat experience. Commanding them required someone who grasped the understanding of Armagus better than anyone. In other word, Nine.
 
Even with their skill, the armies had insufficient combat experience. Commanding them required someone who grasped the understanding of Armagus better than anyone. In other word, Nine.
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"I know about that."
 
"I know about that."
   
Trinity was to give support and direct the supportive magic unit from headquarters. Jubei, Terumi, and Valkenhayn were participating in the units which were located near their respective cauldrons. Even with someone else's assistance, there was no other choice for Nine.
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Trinity was to give support and direct the supportive magic unit from headquarters. Jubei, Terumi, and Valkenhayn were participating in the units which are located near their respective cauldrons. Even with someone else's assistance, there was no other choice for Nine.
   
 
But it was because she precisely knew about it that the absurd irritation within the helpless situation struck her nerves.
 
But it was because she precisely knew about it that the absurd irritation within the helpless situation struck her nerves.

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