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(This is… the Black Beast…)
 
(This is… the Black Beast…)
   
Her throat was stuck. Her scream strangled and unable to escape.
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Her throat was stuck. Voice wouldn't come out.
   
 
She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica wither in pain.
 
She was afraid. It was different from the vague fear she had a while ago as it made Celica wither in pain.
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"…!?"
 
"…!?"
   
Celica stopped moving, startled.
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Celica stopped moving in her surprise.
   
 
It threw its whole body towards the black giant without any hesitation.
 
It threw its whole body towards the black giant without any hesitation.
   
For an instant, that figure was overlapped by a nostalgic silhouette.
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For an instant, that figure was overlapped with a nostalgic silhouette.
   
 
(No, that's wrong. It's not Ragna.)
 
(No, that's wrong. It's not Ragna.)
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The distance was no longer mattered. The seithr would blow around violently whenever the Black Beast was near. The following rampage of wind toyed with her hair and mantle annoyingly.
 
The distance was no longer mattered. The seithr would blow around violently whenever the Black Beast was near. The following rampage of wind toyed with her hair and mantle annoyingly.
   
Even while squinting her eyes to protect from from the head wind, Celica couldn't take off her eyes from the approaching black mass that was causing the quake.
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Even while squinting her eyes from the head wind, Celica couldn't take off her eyes from the approaching black mass that caused the quake.
   
It wasn't because she was terrified. She was searching for a presence inside this dreadful and grotesque figure of a giant.
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It wasn't because she was terrified. She was searching for a presence inside this dreadful and grotesque of a giant.
   
Celica had a thought. The monster kept walking in Celica's direction even while withstanding the fierce attack. There might be a part within it that remembered the promise to 'return'.
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Celica had a thought. The monster kept walking to Celica's direction even while withstanding the fierce attack. There might be a part within it that remembered the promise to 'return'.
   
A foolishly optimistic thought that be laughable to anyone else if they had heard it. But once she gave it a thought, Celica couldn't stop feeling like it was the truth.
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A foolishly optimistic thought that might get laughed at by anyone else if they had heard about it. But once she gave it a thought, Celica couldn't stop her feeling.
   
 
"I must go!"
 
"I must go!"
   
At this short distance, Celica could reach the beast with a short sprint. Steeling her resolve, Celica dashed off over the ocher soil. …However, someone suddenly caught her arm.
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With this much distance, Celica's legs could run until she got close. Taking a resolve, Celica dashed off of the ocher soil. …However, someone suddenly caught her arm.
   
 
"Wha… Nirvana?"
 
"Wha… Nirvana?"
   
When she turned to look, Nirvana, who had been standing motionlessly beside Celica, used her large, weaponized hand to grab Celica's wrist.
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When she turned around, Nirvana, who had been standing motionlessly beside Celica, used her large, weaponized hand to grab Celica's wrist.
   
 
The beautiful artificial eyes were staring at Celica silently.
 
The beautiful artificial eyes were staring at Celica silently.
   
She had judged that it would be dangerous for Celica to go any further. Celica struggled, shaking her arm to loosen Nirvana's hand, but she was undaunted and continued her tough restraint.
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She had judged that it would be dangerous for Celica to go any further. Celica struggled, shaking her arm to loosen Nirvana's hand, but she was undaunted as if she was a tough restraint.
   
 
"Let me go, Nirvana! I want to go there. I might be able to meet Ragna. So ple…"
 
"Let me go, Nirvana! I want to go there. I might be able to meet Ragna. So ple…"
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Under Celica's feet, veins of light were appearing.
 
Under Celica's feet, veins of light were appearing.
   
As if in the middle of drawing a pattern, it crawled along the ground at a great speed, the pattern becoming more complex every moment.
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As if in the middle of drawing a pattern, it crawled on the ground with constant speed and adding complexity to the line.
   
 
She didn't know its purpose, but Celica soon realized what the light was drawing.
 
She didn't know its purpose, but Celica soon realized what the light was drawing.

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