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''And.''
 
''And.''
   
''"Now...... there’s nothing to fear any more, Ferris. Everything has ended. From here on, I’ll be protecting you."''
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''"Now...... there’s nothing to fear any more, Ferris. Everything has ended. From hereon, I’ll be protecting you."''
   
 
As a child, she could only shake in fear at those words.
 
As a child, she could only shake in fear at those words.
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If it’s this monster, however far he was, he could move across distances in an instant, and could have come here to save them earlier --- that’s the way Froaude saw it.
 
If it’s this monster, however far he was, he could move across distances in an instant, and could have come here to save them earlier --- that’s the way Froaude saw it.
   
If that’s the case, he could have come and saved them right from the beginning.
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If that’s the case, he could have come and save them right from the beginning.
   
 
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He could have come and saved them before they got wounded.
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He could have come and save them before they got wounded.
   
 
But he didn’t. No, was it because he couldn’t?
 
But he didn’t. No, was it because he couldn’t?
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Just as he did that, Lucile withdrew that golden sword which had appeared from out of nowhere, from Ferris.
 
Just as he did that, Lucile withdrew that golden sword which had appeared from out of nowhere, from Ferris.
   
It seemed like he had finished healing his sister’s wounds. The wounds which would have been fatal without a doubt, had completely disappeared without a trace from the body of Ferris Eris. Even her clothes which were ripped into shreds were restored.
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It seemed like he had done healing his sister’s wounds. The wounds which would have been fatal without a doubt, had completely disappeared without a trace from the body of Ferris Eris. Even her clothes which were ripped into shreds were restored.
   
 
It was if she had been returned to the state before she was attacked, an abnormal power indeed.
 
It was if she had been returned to the state before she was attacked, an abnormal power indeed.
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'''Kagerou (Shadow Beasts)'''. Conjured by the ring he was wearing, '''The Ring of The Dark Emperor'''.
 
'''Kagerou (Shadow Beasts)'''. Conjured by the ring he was wearing, '''The Ring of The Dark Emperor'''.
   
Their movements are fast and sharp. At a level that normal human beings are unable to follow. No, even the mage knights would not be able to come close to their level of power.
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Their movements are fast and sharp. At a level which normal human beings are unable to follow. No, even the mage knights would not be able to come close to their level of power.
   
 
However, even so, compared to the monster, they were nothing more than the level of henchmen weaklings. And that was the very truth. That was the level of power hidden within the monster.
 
However, even so, compared to the monster, they were nothing more than the level of henchmen weaklings. And that was the very truth. That was the level of power hidden within the monster.
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“............”
 
“............”
   
“That’s why you were late in coming.”
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“That’s you were late in coming.”
   
 
“............”
 
“............”
   
“That’s why you were late in coming to save your sisters.”
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“That’s you were late in coming to save your sisters.”
   
 
“............”
 
“............”

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