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The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.
 
The beast shrieked dreadfully in rage.
   
Hakumen's was knocked away and he hit the ground hard. The impact dented the earth. But before the soaring cloud of dust had a chance to settle, the white warrior was already standing up.
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Hakumen's body was knocked and struck the ground. The shock hollowed the earth. But before the soaring cloud of dust even settled, the white warrior was already standing up.
   
Highlighting the gallant figure of Hakumen against the battlefield, white lightning was cast about as if falling like rain.
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In response to the gallant figure of Hakumen, white lightning was casted from one part of the battlefield like a rain.
   
 
It was the Armagus unit led by Nine.
 
It was the Armagus unit led by Nine.
   
There were numerous lightning bolts as the spell was cast repeatedly. Explosions of electricity were punctuated by a thunderous roar that matched the intensity of the Black Beast's howl.
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There was numerous lightning bolt as it was casted repeatedly. It made explosions while at the time resounded thunderous roar that wasn't inferior to the Black Beast's howl.
   
Subsequently, Jubei's unit approached with great speed from behind the Black Beast. Their target was its feet. The alchemical weapons that Trinity had provided helped to trip the giant's feet and obstruct its movement.
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Subsequently, Jubei's unit approached with great speed from behind the Black Beast. They were aiming for the its feet. The alchemistical weapons that Trinity had prepared disturbed its movement occasionally by repelling the giant's feet from the ground.
   
Various offensive magics were fired off from the magician unit who had positioned themselves to surround the beast. The military forces from the assorted nations also commenced their attack simultaneously.
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Various offensive magic were fired off from the dotted magician unit. The military forces from many nations also commenced their attack simultaneously.
   
Celica watched on from the mountainside as the battlefield became intense in a blink of an eye.
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Celica was watching on how the battlefield had become intensive in a blink of an eye from the hill of the mountain side.
   
 
It was a ghastly spectacle.
 
It was a ghastly spectacle.
   
It couldn't be more obvious that it was a struggle in which humanity had concentrated all of the power they had at their disposal.
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It couldn't be more obvious that it was a struggle which humanity had concentrated the power they had at.
   
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The one which had superior accomplishment among them was Armagus.
The Armagus squad's attacks were proving to be the most effective.
 
   
The number of armagus weilders that had been assembled spanned several times the number of Ishana's inhabitants. The average offensive ability from the Armagus couldn't be compared with that of the smaller magicians' unit.
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The number of users that had been assembled spanned several times of Ishana's inhabitants. The average offensive ability from the Armagus couldn't be compared with the magician unit.
   
Because Nine was giving commands to the armagus squad, the raining spears of the Armagus's light weren't fired wildly. The combined force of the lightning worked to stagger the Black Beast as it struck at its ankles.
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Because Nine was giving the command, the raining impact of the Armagus didn't get jumbled. It clinched the legs which were the means for the Black Beast to advance. It even reacted like it was taken aback.
   
It was effective. The faltering steps of the beast made it feel like humanity was drawing a victory for the first time.
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It was effective. That conviction felt like humanity was drawing a victory for the first time.
   
…But when the hands that were used to attack repeatedly stopped for a moment, the Black Beast cried out with its ferocious voice and swung its eight necks.
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…But when the hands that were used to attack repeatedly stopped for a moment, the Black Beast cried its ferocious voice and swung its eight necks.
   
 
When the long necks brushed off the sky, the thick fog roared and gouged the earth like a whip. Along with a howl, the descending mass of seithr crushed the earth and living beings like a lump of iron.
 
When the long necks brushed off the sky, the thick fog roared and gouged the earth like a whip. Along with a howl, the descending mass of seithr crushed the earth and living beings like a lump of iron.

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