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After he landed on top of the cleaved snake head, Hakumen flipped his sword and without any unnecessary movement pierced the crown of the head, drawing a vertical line.
 
After he landed on top of the cleaved snake head, Hakumen flipped his sword and without any unnecessary movement pierced the crown of the head, drawing a vertical line.
   
The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled out the sword and leaped away. Next, he gave another slash to the neck part.
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The head took almost all of the long blade, and then it violently struggled. But before it did, Hakumen pulled the sword and leaped to a dodge. Next, he gave a slash to the neck part.
   
The sharp noise from the slash was vividly audible. It sliced the part under the jaw in a straight line.
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The sharp noise of the slash was vividly audible. It sliced the part under the jaw in a straight line.
   
Nonetheless, there was a drastic size difference between Black Beast and Hakumen.
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Nonetheless, there was a drastic mass difference between Black Beast and Hakumen.
   
Even the eye-snatching white gleam of the long sword was unable to completely chop through the demon's neck. Perhaps the wounds of the squirming neck had healed since it calmly began to brush Hakumen away.
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Even the eye-snatching white gleam of the long sword was unable to completely chop off the demon's neck. Perhaps the wounds of the squirming neck had finally healed since it calmly began to brush Hakumen away.
   
Still not paying any heed to its counterattack, Hakumen jumped high and didn’t hesitate to swing the sword.
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But still not minding it, Hakumen jumped high and didn’t even stop his hands from moving the sword.
   
The strokes of the sword were many and the blows cuts deep.
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The strokes of the sword were many and the blows were deep.
   
While keeping the monster's jaw, that had received blows to keep it in check with his brute strength, he slashed it from the bottom up.
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While keeping the jaw that had received blows in check with his brute strength, he slashed it from bottom up.
   
Jumping up to follow his cut, he rose up below the jaw and stabbed the sword to the monster's throat. Then allowed gravity to assist his cut as he slip down the long neck to the ground.
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Altering the recoil with a jump, he kept going around just below the jaw and stabbed the sword to the monster's throat. Then he sliced it by falling down, leaving it to gravity.
   
 
The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.
 
The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.

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