Editing Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter5

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At last, another voice replied. It was the voice of a girl who sounded still young.
 
At last, another voice replied. It was the voice of a girl who sounded still young.
   
"Is... that so?" the owner of the first voice said. It was a boy who seemed bewildered. He asked back, "Isn't that unpractical at times?"
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"Is... that so?" the owner of the first voice said. It was a boy who seemed bewildered. He asked back "Isn't that unpractical at times?"
   
 
The girl turned around upon his call. Surrounded by countless piles of books, she was reading a book laid open in her lap. Her pure white dress that consisted of silk and numerous laces waved like a petal dancing in the wind. She let out a long breath that sounded like a stifled laugh.
 
The girl turned around upon his call. Surrounded by countless piles of books, she was reading a book laid open in her lap. Her pure white dress that consisted of silk and numerous laces waved like a petal dancing in the wind. She let out a long breath that sounded like a stifled laugh.

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