Editing Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume8 Post Epilogue Part 3

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The only setting Layfon was particular about was weight. As for the others, he entrusted them to the special Heaven’s Blade technicians.
 
The only setting Layfon was particular about was weight. As for the others, he entrusted them to the special Heaven’s Blade technicians.
   
“You’re the first Heaven’s Blade to say such a thing. Is it because you’re young, that you underestimate the value of a weapon?”
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“You’re the first Heaven’s Blade to say such a thing. Is it because you’re young, that you underestimate the value of the weapon was well?”
   
 
Looking at Layfon silently listening to his criticism, the old technician finally revealed a defeated expression, giving up attempting to persuade him, and set the sword to match Layfon’s physique.
 
Looking at Layfon silently listening to his criticism, the old technician finally revealed a defeated expression, giving up attempting to persuade him, and set the sword to match Layfon’s physique.
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(Good)
 
(Good)
   
Escaping from the chaos of the storm of scattered Sendan, Layfon mentally pumped his fist. He had always wanted to know if he could do this, and he had always trained in his mind. And the result made Layfon felt very satisfied.
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As Layfon avoided the irregular storm of the Sendans, he let out a shout of success with a clenched fist in his heat. He had always wanted to know if he could do this, and he had always trained in his mind. And the result made Layfon felt very satisfied.
   
 
(Is it possible to focus the direction of the explosions onto a single point? If he can immediately get to that level next time......)
 
(Is it possible to focus the direction of the explosions onto a single point? If he can immediately get to that level next time......)

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