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The Device-wielding man took a similar stance next to him.
 
The Device-wielding man took a similar stance next to him.
   
“Don’t worry. She’ll definitely be here! She’s Hong Kong’s best Tuner, after all.”
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“Don’t worry. She’ll definitely be here! She’s Hong King’s best Tuner, after all.”
   
 
“Can we really rely on a Nein Engel!?”
 
“Can we really rely on a Nein Engel!?”
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“You’re just saying that to force me to do something again, aren’t you?”
 
“You’re just saying that to force me to do something again, aren’t you?”
   
“You’re the one with the dream of using Tuning to send out a giant Death Techno dragon. Think of this as training.”
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“You’re the one with the d ream of using Tuning to send out a giant Death Techno dragon. Think of this as training.”
   
 
“I at least have the right to choose how I train!”
 
“I at least have the right to choose how I train!”
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That was enough.
 
That was enough.
   
J-Gun pulled a ring from his pocket and the younger brother watched his movements while still crying.
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J-Gun pulled a ring form his pocket and the younger brother watched his movements while still crying.
   
 
J-Gun suddenly stopped moving.
 
J-Gun suddenly stopped moving.
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He took a breath.
 
He took a breath.
   
“I made a bit of a mistake. Two of them actually. First, I have… likely killed J-Gun Maldrick. We can hold a meeting about that later. …Yes, call Genius too. And during the battle, the bottle of blood was destroyed. Can you bring the one meant for the final ceremony?”
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“I made a bit of a mistake. Two of them actually. First, I have…likely killed J-Gun Maldrick. We can hold a meeting about that later. …Yes, call Genius too. And during the battle, the bottle of blood was destroyed. Can you bring the one meant for the final ceremony?”
   
 
He lowered his raised Device and began to walk.
 
He lowered his raised Device and began to walk.
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Huang Daquan’s Archs RDC was the largest trading company in Hong Kong and it performed some special operations.
 
Huang Daquan’s Archs RDC was the largest trading company in Hong Kong and it performed some special operations.
   
“Like material support for Hong Kong Cave.”
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“ Like material support for Hong Kong Cave.”
   
 
Akira looked up and out the window.
 
Akira looked up and out the window.

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