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The remaining eighty-nine Kamuys followed.
 
The remaining eighty-nine Kamuys followed.
   
The commander-in-chief was leading the fight against the enemy on the front lines. Rikka could not help but smile wryly. This fighting style was reminiscent of military records dating back to the time of the Genpei period, but it was also how modern wars were fought too.
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The commander-in-chief was leading the fight against the enemy on the front lines. Rikka could not help but smile wryly. This method of fighting resembled military chronicles dating back to the time of the Genpei era, but it was also how modern wars were fought too.
   
 
By transmitting noetic waves, Chevaliers directed their Legion armies to fight.
 
By transmitting noetic waves, Chevaliers directed their Legion armies to fight.

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