Editing Dantalian no Shoka:Volume1 Chapter5

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And finally, one who had been squished to a pulp by a giant something.
 
And finally, one who had been squished to a pulp by a giant something.
   
Among them were also some who had apparently taken up arms and attempted to fight. But even they had failed in the end and passed away. However, what they had tried to defend against remained a riddle to Huey.
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Among them were also some who had apparently taken up arms and attempted to fight. But even they had failed in the end and passed away. However, what they had tried to defend against stayed a riddle for Huey.
   
 
"It almost looks like... they've been trampled by an elephant," Huey grimaced while looking down at the squashed body of a pitiful maid.
 
"It almost looks like... they've been trampled by an elephant," Huey grimaced while looking down at the squashed body of a pitiful maid.
   
"Yes. That seems to be the case," agreed Dalian terrifyingly easily, without hesitating for a moment.
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"Yes. Seems like it," agreed Dalian terrifyingly easily, without hesitating for a moment.
   
 
On the contrary, now it was Huey who was surprised and turned around to her. "By an elephant...? In such an urban mansion?"
 
On the contrary, now it was Huey who was surprised and turned around to her. "By an elephant...? In such an urban mansion?"

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