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A strong breeze blew in from their front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. Even that small movement felt sluggish and she found it really hard to move.
 
A strong breeze blew in from their front. Celica turned around to brush off the wind. Even that small movement felt sluggish and she found it really hard to move.
   
Suddenly, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and sprang backwards. Moving to her side, Nirvana scooped Celica into her arms and quickly stepped back out of the range of immediate danger.
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Immediately, a thick fog sprouted out like a geyser in front of Celica's eyes. Celica screamed a little and sprung to a jump. From her side, Nirvana used her arms to hold Celica and stepped back while carrying her.
   
The gushing mist from the ground multiplied to two and then three bursts. As if aiming for a specific location, the eruptions drew a dotted line across the terrain.
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In the meantime, the gushing mist from the ground distinctly multiplied to two, three bursts. As if aiming at a spot, the eruption drew a dotted line on its own.
   
It was heading in the direction that Celica and Hakumen were staring at. Toward the barren and uncovered wasteland.
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It was the direction where Celica and Hakumen were staring at. The location of a barren and uncovered wasteland.
   
After the small geysers had burst forth, completely surrounding that area, followed by a vast amount of black mist that began to overflow from the ground. A tremor violently shook the ground as if something was pushing up against it.
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After the small openings of the bursts gathered from around there, it was followed by a vast amount of black mist that began to overflow from the ground. A tremor violently shook the ground as if something was pushing up.
   
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Conspicuously, the large opening of the burst eventually made a crooked neck and created cracks everywhere. It ripped the dry wasteland as it pleased.
Cracks erupted across the dry earth as a dark form emerged, tearing the previously unbroken wasteland in two.
 
   
 
"MOVE!"
 
"MOVE!"
   
Hakumen shouted the order.
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Hakumen shouted an order.
   
But Celica couldn't separate her eyes from the scene. It wasn't just the scenery that she couldn't escape from, none of her senses could run from the crawling she felt in her skin.
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But Celica couldn't separate her eyes from the scene. Rather than the scenery, all of her senses couldn't run from the sensation she felt on her skin.
   
 
It was the same as that time. The atmosphere she had felt just before she parted with Ragna one year ago.
 
It was the same as that time. The atmosphere she had felt just before she parted with Ragna one year ago.
   
The wind, thick with seithr, advanced and surrounded Celica's whole body. The earthquake was so violent that she lost her footing and stumbled.
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The wind that was polluted with seithr advanced and surrounded Celica's whole body. The earthquake was so violent it pushed her feet off the ground.
   
 
Nirvana supported Celica as she was staggering.
 
Nirvana supported Celica as she was staggering.
   
Celica raised her face upward while trying to oppose the devastating wind.
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Celica raised her face up toward while trying to oppose the devastating wind.
   
 
Toward something enormous which tore the cracked earth and raised the ground level.
 
Toward something enormous which tore the cracked earth and raised the ground level.
   
It was as black as solidified darkness, had many red veins running along its figure, and had a head the shape of serpent's. Its immense size was beyond words.
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It was as black as a solidified darkness, had many red veins running on its figure, and had the shape of serpent head. The number of simple ways to speak of its size and potential limit were unimaginable.
   
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But Celica immediately realized.
Slowly, one by one, more heads crept from the depths of the earth. Each one matching the mammoth size of the first.
 
   
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The number of the creeping head was just one.
A total of eight necks dragged themselves from within the crater. Following them, a large torso, which surpassed even the size of the heads, appeared on the desolated ground.
 
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Instantly, another head of the same scale crawled out one by one.
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With a total of eight necks dragged out, a large torso which far surpassed the heads appeared on the desolated ground.
   
   

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