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// As she moves, her body scrapes by mine.
 
// As she moves, her body scrapes by mine.
   
<0205> Oái... nửa thân dưới của Furukawa đang đụng vào vùng nguy hiểm...
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<0205> Oái.... nửa thân dưới của Furukawa đang đụng vào vùng nguy hiểm...
 
// Guaah.... Furukawa's lower body is rubbing against me...
 
// Guaah.... Furukawa's lower body is rubbing against me...
   
<0206> Ráng kìm lại nào, bản năng đàn ông mà trỗi dậy ngay lúc này thì khốn...
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<0206> Ráng kiềm lại nào, bản năng đàn ông mà trỗi dậy ngay lúc này thì khốn...
 
// I mustn't let my body take control in this situation...
 
// I mustn't let my body take control in this situation...
   
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// \{\m{B}} "Too bad. I'll be able to escape and return quickly."
 
// \{\m{B}} "Too bad. I'll be able to escape and return quickly."
   
<0468> \{Sunohara} 『? Tức là sao?』
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<0468> \{Sunohara} 『Ơ? Tức là sao?』
 
// \{Sunohara} "Eh? What do you mean?"
 
// \{Sunohara} "Eh? What do you mean?"
   
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// Just thinking about it, the lower half of my body heats up...
 
// Just thinking about it, the lower half of my body heats up...
   
<0538> Ráng kìm lại nào, bản năng đàn ông mà trỗi dậy ngay lúc này thì khốn...
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<0538> Ráng kiềm lại nào, bản năng đàn ông mà trỗi dậy ngay lúc này thì khốn...
 
// However, to let my body take control in this situation is a little...
 
// However, to let my body take control in this situation is a little...
   
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// \{Tomoyo} "When that happens, you should get out..."
 
// \{Tomoyo} "When that happens, you should get out..."
   
<0546> \{\m{B}} 『? Thế còn em thì sao?』
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<0546> \{\m{B}} 『Ơ? Thế còn em thì sao?』
 
// \{\m{B}} "Eh? What about you?"
 
// \{\m{B}} "Eh? What about you?"
   
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// \{Tomoyo} "Wha...?!"
 
// \{Tomoyo} "Wha...?!"
   
<0589> \{Tomoyo} 『Đ-đợi đã...\ \
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<0589> \{Tomoyo} 『Đ-đợt đã...\ \
 
// \{Tomoyo} "W-wait a second... \m{A}..."
 
// \{Tomoyo} "W-wait a second... \m{A}..."
   

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