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Just as she prepared to set up the Discord Bomb, a voice reached her from above.
 
Just as she prepared to set up the Discord Bomb, a voice reached her from above.
   
“Hey, are you going to destroy it?”
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“Hey, are going to destroy it?”
   
 
“This only disturbs the Live.”
 
“This only disturbs the Live.”
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“I’m sensitive to other people’s Lives.”
 
“I’m sensitive to other people’s Lives.”
   
“I see. Then I guess you read that I used to be so full of myself I thought I could make a dragon.”
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“I see. Then I guess you read that I used to be so full of myself I thought could make a dragon.”
   
 
“A dragon? You mean one of the three secret techniques of Tuning and Busting?”
 
“A dragon? You mean one of the three secret techniques of Tuning and Busting?”

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