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His announcement gathered most of the class' attention in an instant.
 
His announcement gathered most of the class' attention in an instant.
   
Even Pascal glanced back with a hint of admiration for the adaptability shown by his advisor. It was only a year ago when the Professor insisted Pascal follow his father's wishes: to extend his education under Albert in Rhin-Lotharingie, on the grounds that it was somehow 'good for him'.
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Even Pascal glanced back with a hint of admiration for the adaptability shown by his advisor. It was only a year ago when the Professor insisted Pascal follow his father's wishes: to extend his education under in Rhin-Lotharingie, on the grounds that it was somehow 'good for him'.
   
 
"But first things first, I'm to remind everyone that all third year's classes will be canceled this Friday for familiar-summoning ceremonies. All students who wish to participate are free to do so."
 
"But first things first, I'm to remind everyone that all third year's classes will be canceled this Friday for familiar-summoning ceremonies. All students who wish to participate are free to do so."
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''...Must be capable enough to serve as my second. An advisor and analyst, but also able to fend for herself with the powers I bestow through our bond.''
 
''...Must be capable enough to serve as my second. An advisor and analyst, but also able to fend for herself with the powers I bestow through our bond.''
   
A brief flashback brought his thoughts back to his childhood, when he and Princess Sylviane could spend hours lounging on the shores of the Cross Lake near the Moltewitz estate. Their conversations naturally flowed from one worldly topic to another with no regard to time, when he had all day to admire the focus and intellect that lay behind her wisteria gaze, or the vast understanding that hid under that dark-purple hair.
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A brief flashback brought his thoughts back to his childhood, when he and Princess Sylviane could spend hours lounging on the shores of the Cross Lake near the Moltewitz estate. Their conversations naturally flowed from one worldly topic to another with no regard to time, when he had all day to admire the focus and intellect that lay behind her wisteria gaze, or the vast understanding that hid under that dark-plum hair.
   
 
''...And she needs to be cute too,'' he decided, with the perfect image coming to mind. ''Vivi is Sylv's favorite, after all.'' He thought of the girl who often accompanied the Crown Princess. ''Can't object to another girl as cute.''
 
''...And she needs to be cute too,'' he decided, with the perfect image coming to mind. ''Vivi is Sylv's favorite, after all.'' He thought of the girl who often accompanied the Crown Princess. ''Can't object to another girl as cute.''

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