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This was a very merciless order, but neither Masatsugu nor Hatsune expressed any sense of martyrdom.
 
This was a very merciless order, but neither Masatsugu nor Hatsune expressed any sense of martyrdom.
   
Masatsugu's expression was aloof as always while Hatsune grinned—Like a child about to play a prank.
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Masatsugu's expression was aloof as always while Hatsune smiled—Like a child about to play a prank.
   
"By the way, Onii-sama, don't forget Rikka-sama's request."
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"By the way, Onii-sama, don't forget about Rikka-sama's request."
   
 
"Oh, you mean ''that''. I don't really think it's necessary to use that Feat of Arms here... But whatever. Kanesadas, draw your swords."
 
"Oh, you mean ''that''. I don't really think it's necessary to use that Feat of Arms here... But whatever. Kanesadas, draw your swords."
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She was going to the central keep's entrance.
 
She was going to the central keep's entrance.
   
According to the original plan, it was where she was to converge with her father, the Tachibana siblings, and others.
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According to the original plan, it was where she was to meet her father, the Tachibana siblings, and others.
   
The objective was to retreat from Nagoya Castle with minimum sacrifice.
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The goal was to retreat from Nagoya Castle with minimum sacrifice.
   
 
===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===

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