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''Let's go together'', Ryner thought back to the time when Sion had held his hand out to him.
 
''Let's go together'', Ryner thought back to the time when Sion had held his hand out to him.
   
That really saved him. Having been engulfed in loneliness and thinking that he was better off dead, that one line really saved him.
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That really saved him. Having enshrouded in solitary and had thought about he was better off being dead <!--Being engulfed in loneliness and thinking he was better off dead?-->, that one line really saved him.
   
 
But it was different now.
 
But it was different now.
   
He was no longer the one being saved, but the one who will try to save, he thought.
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He was longer the one being saved, but the one who will try to save, he thought.
   
 
Of course, he didn't think that he could do it as well as Sion.
 
Of course, he didn't think that he could do it as well as Sion.
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But in the end,
 
But in the end,
   
"...... jeez, you got me. Coming at me straight in that manner with my troops surrounding the tent, doesn't that make me feel embarrassed?"
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"...... jeez, you got me. Coming on me straight in that manner with my troops surrounding the tent, doesn't that make me feel embarrassed?"
   
 
While saying that, he took Ryner's hand. And then,
 
While saying that, he took Ryner's hand. And then,
   
"I understand. I shall trust you. You won't be falsifying your identity again, right?"
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"I understand. I shall trust you. You won't be falsifying your identity again right."
   
 
He smiled upon saying that.
 
He smiled upon saying that.
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On hearing that, Toale said,
 
On hearing that, Toale said,
   
"I know that, you know? I also want to dump everything and take a nice afternoon nap."
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"I know that you know? I also want to dump everything and take a nice afternoon nap."
   
 
"You said it."
 
"You said it."
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In the meantime, Ryner will bring along Toale to subdue Starnel.
 
In the meantime, Ryner will bring along Toale to subdue Starnel.
   
If however, Roland breaks its agreement and attacks while Ryner and Toale are not around, then the plan will change.
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If however, Roland breaks its agreement and attack while Ryner and Toale are not around, then the plan will change.
   
 
The Nelpha troops will carry the flags of Roland and attack Runa, then pretend to lose and run away.
 
The Nelpha troops will carry the flags of Roland and attack Runa, then pretend to lose and run away.
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However, Ryner promptly replied,
 
However, Ryner promptly replied,
   
"I don't know. But, other than that, there's no other way. At any rate, if you stay here, everyone will get killed. We have no choice but to try. Now that we're going to do it...... now that we're going to do it, I'll...... definitely not let you die<!-- I'm definitely not going to let you die is other option here-->. Even though we were<!--we're=we are. Use of earlier means we were should be used--> talking about decoys earlier there's no need to die. Before Roland catches up to us, we'll pass through Cassla. You'll live and get away. Everyone will get away and laugh in the end. So don't foolishly talk about dying again. Get it?"
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"I don't know. But, other than that, there's no other way. At any rate, if you stay here, everyone will get killed. We have no choice but to try. Now that we're going to do it...... now that we're going to do it, I'll...... definitely not let you die<!-- I'm definitely not going to let you die is other option here-->. Even though we were<!--we're=we are. Use of earlier means we were should be used--> talking about decoys earlier, but there's no need to die. Before Roland catches up to us, we'll pass through Cassla. You'll live and get away. Everyone will get away and laugh in the end. So don't foolishly talk about dying again. Get it?"
   
 
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If these three '''Raguru''' (Lightning Falling Lighting) were completed, hundreds of people would be killed again.
 
If these three '''Raguru''' (Lightning Falling Lighting) were completed, hundreds of people would be killed again.
   
However, they had only just started to form up. And Ryner knew how to shut down that magic. No. Even if, say, he didn't know, with his special pair of eyes he would be able to discover the way to shut it down.
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However, they had only just started to form up. And Ryner knew how to shut down that magic. No, even if say, he didn't know, with his special pair of eyes, he would be able to discover the way to shut it down.
   
 
A smile surfaced on Ryner.
 
A smile surfaced on Ryner.
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"...... well, but, at this level, it's still possible to barely counteract them."
 
"...... well, but, at this level, it's still possible to barely counteract them."
   
Upon saying that, he looked around him. And as expected, he found a group of Nelpha soldiers who were about to make a large scale magical attack,
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Upon saying that, he looked around him. And as expected, he found a group Nelpha soldiers who were about to make a large scale magical attack,
   
 
"Hey you guys, that won't do. More importantly, don't you have any water-based magic?"
 
"Hey you guys, that won't do. More importantly, don't you have any water-based magic?"

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