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<7992> \{\m{B}} (Good!)
 
<7992> \{\m{B}} (Good!)
 
// \{\m{B}}(いいっ)
 
// \{\m{B}}(いいっ)
<7993> It was pleasant having Nagisa say that she was cute.
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<7993> It was pleasnat having Nagisa say that she was cute.
 
// 渚に自分のことを可愛いと言わせるのは快感だった。
 
// 渚に自分のことを可愛いと言わせるのは快感だった。
 
<7994> \{Nagisa} "But, Nishina-san's much cuter."
 
<7994> \{Nagisa} "But, Nishina-san's much cuter."
 
// \{渚}「でも、仁科さんとかのほうが、もっと可愛いです」
 
// \{渚}「でも、仁科さんとかのほうが、もっと可愛いです」
<7995> \{Nagisa} "Yes. Maybe I am cute, but other people are much, much cuter than I am."
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<7995> \{Nagisa} "Yes. Maybe I am cute, but other people much, much more cute than I am."
 
// \{渚}「そうです。わたしも可愛いかもしれないですが、他の人のほうがもっともっと可愛いですっ」
 
// \{渚}「そうです。わたしも可愛いかもしれないですが、他の人のほうがもっともっと可愛いですっ」
 
<7996> Oh crap...
 
<7996> Oh crap...
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<7998> \{\m{B}} "Wait!"
 
<7998> \{\m{B}} "Wait!"
 
// \{\m{B}}「待てっ」
 
// \{\m{B}}「待てっ」
<7999> \{\m{B}} "The Big Dango Family's also cute, but what if I said other characters are much, much cuter? What would you think?
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<7999> \{\m{B}} "The Big Dango Family's also cute, but what if I said other characters are much, much more cute? What would you think?
 
// \{\m{B}}「だんご大家族も可愛いが、他のキャラクターのほうがもっともっと可愛いと言われたら、おまえ、どうだっ」
 
// \{\m{B}}「だんご大家族も可愛いが、他のキャラクターのほうがもっともっと可愛いと言われたら、おまえ、どうだっ」
 
<8000> \{Nagisa} "I don't mind."
 
<8000> \{Nagisa} "I don't mind."
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<8058> \{\m{B}} "You're absolutely great as you are."
 
<8058> \{\m{B}} "You're absolutely great as you are."
 
// \{\m{B}}「いれてるよ、十分」
 
// \{\m{B}}「いれてるよ、十分」
<8059> \{\m{B}} "I can't stop looking at you, Nagisa..."
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<8059> \{\m{B}} "I can't stop looking at you Nagisa..."
 
// \{\m{B}}「俺のほうが、渚に見合ってないかも…」
 
// \{\m{B}}「俺のほうが、渚に見合ってないかも…」
 
<8060> \{Nagisa} "It's not like that."
 
<8060> \{Nagisa} "It's not like that."
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// I want to say "No, I didn't hate it." - Blatt
 
// I want to say "No, I didn't hate it." - Blatt
 
// \{\m{B}}「ああ」
 
// \{\m{B}}「ああ」
<8088> \{\m{B}} "Like I want to die, thinking that."
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<8088> \{\m{B}} "Like i want to die, thinking that."
 
// \{\m{B}}「今、このまま死にたいって思った」
 
// \{\m{B}}「今、このまま死にたいって思った」
 
<8089> I answered that in good faith.
 
<8089> I answered that in good faith.
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<8133> \{\m{B}} "... is that so?"
 
<8133> \{\m{B}} "... is that so?"
 
// \{\m{B}}「…そうなんすか」
 
// \{\m{B}}「…そうなんすか」
<8134> \{Yoshino} "Once the contractors also get involved, work'll come here. It'll get busy."
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<8134> \{Yoshino} "Once the contractors also get involved, work here'll come. It'll get busy."
 
// \{芳野}「元請も絡んでるから、うちにもいくつか仕事が来るだろ。忙しくなるぞ」
 
// \{芳野}「元請も絡んでるから、うちにもいくつか仕事が来るだろ。忙しくなるぞ」
 
<8135> As he spoke, Yoshino-san closed up the newspaper, preparing to begin work.
 
<8135> As he spoke, Yoshino-san closed up the newspaper, preparing to begin work.
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<8208> \{\m{B}} "I really love you, Nagisa..."
 
<8208> \{\m{B}} "I really love you, Nagisa..."
 
// \{\m{B}}「俺は、本当に渚が大好きだから…」
 
// \{\m{B}}「俺は、本当に渚が大好きだから…」
<8209> \{Nagisa} "Yes, I really love you too, \m{B}-kun."
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<8209> \{Nagisa} "Yes, I really love you too \m{B}-kun."
 
// \{渚}「はい、わたしも\m{B}くんのこと大好きです」
 
// \{渚}「はい、わたしも\m{B}くんのこと大好きです」
 
<8210> \{\m{B}} "........."
 
<8210> \{\m{B}} "........."
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<8222> It was empty like a dream, not painful to the point of crying.
 
<8222> It was empty like a dream, not painful to the point of crying.
 
// 夢のように虚ろで、泣けるほどにせつなかった。
 
// 夢のように虚ろで、泣けるほどにせつなかった。
<8223> Two years ago, I stood at the bottom of that hill.
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<8223> Two years ago, I stood at the bottom of tha thill.
 
// 2年前、俺は坂の下に立ちつくしてた。
 
// 2年前、俺は坂の下に立ちつくしてた。
 
<8224> Not knowing where I was going, I remember being irritated.
 
<8224> Not knowing where I was going, I remember being irritated.
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<8240> You're here...\p Nagisa.
 
<8240> You're here...\p Nagisa.
 
// 居てくれた…\p渚。
 
// 居てくれた…\p渚。
<8241> I grabbed that hand.
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<8241> I grabbed it that hand.
 
// その手を掴む。
 
// その手を掴む。
<8242> And strongly held on to it.
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<8242> And strongly grip it.
// Orig TL: <8242> And strongly grip it.
 
 
// 強く握る。
 
// 強く握る。
 
<8243> \{Nagisa} "\m{B}-kun, what's the matter?"
 
<8243> \{Nagisa} "\m{B}-kun, what's the matter?"

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