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In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---
 
In the later Han dynasty, a man from Rǔnán found his way into the vase of a [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xian_%28Taoism%29 Xian]. And what he saw there was a giant, solemn palace in a separate world. The world of the vase, in other words, the vase world---
   
"Oh, you are better than I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.
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"Oh, you are better then I thought. Well done," said Dalian with a disinterested voice.
   
 
Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"
 
Huey sullenly showed a crooked smile. "Oh thank you... but how is that related to grandpa's library?"

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