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With straight faces, they were exchanging false platitudes.
 
With straight faces, they were exchanging false platitudes.
   
The young medieval prince and the elderly man of the modern twentieth century both smirked at the same time.
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The young medieval prince and the elder man of the modern twentieth century both smirked at the same time.
   
 
"Well then, Grayson, I must head over to Kyoto to cheer up our princess and handle a few sundry tasks while I am there. I am counting on you to hold the fort."
 
"Well then, Grayson, I must head over to Kyoto to cheer up our princess and handle a few sundry tasks while I am there. I am counting on you to hold the fort."
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Just as Edward walked to the helicopter, a young girl called out to him.
 
Just as Edward walked to the helicopter, a young girl called out to him.
   
"Prince, if it pleases you, kindly take this along."
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"Prince, if it pleases you, please take this along."
   
 
It was a blonde little girl in a sailor outfit and beret—Or rather, a doll.
 
It was a blonde little girl in a sailor outfit and beret—Or rather, a doll.
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Early twenties in appearance, Edward sighed.
 
Early twenties in appearance, Edward sighed.
   
"If I keep bringing your small version around with me, I am afraid weird rumors will start springing up."
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"If I keep bringing your version around with me, I am afraid weird rumors will start springing up."
   
"Please, relax. According to research conducted by the British forces... Many adult men in Imperial Japan, enjoy this type of doll."
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"Please, relax. According to research conducted by the British forces... Many adult men in Imperial Japan, like this type of doll."
   
 
"I am not looking for fellow enthusiasts here!"
 
"I am not looking for fellow enthusiasts here!"
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The seats in the transport helicopter were hard and not very comfortable. However, horse riding consumed even more energy, so taking a helicopter was still more relaxing.
 
The seats in the transport helicopter were hard and not very comfortable. However, horse riding consumed even more energy, so taking a helicopter was still more relaxing.
   
They entered Kinai through the Shima Peninsula then went north, in other words, inland.
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Entering Kinai through the Shima Peninsula then going north, in other words, inland.
   
A few hours after taking off, the helicopter reached the sky over Kyoto City. Prior to Japan's name change to "Imperial Japan," Kyoto had been the ancient capital where the royal palace was located.
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A few hours after taking off, the helicopter reached the sky over Kyoto City. Prior to Japan's name change to "Imperial Japan," Kyoto had been the ancient capital where royal palace was located.
   
   
This was Edward's second time in Kyoto.
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This was Edward's second time at Kyoto.
   
 
Before the Tōkaidō invasion operation, he had disguised himself as a foreign tourist to visit this place and hold talks with key figures in the Kinai Fiefdom.
 
Before the Tōkaidō invasion operation, he had disguised himself as a foreign tourist to visit this place and hold talks with key figures in the Kinai Fiefdom.
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Edward's mode of locomotion had switched from a military helicopter to a black luxury vehicle.
 
Edward's mode of locomotion had switched from a military helicopter to a black luxury vehicle.
   
As before, operation of the vehicle was left to the driver. Although Edward was talented at controlling mounts such as wyverns or horses, he was not good at handling mechanical contraptions.
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As before, operation of the vehicle was left to the driver. Although Edward was talented at controlling mounts such as wyverns or horses, he was not good at handling mechanical things.
   
 
Fortunately, as a Resurrectee and Chevalier, he would never find himself without a driver to use.
 
Fortunately, as a Resurrectee and Chevalier, he would never find himself without a driver to use.
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A white shirt with black pants and a gray coat on top, rather plain in appearance.
 
A white shirt with black pants and a gray coat on top, rather plain in appearance.
   
With the British Empire's invasion of Tōkaidō under way, the position of an Englishman living in Japan would be rather awkward. Given such an environment, there was no need to go around in military uniform to attract extra attention.
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With the British Empire's invasion of Tōkaidō under way, the position of an Englishman living in Japan was rather awkward. Given such an environment, there was no need to go around in military uniform to attract attention.
   
 
Yet here in Japan, the appearance of a tall and handsome silver-haired man still made him stand out.
 
Yet here in Japan, the appearance of a tall and handsome silver-haired man still made him stand out.
   
His conspicuousness could not be helped. Like a soldier, he walked with his head up and chest out, unfazed by the gazes of Kyoto's residents.
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His conspicuousness could not be helped. Like a soldier, he walked with his head up and chest out, unconcerned by the gazes of Kyoto's residents.
   
 
Soon, he reached an old-fashioned western mansion.
 
Soon, he reached an old-fashioned western mansion.
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"Greetings, Princess. It is surely the blessings of the Three Lions that have allowed me the good fortune of surviving combat to meet you once again."
 
"Greetings, Princess. It is surely the blessings of the Three Lions that have allowed me the good fortune of surviving combat to meet you once again."
   
"No, this fortune stems from your personal capability, good brother."
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"No, this fortune stems from your personal capability, good brother."
   
 
The girl's blonde hair reached waist length. She was smiling elegantly.
 
The girl's blonde hair reached waist length. She was smiling elegantly.
   
It would not be an exaggeration to compare her delicate and lovely facial features to that of a goddess. That being said, her temperament would not match Aphrodite, the goddess of love and beauty.
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It would not be an exaggeration to compare her delicate and lovely facial features to a goddess. That being said, her temperament would not match Aphrodite, the goddess of love and beauty.
   
 
Strictly speaking, she would bear a greater resemblance to Hecate, the goddess of the moon shrouded in transient darkness.
 
Strictly speaking, she would bear a greater resemblance to Hecate, the goddess of the moon shrouded in transient darkness.
   
Hecate was the terrifying progenitor of black magic, an ominous deity with significance as the guardian of witches.
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Hecate was the terrifying progenitor of black magic, an ominous deity representing the guardian of witches.
   
 
"It has been a while, Black Prince. I am sincerely delighted for the chance to see you again."
 
"It has been a while, Black Prince. I am sincerely delighted for the chance to see you again."
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Edward went straight to the point, "I heard you were hurt. Thank goodness it was nothing serious."
 
Edward went straight to the point, "I heard you were hurt. Thank goodness it was nothing serious."
   
"You should know that with the powers granted by my father—the sacred lion sovereign—healing minor wounds poses no challenge..."
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"You should know that with the powers granted by my father—the sacred lion sovereign—healing minor wounds pose no challenge..."
   
 
At Edward's request, Princess Eleanor had infiltrated the Suruga tutelary fort.
 
At Edward's request, Princess Eleanor had infiltrated the Suruga tutelary fort.
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"Hey, a princess of the British Empire should not be speaking like this. He is going to be the prime minister of Imperial Japan eventually, so remember your manners."
 
"Hey, a princess of the British Empire should not be speaking like this. He is going to be the prime minister of Imperial Japan eventually, so remember your manners."
   
"Well... My apologies. I was imprudent." Eleanor widened her eyes ostentatiously and said mischievously, "Please forgive me for speaking so unladylike. Allow me to change my wording. Thanks to the Governor General's kindness and generosity, he is willing to set aside time to meet you, good brother."
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"Well... My apologies. I was imprudent." Eleanor widened her eyes ostentatiously and said mischievously, "Please forgive me for speaking so unladylike. Let me alter the wording. Thanks to the Governor General's kindness and generosity, he is willing to set aside time to meet you, good brother."
   
 
"Now that is our good princess. Next... How to best handle the matter of reinforcements?"
 
"Now that is our good princess. Next... How to best handle the matter of reinforcements?"
   
Edward recalled a certain handsome man's face.
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Edward recalled a certain man's handsome face.
   
 
It was the young man he had spotted that night when he sent the Kinai Chevaliers to attack Suruga.
 
It was the young man he had spotted that night when he sent the Kinai Chevaliers to attack Suruga.
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"Consequently, the decision to send me was swiftly confirmed. If he were to come, it would make my job very difficult. News of this must not reach Britain. Well, I do concede that he is very charismatic as a general."
 
"Consequently, the decision to send me was swiftly confirmed. If he were to come, it would make my job very difficult. News of this must not reach Britain. Well, I do concede that he is very charismatic as a general."
   
In all of English history, that man could very well be the most valorous ''king''.
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In all of English history, that man might be the most valorous ''king''.
   
 
The drawback was that he was hard to use.
 
The drawback was that he was hard to use.
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"...I was not informed of this at all."
 
"...I was not informed of this at all."
   
"He rushed off and departed England during the night before the commander-in-chief—Admiral Nelson—gave authorization. This forced the higher-ups' hand, leaving them no choice but to authorize dispatching him to Japan."
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"He rushed off and departed England during the night before the commander-in-chief—Admiral Nelson—gave authorization. This forced the higher-ups' hand, leaving them no choice but to authorize sending him to Japan."
   
 
"Damn them for foisting the burden of taming the lion upon me..."
 
"Damn them for foisting the burden of taming the lion upon me..."

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