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If you don't consider him as a monster, then who can you call a monster?
 
If you don't consider him as a monster, then who can you call a monster?
   
That was how strong Ryner, a former member of the covert ops group called '''The Greatest Magician of Roland''', thought of and ascertained Claugh.
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That was how strong Ryner, a former member of the convert ops group called '''The Greatest Magician of Roland''', thought of and ascertained Claugh.
   
 
But, but still.
 
But, but still.
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That should have been the case however.
 
That should have been the case however.
   
Claugh pulled out a knife.
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Claugh pulled out the knife.
   
 
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Ryner groaned. If he tried to dodge, he wouldn’t make it.
 
Ryner groaned. If he tried to dodge, he wouldn’t make it.
   
Thus he knocked it away with his hand.<!-- Claugh threw a knife and got deflected? -->
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That’s he knocked it away with his hand.
   
 
But, at that moment, Claugh was already moving. A move for killing Ryner.
 
But, at that moment, Claugh was already moving. A move for killing Ryner.
   
Every bit of his movement was very much faster than the moves that they had exchanged previously.
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Every bit of his movement was very much faster than the moves they had exchanged previously.
   
 
On seeing that.
 
On seeing that.
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Pitch-black scribblings and patterns crawled around the surface of his arm.
 
Pitch-black scribblings and patterns crawled around the surface of his arm.
   
So what in the world was that? Just by looking, Ryner understood.
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So what in the world was that, just by looking, Ryner understood.
   
 
A '''forbidden curse'''. An abnormally unthinkable sinister forbidden curse was implanted into that arm.
 
A '''forbidden curse'''. An abnormally unthinkable sinister forbidden curse was implanted into that arm.
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However, that was not a matter that could be considered sane.
 
However, that was not a matter that could be considered sane.
   
This was just knowledge Ryner knew about; in experiments where the '''forbidden curse''' was placed into human bodies, ten thousand out of ten thousand people experimented on died --- it was the kind of experiment in which the odds of success were insanely low.
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This was just knowledge Ryner knew about though, in the experiments where the '''forbidden curse''' was placed into human bodies, ten thousand out of ten thousand people experimented on died --- it was the kind of experiment in which the odds of success were insanely low.
   
 
But yet, this fella had it implanted into his arm.
 
But yet, this fella had it implanted into his arm.
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He muttered without thinking.
 
He muttered without thinking.
   
That was how abnormal the curse sealed in Claugh’s arm was.
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That was how abnormal the curse that was sealed in Claugh’s arm was.
   
 
<!-- ALPHA STIGMA analysis start -->On releasing the curse, the dragons will fly from Claugh’s arm all at once.
 
<!-- ALPHA STIGMA analysis start -->On releasing the curse, the dragons will fly from Claugh’s arm all at once.
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But yet, why was Claugh, who was about to activate his curse, able to retain his consciousness? This was something Ryner could not understand. <!-- sentence was getting a bit cluttered -->
 
But yet, why was Claugh, who was about to activate his curse, able to retain his consciousness? This was something Ryner could not understand. <!-- sentence was getting a bit cluttered -->
   
On top of that, on activating the magic, even if all eight dragons can be released, only at most three of them can be controlled.
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On top of that, on activating the magic, even though all eight dragons can be released, only at most three of them can be controlled.
   
 
The remaining five will attack their surroundings indiscriminately.
 
The remaining five will attack their surroundings indiscriminately.
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But Claugh released that magic which should not have been usable.
 
But Claugh released that magic which should not have been usable.
   
“You're kidding right.”
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“Kidding right.”
   
 
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As Ryner groaned, Claugh’s arm was clad in blue black fire and the eight dragons came forth.
 
As Ryner groaned, Claugh’s arm was clad in blue black fire and the eight dragons came forth.
   
And then three out of those looked around their surroundings. After ascertaining that there was no target, they went after Claugh’s shoulder, waist, and foot, devouring them.
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And then three out of those looked around their surroundings, after ascertaining that there was no target, they went after Claugh’s shoulder, waist, and foot, devouring them.
   
 
A sure-death curse.
 
A sure-death curse.
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A strong eye-dazzling light was dispersed into their surroundings, but, in such a dangerous situation, if he were to shut his eyes from the blinding light even for an instant, he would be killed. So he squinted his eyes to ascertain his surroundings, and with all his might, he retreated backwards.
 
A strong eye-dazzling light was dispersed into their surroundings, but, in such a dangerous situation, if he were to shut his eyes from the blinding light even for an instant, he would be killed. So he squinted his eyes to ascertain his surroundings, and with all his might, he retreated backwards.
   
Towards the forest where he was hiding earlier from Claugh, who was on top of the hill.
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Towards the forest which Ryner was hiding earlier from Claugh who was on top of the hill.
   
 
But,
 
But,

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