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The wind carried the saltiness of the ocean below. |
The wind carried the saltiness of the ocean below. |
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− | Lamma Island was just over three kilometers long and its tallest mountain was three hundred fifty meters. The powerful ocean wind flew over the forest and raced up the mountain ridge. |
+ | Lamma Island was just over three kilometers long and its tallest mountain was three hundred fifty meters. The powerful ocean wind flew over the forest and raced up the to the mountain ridge. |
Not even the locals approached this place. |
Not even the locals approached this place. |
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He laughed and answered someone’s question. |
He laughed and answered someone’s question. |
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− | “Me? I’m |
+ | “Me? I’m Akira’s…well, I’m kind of like her friend. We were doing stupid stuff together a bit ago.” |
He handed the yueqin to a nearby child. |
He handed the yueqin to a nearby child. |
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…''You’re kidding. |
…''You’re kidding. |
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− | + | “That’s…his brother?” |
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Before she could accept that fact, he turned his back and she had no way of checking on him any further. |
Before she could accept that fact, he turned his back and she had no way of checking on him any further. |
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Even in the middle of the night, the headquarters had its lights on. |
Even in the middle of the night, the headquarters had its lights on. |
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− | The white fluorescent light shined on a few night shift |
+ | The white fluorescent light shined on a few night shift workers…and Rin. |
She faced a desktop computer and wore the same clothes as when Akira and Gunmal had left. |
She faced a desktop computer and wore the same clothes as when Akira and Gunmal had left. |