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"—Emulation start."
 
"—Emulation start."
   
In the short time it took to say those words, the Rubik's cube transformed. Rather, one should say that its very nature changed.
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In the short time it took to say those words, the Rubik's cube transformed. Rather, one should say that it underwent a variation.
   
''It was her original form, the black iron cube large enough for one to wrap their arms around''.
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Maintaining her original posture, her arms could hug the black iron box.
   
Ignoring the laws of physics, the palm of her hand was firmly attracted to the iron cube. In order for her characteristics to manifest, Fear needed this kind of object. In order to become 'her other self', she needed something resembling this cube.
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Ignoring the laws of physics, the palms of her hands were firmly attracted to the iron box. In order for Fear's characteristics to appear, she needs to have this kind of object. In order to become 'her other self', she needs something similar to this cube.
   
"Generating umbilical path, connected. Semi-remote control, materialized and equipped."
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"Defining apposition with generation, connected. Semi remote control materialization equipped."
   
 
As if expressing its weight, the cube gave off a dull thud as it landed on the roof. Fear's palm continued to face downwards. A strange chain extended from her palm and connected to the cube at her feet. Rather than interlocking rings, the individual chain links were black cubes connected to one another by opposite vertices.
 
As if expressing its weight, the cube gave off a dull thud as it landed on the roof. Fear's palm continued to face downwards. A strange chain extended from her palm and connected to the cube at her feet. Rather than interlocking rings, the individual chain links were black cubes connected to one another by opposite vertices.

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