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Instantly, the 360 Kanesadas broke out of their packed formation.
 
Instantly, the 360 Kanesadas broke out of their packed formation.
   
Masatsugu's Legions had flown in a packed formation within arm's length of one another.
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Masatsugu's Legions ahd flown in a packed formation within arm's length of one another.
   
 
Now, the formation collapsed and all Kanesadas ''scattered''.
 
Now, the formation collapsed and all Kanesadas ''scattered''.
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They distanced themselves from each other all at once, separated by over dozens of meters.
 
They distanced themselves from each other all at once, separated by over dozens of meters.
   
The Kanesadas approached the thousand Escalibors while scattered. Hence, the British and the Japanese forces clashed in the sky over Mount Satsuta.
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The Kanesadas approached the thousand Escalibors while scattered. Hence, the British and the Japanese forces clashed in the sky over Satsuta Ridge.
   
 
The thousand British knights were in a packed sphere—
 
The thousand British knights were in a packed sphere—
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Looking from afar, they seemed like a "giant crimson ball" floating in the air.
 
Looking from afar, they seemed like a "giant crimson ball" floating in the air.
   
Richard's army of Escalibors stopped over Mount Satsuta, hovering motionlessly. This was like how a great yokozuna would confidently take on a weaker sumo wrestler.
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Richard's army of Escalibors stopped over Satsuta Ridge, hovering motionlessly. This was like how a great yokozuna would confidently take on a weaker sumo wrestler.
   
 
Naturally, the Suruga side did not have the luxury of doing the same.
 
Naturally, the Suruga side did not have the luxury of doing the same.
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Masatsugu muttered with a frown.
 
Masatsugu muttered with a frown.
   
Both armies were clashing in the sky over Mount Satsuta. Masatsugu had led 360 Legions while Richard's Escalibors numbered 1000 and had formed in a packed formation.
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Both armies were clashing in the sky over Satsuta Ridge. Masatsugu had led 360 Legions while Richard's Escalibors numbered 1000 and had formed in a packed formation.
   
 
Normally speaking, the key to victory lay in "how to make the enemy's formation collapse."
 
Normally speaking, the key to victory lay in "how to make the enemy's formation collapse."
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Seeing the two armies locked in a chaotic skirmish, Masatsugu clicked his tongue.
 
Seeing the two armies locked in a chaotic skirmish, Masatsugu clicked his tongue.
   
Melee combat could be seen everywhere in the sky over Mount Satsuta.
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Close quarter combat could be seen everywhere in the sky over Satsuta Ridge.
   
 
Instead of firing their rifles, the Escalibors were using the bayonets on the front end of the barrel to
 
Instead of firing their rifles, the Escalibors were using the bayonets on the front end of the barrel to

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