Editing Dark Elf:Volume1 Chapter2
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He felt the first blow land. Hard. |
He felt the first blow land. Hard. |
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+ | One of its horns broke off and a warm liquid spurted from the animal’s head, but that was not enough to kill it. The struggling deer shook its head wildly. It was nothing more than luck that kept Klaus’s windpipe from being torn open. If the other horn hadn’t caught on a low bush, it would have scored a clean hit. |
Then he swung down his blunt weapon again. He was fully focused. He couldn’t believe his weary body had this much strength left in it. |
Then he swung down his blunt weapon again. He was fully focused. He couldn’t believe his weary body had this much strength left in it. |
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Just one person’s help would make so much difference, so his first job was to reach a point where he could calmly think things through. He needed a flexible mind to figure out how to set his future wife’s heart aflutter. |
Just one person’s help would make so much difference, so his first job was to reach a point where he could calmly think things through. He needed a flexible mind to figure out how to set his future wife’s heart aflutter. |
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− | The deer was collapsed on its side with a broken |
+ | The deer was collapsed on its side with a broken horn and a smashed head. |
“Time to eat,” said Klaus. “I can get to work after I’ve had some food.” |
“Time to eat,” said Klaus. “I can get to work after I’ve had some food.” |