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Kasugai Yuu took no attention to any of the topics the others were talking about and stood up while holding his bag.
 
Kasugai Yuu took no attention to any of the topics the others were talking about and stood up while holding his bag.
   
He didn't particularly stand out or anything. He wore his uniform normally, though the color of his undershirt did violate the school rules it was still okay, at any rate he was just a normal obscure sixteen year old boy.
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He didn't particularly stand out or anything. He wore his uniform normally, though the color of his undershirt did violate the school rules it was still okay, at any rate he was just a normal obscure sixteen year olds boy.
   
 
After the sunset outside met his eyes── which was certainly beautiful── he went ahead to the exit.
 
After the sunset outside met his eyes── which was certainly beautiful── he went ahead to the exit.
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:“Ooi, Yuu!”
 
:“Ooi, Yuu!”
   
The one who called him was a boy who stood out more than him. His hair had a light brown color and was also pretty tall. While only facing his face Yuu replied,
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The one who called him was a boy who stood out more than him. His hair had a light brown colour and was also pretty tall. While only facing his face Yuu replied,
   
 
:“What is it Kouta?”
 
:“What is it Kouta?”
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:“If you isolate yourself too much, your relationship with others will worsen”
 
:“If you isolate yourself too much, your relationship with others will worsen”
   
Kudzuchi Fuyufu.
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Kuduchi Fuyufu.
   
 
She was a girl who would perfectly fit wearing a S-size uniform, a small-sized petite girl. She was even shorter than Yuu who was shorter compared to an average guys' height. Yuu looked down on her head that seemed like a doll wrapped with sleek black hair.
 
She was a girl who would perfectly fit wearing a S-size uniform, a small-sized petite girl. She was even shorter than Yuu who was shorter compared to an average guys' height. Yuu looked down on her head that seemed like a doll wrapped with sleek black hair.
   
But in contrast to her small physic, her facial expression was that of a grown-up. And despite having a pretty cute face, she's giving off atmosphere that hard to get close in.
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But in contrast to her small physic, her facial expression was that of a grown-up. Despite having a pretty cute face, something about her was hard to Understand
 
 
:“People call that 『Loner』”
 
:“People call that 『Loner』”
   
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Yuu’s back slowly disappeared from the hallway, and she couldn't even bid him a farewell
 
Yuu’s back slowly disappeared from the hallway, and she couldn't even bid him a farewell
 
 
:“Haaa…”
 
:“Haaa…”
   
With an expressionless face, Kodzuchi Fuyufu let out a sigh. It felt like tears were flowing up, but she managed to hold it in. It wasn't like she was sad or anything, she was just a little nervous.
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With an expressionless face, Koduchi Fuyufu let out a sigh. It felt like tears were flowing up, but she managed to hold it in. It wasn't like she was sad or anything, she was just a little nervous.
   
 
As the tension left, complaints started pouring out of her mouth.
 
As the tension left, complaints started pouring out of her mouth.
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:“Even though I did the trouble to comfort him”
 
:“Even though I did the trouble to comfort him”
   
:“““No, no, no… you’re not comforting him at all!”””
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:“““No, no, no…. you’re not comforting him at all!”””
   
 
Retorted from the group of three girls in softball and table tennis club uniforms who were watching over Fuyufu from afar.
 
Retorted from the group of three girls in softball and table tennis club uniforms who were watching over Fuyufu from afar.
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It was surrounded by grassy fields and woods, the house that looked dark and pale even in daylight was rumored to be haunted by the children of the neighborhood.
 
It was surrounded by grassy fields and woods, the house that looked dark and pale even in daylight was rumored to be haunted by the children of the neighborhood.
   
And in front of the haunted house, Yuu inserted a card key and typed in the password of the electronic lock. *Pssssssh*… the sound of air pressure escaped through the cylinder.
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And in front of the haunted house, Yuu inserted a card key and typed in the password of the electronic lock. *Pssssssh*… the sound of air pressure escaped through the cylinder.
   
 
He opened the door and entered the house. The evening sunlight passed through the corner of the door. He closed the door from behind and the sounds from outside were severed and disappeared into the hollow.
 
He opened the door and entered the house. The evening sunlight passed through the corner of the door. He closed the door from behind and the sounds from outside were severed and disappeared into the hollow.
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He randomly threw his blazer and bag onto the floor and sat on the sofa while still wearing his uniform. His『CtG』 exclusive terminal, Rumeil, was on top of the table and was left charging.
 
He randomly threw his blazer and bag onto the floor and sat on the sofa while still wearing his uniform. His『CtG』 exclusive terminal, Rumeil, was on top of the table and was left charging.
   
After putting the familiar device onto his head, he pressed the start switch. A blue light shined from the device, showing that it was working. *Nnnnn*… The low startup sound somehow tickled his stomach.
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After putting the familiar device onto his head, he pressed the start switch. A blue light shined from the device, showing that it was working. *Nnnnn*…. The low startup sound somehow tickled his stomach.
   
   
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'''SINGLE BLOW KILLED!!'''
 
'''SINGLE BLOW KILLED!!'''
   
As a special effect of the result of his attack, some words were displayed with the shed blood, it was a system called Blood Descript. It was said that the system was added by the graphic designer, and Yuu honestly thought it was a bad taste. But if this didn't exist, some players would feel something was lacking.
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As a special effect of the result of his attack, some words were displayed with the shedded blood, it was a system called Blood Descript. It was said that the system was added by the graphic designer, and Yuu honestly thought it was a bad taste. But if this didn't exist, some players would feel something was lacking.
   
 
:“They sure have a good (bad) hobby…”
 
:“They sure have a good (bad) hobby…”
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Clamp once again panicked like before but for a different reason. In response, the Kinokino gentlemanly lowered its head.
 
Clamp once again panicked like before but for a different reason. In response, the Kinokino gentlemanly lowered its head.
   
:“Non. My name is Payakino, a Nanny NPC”
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:“Non<ref>Payakino often speak Italian, for… some reason.</ref> (No). My name is Payakino, a Nanny NPC”
   
 
:“Nanny…?”
 
:“Nanny…?”
   
:“Oui. To take care of children born from the 《Marriage》 Event is my function as well as my duty”
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:“Ui (Yes). To take care of children born from the 《Marriage》 Event is my function as well as my duty”
   
 
Why it speaks like a monsieur even though it’s a nanny? It has high-pitched voice, or more like, it sounds synthesized. Its gender is also unclear. No, more than that…
 
Why it speaks like a monsieur even though it’s a nanny? It has high-pitched voice, or more like, it sounds synthesized. Its gender is also unclear. No, more than that…
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Witnessing this mushroom…… thing, Mifa was truly startled, presumably more than she should have. Furthermore that mushroom was carrying a baby, and just like that it claimed that the baby was Mifa’s.
 
Witnessing this mushroom…… thing, Mifa was truly startled, presumably more than she should have. Furthermore that mushroom was carrying a baby, and just like that it claimed that the baby was Mifa’s.
   
At first Mifa thought that there must've been some kind of mistake, but Payakino knew in great detail about Mifa and Clamp, furthermore it had the 『CtG』 digital signature of Imagine Ekphrasis corporation that was shown in the extended manual.
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At first Mifa thought that there must've been some kind of mistake, but Payakino knew in great detail about Mifa and Clamp, furthermore it had the『CtG』 digital signature of Imagine Ekphrasis corporation that was shown in the extended manual.
   
 
In short── The pair of players was randomly given a child to raise and have it grown. But if either of the players refused, the event will become invalid and so on.
 
In short── The pair of players was randomly given a child to raise and have it grown. But if either of the players refused, the event will become invalid and so on.
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But, on the contrary to Clamp’s nodding, Kasugai Yuu felt uneasy and had worries about this strange chain of events.
 
But, on the contrary to Clamp’s nodding, Kasugai Yuu felt uneasy and had worries about this strange chain of events.
   
The criteria aside, only those who are perfect with each other must marry, was that truly the right way of thinking.<!-- Daniman1: The text use pasts tense, indicating that Yuu did not think that way at this moment --> Even that person will one day regret that she chose the wrong partner. However an NPC baby was born without warning, it felt slightly off from the 『CtG』 developer’s typical unscrupulous surprises.
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The criterias aside, only those who are perfect with each other must marry, was that truly the right way of thinking.<!-- Daniman1: The text use pasts tense, indicating that Yuu did not think that way at this moment --> Even that person will one day regret that she chose the wrong partner. However an NPC baby was born without warning, it felt slightly off from the『CtG』 developer’s typical unscrupulous surprises.
   
 
It came from Kasugai Mana’s game philosophy, Yuu’s mother who continued to work for Imagine Ekphrasis in the third development office of 『Cradle to The Grave』 as the lead developer till the day of her death.
 
It came from Kasugai Mana’s game philosophy, Yuu’s mother who continued to work for Imagine Ekphrasis in the third development office of 『Cradle to The Grave』 as the lead developer till the day of her death.
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In the historical world, Bushido Grave Oedo capital, they watched the fireworks sparkling in the sky on a houseboat sailing above the waterway. Right on his side was Mifa wearing a relaxing light blue Kimono<ref>Kimono (着物) is a Japanese traditional garment.</ref>, while singing a song in a clear beautiful voice.
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In the historical world, Bushido Grave Oedo capital, they watched the fireworks sparkling in the sky on a houseboat sailing above the waterway. Right on his side was Mifa wearing a relaxing light blue Kimono<ref>Kimono (着物) is a Japanese traditional garment. Although I’m sure over 80% of people who read this already know it.</ref>, while singing a song in a clear beautiful voice.
   
 
It was a song he had never heard of before, and it didn't appear to be one of those stereotyped songs from the game.
 
It was a song he had never heard of before, and it didn't appear to be one of those stereotyped songs from the game.
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As he thought about it, a warm sensation rode on his knees. It was Haruha. Daddy, daddy, she said in a lisp, like a little creature she was stirring restlessly above his knees.
 
As he thought about it, a warm sensation rode on his knees. It was Haruha. Daddy, daddy, she said in a lisp, like a little creature she was stirring restlessly above his knees.
   
Small. Round, wherever you stroke her. It was soft like a full-body cushion. She tried to stand wobbly but easily fell, and let out an “Uuu~” while staring at him curiously.
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Small. Round, wherever you stroke her. It was soft like a full-body cushion. She tried to stand wobbly but easily fell, and let out an“Uuu~”while staring at him curiously.
   
 
──Ultimately, she was cute.
 
──Ultimately, she was cute.
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Their wishes might never come true, but.
 
Their wishes might never come true, but.
   
As Haruha slowly grew and learn more words, she began to show more emotions.
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As Haruha slowly grew and learnt more words, she began to show more emotions.
   
   
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That day── A month after Haruha's birth.
 
That day── A month after Haruha's birth.
   
With her five-year-old figure, Haruha made Clamp and Mifa kneel in a Seiza position<ref>Seiza (正座, literally "proper sitting") is the Japanese term for one of the traditional formal ways of sitting in Japan.</ref> in front of her.
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With her five-year-old figure, Haruha made Clamp and Mifa kneel in a<ref>Seiza position(正座), an act of begging for forgiveness in Japan.</ref> in front of her.
   
 
In the usual hotel room. Haruha folded her arms together. It was amazing how a baby who used to be so round and small became……… so grown up and dazzling. And beside her was Payakino deliberately playing with a shinai<ref>A type of bamboo/wooden sword, often used for sword training in Japan.</ref>, swinging it back and forth.
 
In the usual hotel room. Haruha folded her arms together. It was amazing how a baby who used to be so round and small became……… so grown up and dazzling. And beside her was Payakino deliberately playing with a shinai<ref>A type of bamboo/wooden sword, often used for sword training in Japan.</ref>, swinging it back and forth.
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:“The soy sauce at the market was on sell… and it was very crowded”
 
:“The soy sauce at the market was on sell… and it was very crowded”
 
 
:“I-I’m sorry… something little happened in the house”
 
:“I-I’m sorry… something little happened in the house”
   
 
The two of them earnestly apologized with a silky voice as if reading a script.
 
The two of them earnestly apologized with a silky voice as if reading a script.
   
:“Ah, look Haruha. I brought throwing knives. See, it has cute engravings on it, it’s small and light so even girl can easily use it!”
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:“Ah, look Haruha. I brought a throwing knife. See, it has cute sculptures on it, it’s small and light so even girl can easily use it!”
   
Clamp took out the throwing knives from his item box and showed it. It was within a small six blades set, and it was also popular as both an accessory and a decoration.
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Clamp took out the throwing knife from his item box and showed it. It was within a small six sheet sets, it was also popular as both an accessory and a decoration.
   
 
:”Really? A weapon for a souvenir, that’s why boys are no good”
 
:”Really? A weapon for a souvenir, that’s why boys are no good”
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:“It’s okay right. We’re husband and wife for one”
 
:“It’s okay right. We’re husband and wife for one”
   
While continuing to plead, Mifa clung to Clamp’s empty hand. Mifa then confirmed her victory after realizing that Clamp had just stopped his breath.
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While continueing to plead, Mifa clung to Clamp’s empty hand. Mifa then confirmed her victory after realizing that Clamp had just stopped his breath.
   
 
:“Why are you so flustered? This is just inside a game isn't it?”
 
:“Why are you so flustered? This is just inside a game isn't it?”
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They walked little by little, the heat coming from the snuggled up pair made them grow restless. But that heat was not the heat coming from the lantern's flame or magic. That's why it wouldn't cool down no matter how much time had passed.
 
They walked little by little, the heat coming from the snuggled up pair made them grow restless. But that heat was not the heat coming from the lantern's flame or magic. That's why it wouldn't cool down no matter how much time had passed.
 
 
:“It might be just a game”
 
:“It might be just a game”
   
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:“But doesn't that only apply to <i>current</i> computers?”
 
:“But doesn't that only apply to <i>current</i> computers?”
   
Fuyufu responded with a“You mean?” face. Yuu also felt that he had became too stubborn. While pointing at her with the chopsticks he used to stab his fish hamburger with , he continued.
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Fuyufu responded with a“You mean?” face. Yuu also felt that he had became too stubborn. While pointing at her with the chopsticks he used to stab his fish hamburger with , he continued.<!-- Daniman1: Whuwhut? I’m pretty sure I read this right, but… he eat hamburger with a chopsticks, how can that happens? Use fork for damn sake-->
   
 
:“It’s 『CtG』. You know, the computer used for that is known for having stronger capabilities than any other. If it has that much power, won’t it be possible to create a human-like mind?”
 
:“It’s 『CtG』. You know, the computer used for that is known for having stronger capabilities than any other. If it has that much power, won’t it be possible to create a human-like mind?”
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It was the time for Clamp to be troubled now.
 
It was the time for Clamp to be troubled now.
   
:“Nnn…… half correct. That is the paper model of a person who used to work as a servant<ref>It’s written as 奴(やっこ) or Yakko, it is the name/title for servant of Samurai family from Edo period.</ref>. Look, it has legs and arms right? In other word it’s a doll”
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:“Nnn…… half correct. That is the paper model of a person who used to work as a servant<ref>It’s written as 奴(やっこ) or Yakko, it is the name/title for servant of Samurai family from Edo period, to put it in a bad way, it means slave</ref>. Look, it has legs and arms right? In other word it’s a doll”
   
 
:“A doll…”
 
:“A doll…”
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:““Is this… Haruha?””
 
:““Is this… Haruha?””
 
 
:““A doll””
 
:““A doll””
   
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The more he liked Haruha, the more troubled he became.
 
The more he liked Haruha, the more troubled he became.
   
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:”Ahahaha”
 
:”Ahahaha”
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What the man said “Marionette Grave” was a newly released world Sphere, a world of cyberpunk. In order to conquer it, expensive equipment was essential. Within groups of inpatient players, there were people who dared to cross the dangerous line in order to collect funds just like this.
 
What the man said “Marionette Grave” was a newly released world Sphere, a world of cyberpunk. In order to conquer it, expensive equipment was essential. Within groups of inpatient players, there were people who dared to cross the dangerous line in order to collect funds just like this.
   
Seeing from Expansion (AR) mode, all information was filtered other than their level, and around their shoulders there was a red placards (tag) floating above them. If someone tried to attack someone in public facilities he/she would receive a 《Criminal》 red tag, and they will be registered as a target of a subjugation quest for a period of time .
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Seeing from Expansion (AR) mode, all information was filtered other than their level, and around their shoulders there was a red placards (tag) floating above them. If someone tried to attack someone in public facilities he/she would receive a《Criminal》 red tag, and they will be registered as a target of a subjugation quest for a period of time .
   
 
As expected from those who wanted to be on top, their levels were certainly higher than Clamps.
 
As expected from those who wanted to be on top, their levels were certainly higher than Clamps.
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Seeing the passengers being obedient, the bearded man licked his lips in delight. The color of his pupils appeared to have brightened and it seems he had activated the Extended (AR) mode vision.
 
Seeing the passengers being obedient, the bearded man licked his lips in delight. The color of his pupils appeared to have brightened and it seems he had activated the Extended (AR) mode vision.
   
:“First of all, in order to not let anyone do anything strange in the middle of collecting money, we will be taking some hostages.
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“First of all, in order to not let anyone do anything strange in the middle of collecting money, we will be taking some hostages.
:………The first one will be that pseudo Sister, and who's next. No matter how much they resist, we can’t really make a Travel who can't be killed as a hostage”
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………The first one will be that pseudo Sister, and who's next. No matter how much they resist, we can’t really make a Travel who can't be killed as a hostage”
   
 
Somehow he got a bad feeling, and it was a hit.
 
Somehow he got a bad feeling, and it was a hit.
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:“Oooh….?”
 
:“Oooh….?”
   
It was a unique sensation of 『CtG』. Because of the system, the pain was changed to a slight sense of discomfort so you wouldn't feel any actual pain. But that’s why the sensation of cold metal transmitted through his flesh could be clearly felt── passing beyond the realm of pain, he was haunted by an illusion of being a corpse.
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It was a unique sensation of『CtG』. Because of the system, the pain was changed to a slight sense of discomfort so you wouldn't feel any actual pain. But that’s why the sensation of cold metal transmitted through his flesh could be clearly felt── passing beyond the realm of pain, he was haunted by an illusion of being a corpse.
   
 
And then the bearded man saw. The young girl in red Kimono, slowly come close and threw the second knife.
 
And then the bearded man saw. The young girl in red Kimono, slowly come close and threw the second knife.
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But Haruha was undaunted. Her large unwavering eyes, as if being sucked in pushed the bearded man to his limit. He pulled the trigger of the gun.
 
But Haruha was undaunted. Her large unwavering eyes, as if being sucked in pushed the bearded man to his limit. He pulled the trigger of the gun.
   
:“W-What── You… shitty brat!”
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: “W-What── You… shitty brat!”
   
 
*BANG*. The sound of the gunshot from the bearded man’s hand. Even though it was in a virtual world, no one would stand watching a scene of a kid being shot.
 
*BANG*. The sound of the gunshot from the bearded man’s hand. Even though it was in a virtual world, no one would stand watching a scene of a kid being shot.
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:“A lot!
 
:“A lot!
:Haruha endured a lot!
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:I endured a lot!
 
:and finally! Finally!
 
:and finally! Finally!
 
:It’s finally!! It’s finally the day when we will play a lot!
 
:It’s finally!! It’s finally the day when we will play a lot!
 
:but why!? Why don't you understand? Is old man stupid!?
 
:but why!? Why don't you understand? Is old man stupid!?
:Why? Haruha said, why? Why would you do such a mean thing!?”
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:Why? I said, why? Why would you do such a mean thing!?”
   
 
It was a child's impeachment yelling to children for children. She believed that breaking her “Promised holiday” was nothing but pure evil and did not doubt that even slightly, it was the unconditional trust she had for her family and the world. And now all of that was crushed, due to that it also enhanced her childish emotions and caused an explosion inside her.
 
It was a child's impeachment yelling to children for children. She believed that breaking her “Promised holiday” was nothing but pure evil and did not doubt that even slightly, it was the unconditional trust she had for her family and the world. And now all of that was crushed, due to that it also enhanced her childish emotions and caused an explosion inside her.
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That moment, Clamp moved as well.
 
That moment, Clamp moved as well.
   
While pushing down the tall man, he simultaneously took his gun. Along with a 『Snatch!』 notification sound, the message saying <span style="border:solid 2px blue;width:600px;border-radius:8px;padding:3px;background-color:#b0b0ff;">You stole item “Automatic M1905”<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Colt_M1900</ref></span> was displayed.
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While pushing down the tall man, he simultaneously took his gun. Along with a 『Snatch!』 notification sound, the message saying <span style="border:solid 2px blue;width:600px;border-radius:8px;padding:3px;background-color:#b0b0ff;">You stole item “Automatic M1905”<ref>http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Colt_M1900</ref><!-- Daniman1: It will be nice if someone give reference note for this, I’m not knowledgeable with gun --></span> was displayed.
   
 
:”Agh, bastard!”
 
:”Agh, bastard!”
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The moment after that word was heard, the disappointed robber’s torso was blown away onto the air.  
 
The moment after that word was heard, the disappointed robber’s torso was blown away onto the air.  
   
Clamp who had returned back into a shooting position instantly shot him with a Sawed-off shotgun<ref>A type of shotgun with a shorter gun barrel (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sawed-off_shotgun).</ref>. The robber who got shot and shredded into pieces, was clinging onto an unattended seat and glared at Clamp.
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Clamp who had returned back into a shooting position instantly shot him with a Sawed-off shotgun<ref>A type of shotgun with a shorter gun barrel (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sawed-off_shotgun)</ref>. The robber who got shot and shredded into pieces, was clinging onto an unattended seat and glared at Clamp.
   
 
:”What the heck with that instant warping…… was it the connection lag that has been happening these days?”
 
:”What the heck with that instant warping…… was it the connection lag that has been happening these days?”
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He might as well have spoken the truth.
 
He might as well have spoken the truth.
   
Haruha was a baby born as a part of a 《Marriage》 event.
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Haruha was a baby born as a part of a《Marriage》 event.
 
That was why he didn't have to worry.
 
That was why he didn't have to worry.
 
Because she wasn't a human, but.
 
Because she wasn't a human, but.
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The first one who raised her voice was Haruha, and she dived into it, with all her might onto the stuffed-doll body. The Nanny NPC caught the cannonball-like girl.
 
The first one who raised her voice was Haruha, and she dived into it, with all her might onto the stuffed-doll body. The Nanny NPC caught the cannonball-like girl.
   
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:”Bonjour. Monsieur mon ami” <ref>Bonjour means “good day” and Monsieur is honorific title that used to refer to or address the eldest living brother of the king. Calling French people out there!!!</ref>
:”Bonjour. Monsieur mon ami”
 
   
And then somehow, it spoke out a greeting that sounded like it was coming from the TV version of a “Detective Poirot”<ref>Referencing the fictional character Hercule Poirot.</ref> rather than actual French. Imitating that, Haruha repeated the word “Monsieur mon ami” over and over.
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And then somehow, it spoke out a greeting that sounded like it was coming from the TV version of a“Detective Poirot”<ref>Referencing the fictional character Hercule Poirot </ref> rather than actual French. Imitating that, Haruha repeated the word “Monsieur mon ami” over and over.
   
 
Everyone within the carriage── Even Clamp and Mifa── were taken aback, and on behalf of the elderly couple the husband opened his mouth.
 
Everyone within the carriage── Even Clamp and Mifa── were taken aback, and on behalf of the elderly couple the husband opened his mouth.
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Not waiting for anyone to respond, Payakino turned backwards and jumped onto the back of the horse waiting outside.
 
Not waiting for anyone to respond, Payakino turned backwards and jumped onto the back of the horse waiting outside.
   
:“Yeeehaa~ go Silver Star!”
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“Yeeehaa~ go Silver Star!”
   
 
Riding the horse, it quickly disappeared in an instant. ──
 
Riding the horse, it quickly disappeared in an instant. ──
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