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But it didn't necessarily change anything for the presence that was blending in the shadow.
 
But it didn't necessarily change anything for the presence that was blending in the shadow.
   
A shadow is still a shadow. The hands of mankind couldn't touch nor directly interfere with it. The owner of the presence was exactly similar to it.
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Shadow was still a shadow. The hands of mankind couldn't touch nor directly interfering with it. The owner of the presence was exactly similar to it.
   
 
The presence laughed again. With faint gentleness, without any ambition.
 
The presence laughed again. With faint gentleness, without any ambition.
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"Oh, how terrible. Please, put your trust on me. Haven't I been cooperating with you all this time?"
 
"Oh, how terrible. Please, put your trust on me. Haven't I been cooperating with you all this time?"
   
"...Okay?" the shadow asked. The voice somehow made the woman shiver for a moment.
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"Okay?" he said. The voice somehow made the woman shivered for a moment.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===

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