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"Ragna…"
 
"Ragna…"
   
Hearing the name she had unintentionally whispered, Hakumen turned his head toward her.
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Hearing the name she unintentionally spoke, Hakumen turned his head toward her.
   
 
When he did, Celica finally noticed that she had been muttering. She quickly waved both hands in front of her face.
 
When he did, Celica finally noticed that she had been muttering. She quickly waved both hands in front of her face.
   
"Ah, no, excuse me. You just reminded me of someone for a moment."
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"Ah, no, excuse me. I just thought that you look like someone right now."
   
While speaking, Celica wondered what made her think that.
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While speaking, Celica wondered in her mind about what made her did that.
   
She shouldn't be recalling Ragna when she looked at Hakumen. It was understandable for it to happen once or twice, but continuing to remember somebody else's image like this was really impolite. Even if Celica was a dunse in etiquette, she could sympathize with that.
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She shouldn't be recalling Ragna when she looked at Hakumen somehow. It was okay if it only happened once or twice, but continuing to remember somebody else's image like this was really impolite. Even if Celica was a dull in etiquette, she could sympathize in that.
   
She had to be careful. While staring at Celica as she was trying to compose herself, Hakumen leisurely asked a question a moment later.
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She had to be careful. While staring at Celica as she was controlling herself, Hakumen leisurely asked a question a moment later.
   
 
"…Do I have any resemblance to him?"
 
"…Do I have any resemblance to him?"
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This time, Celica gasped in surprise.
 
This time, Celica gasped in surprise.
   
She had never considered that she would be questioned about it. He usually would have averted his face without speaking a word. She thought he would stay silent, looking into the distance with his white face.
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She had never considered that she was getting questioned for it. He usually would have averted his face without speaking a word. She thought he would stay silent while looking at a distance with his white face.
   
 
Celica nodded twice afterward.
 
Celica nodded twice afterward.
   
"I'm sure I told you about this before. Last time, I was searching to find his resemblance in you… but now I can see there are clear similarities."
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"I'm sure I told you about this before. That time, I was searching for his resemblance with you… but now I found various clear similarities."
   
 
"Hm."
 
"Hm."
   
His grunt urged her to continue. She might have misunderstood it, but Celica went along with her intuition.
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His groan urged her to continue. She might have misunderstood it, but Celica went along with her intuition.
   
"He's blunt and has a bad attitude. He also tends to get into arguments with my sister. But somehow, he's good at taking care of people. And… I didn't know where he came from or anything about his history at all."
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"He's blunt and has bad manner. He also tends to get in a fight with Onee-chan. But somehow, he's good at taking care of people. And… I didn't know where he was coming from or anything about himself at all."
   
With good cheer, Celica spoke about their similarities one by one while counting on her fingers. But her hands eventually opened up and she smiled while squinting with happiness.
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With good mood, Celica spoke about him one by one while counting on her fingers. But her hands immediately opened up and she smiled while squinting her eyes in happiness.
   
She pressed her hands to her chest as if a warm light had been lit inside.
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She pressed her chest with both hands as if a warm light had been lit inside.
   
"But I guess it's your air that's similar to his. When I look at you, It just makes me think about Ragna."
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"But I guess it's your air that's similar to his. When I look at you, I recall Ragna."
   
In no way was that a painful feeling. When she thought about Ragna it felt like being basked with sunlight filtering through the trees, back in the academy's courtyard.
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In no way that was a painful feeling. Her feeling toward Ragna was more like the same feeling when she was basked with sunlight filtering through trees, back in the academy's courtyard.
   
 
"…Do you wish to meet him?"
 
"…Do you wish to meet him?"
   
It was a miracle for a day to come when Celica was given a question filled with such emotion from Hakumen. Still spontaneously smiling while looking for an answer, Celica lifted her eyelids and looked at Hakumen.
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It was a miracle for a day to come when Celica was given a question filled with such emotion from Hakumen. Still spontaneously smiling looking for answer, Celica lifted her eyelids and looked at Hakumen.
   
She didn't know where the location of his eyes and mouth were on that white, flat mask. He might not have a face in the first place. It was unclear whether Hakumen had the same 5 senses as a human.
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She didn't know where was the location of his eyes and mouth on that white and flat face. He might not have one in the first place. It was unclear whether Hakumen was living while relying on five senses like a human would.
   
However, Celica read the feeling in Hakumen's gaze and stared back at him.
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However, Celica followed the feelings from Hakumen's gaze and stared back at him.
   
 
"Yup, I want to."
 
"Yup, I want to."

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