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There was no squadron posted near Celica. During the strategy meeting, she had emphasized the possibility that the Black Beast might not be able to find her if she was included in a unit.
 
There was no squadron posted near Celica. During the strategy meeting, she had emphasized the possibility that the Black Beast might not be able to find her if she was included in a unit.
   
Of course, Nine was opposed to it. But she was eventually outmatched by Celica's unyielding spirit once she had decided on her plan. Then she arranged for Celica to be stationed in the middle of the wasteland. Yet she would allow it only if Nirvana and Hakumen were with her.
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Of course, Nine was opposed to it. But she was eventually outmatched by Celica's unyielding spirit once she had decided on her plan. Then she arranged for Celica to be stationed in the middle of the wasteland. Yet she would allow it only if Nirvana and Hakumen were with her. It all led to now.
   
After Celica calmly called out to her that nothing was the matter, Nirvana relaxed.
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After Celica calmly called out to her, Nirvana ceased her cautious attitude.
   
 
Hakumen stood beside Celica. His white mask turned toward the air as if gazing at the wasteland.
 
Hakumen stood beside Celica. His white mask turned toward the air as if gazing at the wasteland.
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A low, muffled voice questioned.
 
A low, muffled voice questioned.
   
Celica looked up and stared at Hakumen's face. She wasn't expecting his question. Shrugging her shoulders, she broke down her expression with a bashful smile.
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Celica looked up and stared at Hakumen's face. His words were unexpected. Shrugging her shoulders, she broke down her expression with a bashful smile.
   
 
"Aha... A little."
 
"Aha... A little."
   
While replying, Celica was surprised by something other than Hakumen's remark. For the first time, she noticed that she was trembling a bit when she heard her own answer.
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While giving a reply, Celica got surprised by something other than Hakumen's remark. For the first time, she noticed that she was trembling a bit when she heard her own answer.
   
She had never expected to be so terrified. But now that she had been asked, she realised that there was a fear laying deep inside. She would compare it to the feeling a pebble would have while sinking into a vast lake
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She had never expected to be so terrified. But now that she had realized it, she found out that there was a fear laying deep inside. Comparing it like a small pebble sinking to the bottom of a lake was accurate.
   
Celica drew her knees close and hugged herself tightly. She felt a bit of relief from the radiation of her own body heat.
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Celica drew her knees close and hugged herself tightly. She felt a bit relief from getting enveloped by her own body heat.
   
"But I'm not so sure what could be so terrifying. Because I feel safe as much as I feel scared. For a whole year, my sister and the others have really done their best. It should be fine when the Black Beast comes."
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"But I'm not so sure what could be so terrifying. Because I feel safe as much as I feel scared. This one year, Onee-chan and the others has really done their best. It should be fine when the Black Beast come."
   
It wasn't just Nine and Hakumen. Everyone around the world had done what they could.
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It weren't just Nine and Hakumen. Everyone around the world had done what they could.
   
There were some quarrels among fellow countries, a reorganization that had to be done to the collapsing economy, and insufficient goods. The world had to go forward while burdened by loads of problem, but plenty of people had worked hard from each of their positions. And it had finally come to today.
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There were some quarrels among fellow countries, a reorganization that had to be done to the collapsing economy, and insufficient goods. The world had to go forward while burdened by loads of problem, but plenty of people had worked hard from each of their place. And it finally came to today.
   
Celica believed that there wasn't any wasted effort through that entire year.
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Celica believed that there wasn't any pointless part within there.
   
Still hugging her knees, Celica straightened her back and raised her face up straight. Her big eyes reflected a distant scene.
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While staying in small posture, Celica straightened her back and raised her face up straight. Her big eyes reflected a distant scene.
   
"My sister and everyone else will surely win the battle. A world where everybody lives in peace without conflict is coming. And I'm glad I can lend my hand to achieve it. That's why right now I don't have any regrets nor a single thought to give up. But you know, it's just… "
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"Onee-chan with everyone will surely win the battle. A world where everybody lives in peace without conflict is coming. And I'm glad I can lend my hand to achieve it. That's why right now I don't have any regret nor a single thought to stop. But you know, it's just… "
   
As she thought, being in the middle of an empty wasteland alone was frightening. A terribly simple reason that made her shiver.
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As she thought, being in the middle of an empty wasteland alone was frightening. A terribly simple reason that made her shivering.
   
 
"…A world where everybody lives in peace. Without conflict…"
 
"…A world where everybody lives in peace. Without conflict…"
   
Hakumen muttered in a deep voice. It was like he was thinking of a distant wish that was vanishing. Faint and weak, swept away by the rough wind.
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Hakumen muttered in deep voice and slightly made the parched sky vibrated. It was like he was thinking of a distant wish that was vanishing. Faint and weak, swept away by the rough wind.
   
Hearing his voice which seemed like he was pondering on fleeting thoughts, Celica looked up and made a wry smile. When she heard Hakumen repeating her words, she became embarrassed. Because it felt like her naivety and inexperience were exposed.
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Hearing his voice which seemed like he was pondering of fleeting thoughts, Celica pulled her head and made a wry smile. When she heard Hakumen repeating her words, she became embarrassed. Because it felt like her naivety and inexperience were exposed.
   
 
"A-Ahaha. It's weird, isn’t it? I got scared despite thinking about all that. It seems I'm more confused than I thought."
 
"A-Ahaha. It's weird, isn’t it? I got scared despite thinking about all that. It seems I'm more confused than I thought."
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"…There is nothing to fear."
 
"…There is nothing to fear."
   
Hakumen looked straight forward and spoke, showing not even the slightest hesitation. Clenching the dangling hands beside his body, his feet which were previously spread shoulder-wide stepped firmly on the hard ground without a hint of retreating.
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Hakumen looked straight forward and spoke, looking like he didn’t even have a slight hesitation. Clenching the dangling hands beside his body, his feet which were previously spread shoulder-wide stepped firmly on the hard ground without a hint of retreating.
   
 
"I will slay the Dark One. Your only task is to see it with your eyes from here."
 
"I will slay the Dark One. Your only task is to see it with your eyes from here."

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