Editing Clannad:Image text (Story)
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This suitcase has traveled around the world. |
This suitcase has traveled around the world. |
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+ | // Alt: "That suitcase"? |
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// その鞄は、世界中を旅してきた。 |
// その鞄は、世界中を旅してきた。 |
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// たくさんの人の手から手へ、 |
// たくさんの人の手から手へ、 |
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− | + | From one hand to another... |
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// XCN: I think it should be made explicit by saying "Passed from", because there's no mention of people anywhere else in the paragraph, and it feels a little off. |
// XCN: I think it should be made explicit by saying "Passed from", because there's no mention of people anywhere else in the paragraph, and it feels a little off. |
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// 大切に託されてまた... |
// 大切に託されてまた... |
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// If you find this suitcase, please take it to our daughter. |
// If you find this suitcase, please take it to our daughter. |
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// XCN: In the anime, this is written in English, on the front of the envelope holding the letter. (Not correctly though; they spell it "Suitscase" ;) I guess that changed from the VN? |
// XCN: In the anime, this is written in English, on the front of the envelope holding the letter. (Not correctly though; they spell it "Suitscase" ;) I guess that changed from the VN? |
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− | // Polarem: Probably an animators' oversight :-P This is KEY's version, which they rendered (correctly) in English |
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