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Because the girl isn’t being cautious of this action, therefore it seems that it is possible to see through the dress.
 
Because the girl isn’t being cautious of this action, therefore it seems that it is possible to see through the dress.
   
Shirou hurriedly shifted his sight away, Nata not understanding this action, cocked her head.
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Shirou hurriedly shifted his sight away, Natalie not understanding this action, cocked her head.
   
 
“Um, what’s up? You seems hot, is the rising in yang energy in spring the cause?”
 
“Um, what’s up? You seems hot, is the rising in yang energy in spring the cause?”
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The boy incessantly shook his head, trying to shift to the former topic.
 
The boy incessantly shook his head, trying to shift to the former topic.
   
“Say, saying the word [energy] and so on, it is like you know what its appearance looks like.”
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“Say, saying the word [energy] and so on, it is like you know what its appearance.”
   
 
“I am immortal after all.”
 
“I am immortal after all.”
   
“Yes yes. You can even eat mist. Moreover, take these things too.”
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“Yes yes. You can even eat cloud. Moreover, take these things too.”
   
 
The girl handily caught the plastic bags that were being thrown one by one . Needless to say that it is impossible to catch all of these with just two hands, from the fourth one onwards it had been piling up forming a pyramidal shape.
 
The girl handily caught the plastic bags that were being thrown one by one . Needless to say that it is impossible to catch all of these with just two hands, from the fourth one onwards it had been piling up forming a pyramidal shape.

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