Editing Daybreak:Volume 1 Chapter 12

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 59: Line 59:
 
"How long are you going to keep regretting the past instead of facing the present!?"
 
"How long are you going to keep regretting the past instead of facing the present!?"
   
Pascal spun around to glare at her. However Kaede had no intention of keeping this conversation private, not yet.
+
Pascal spun around to glare at her. However Kaede had no intention of keeping this conversation private, not yet:
   
 
"I stand by what I told you: it's not always enough, but it's never too late!"
 
"I stand by what I told you: it's not always enough, but it's never too late!"
Line 65: Line 65:
 
His legs stood stiff while his body stilled. But his eyes wavered, caught amid hesitation and resentment, uncertain between a chance to seek the unpleasant light, or returning to the familiar yet cold shadows.
 
His legs stood stiff while his body stilled. But his eyes wavered, caught amid hesitation and resentment, uncertain between a chance to seek the unpleasant light, or returning to the familiar yet cold shadows.
   
But Kaede knew that Pascal would not be Pascal without his resolve to follow rational judgment in his own way. After a silent moment and a profound sigh, his feet turned themselves around. He cautiously stepped back towards Kaede as she unwittingly broke into a welcoming smile.
+
But Kaede knew that Pascal would not be Pascal without his resolve to follow rational judgment in his own way. After a silent minute and a profound sigh, his feet turned themselves around. He cautiously stepped back towards Kaede as she unwittingly broke into a welcoming smile.
   
 
"<You said you will not fail to honor and repay the debt. Then why not start now with everything you have? Better than your half-way apologies that do nothing but tarnish your word.>"
 
"<You said you will not fail to honor and repay the debt. Then why not start now with everything you have? Better than your half-way apologies that do nothing but tarnish your word.>"
Line 117: Line 117:
 
The only one she heard recover before her departure was Reynaud. Although his utterance was still filled with disbelief:
 
The only one she heard recover before her departure was Reynaud. Although his utterance was still filled with disbelief:
   
"''The Runelord apologizing?'' You've got to be shitting me..."
+
"''THE Runelord apologizing?'' You've got to be shitting me..."
   
   
Line 139: Line 139:
 
"<Yes, because the best assassins of your world are so incompetent that their arrow struck just above my lungs from a flat trajectory shot.>"
 
"<Yes, because the best assassins of your world are so incompetent that their arrow struck just above my lungs from a flat trajectory shot.>"
   
"<Well fine, they tried to kill me.>" Pascal relented, but only slightly. "<This is a terrible idea.>"
+
"<Well fine. they tried to kill me.>" Pascal relented, but only slightly. "<This is a terrible idea.>"
   
 
"<nowiki><I</nowiki> know it's a terrible idea.>" Kaede spun her heels around, her eyes filled with a painful need as she gazed back at Pascal: "<Look, I really, really wanted her to be my friend. I thought she ''was'' the first friend I made in this world, alright? So, just let me reach out to her this once to get it off my conscience... please?>" She begged.
 
"<nowiki><I</nowiki> know it's a terrible idea.>" Kaede spun her heels around, her eyes filled with a painful need as she gazed back at Pascal: "<Look, I really, really wanted her to be my friend. I thought she ''was'' the first friend I made in this world, alright? So, just let me reach out to her this once to get it off my conscience... please?>" She begged.
Line 189: Line 189:
 
"<You're not helping.>"
 
"<You're not helping.>"
   
"I said we are ''not'' interrogating you, and I meant it." Kaede insisted. "Obviously, I can't speak for the other involved parties, but that's also why I'm here. If I can find you a way out of this -- and I'm not promising, because I honestly don't know -- then will you take it?"
+
"I said we are ''not'' interrogating you, and I meant it." Kaede insisted. "Obviously, I can't speak for the other involved parties, but that's also why I'm here. If I can find you a way out of this --and I'm not promising, because I honestly don't know-- then will you take it?"
   
 
"W-why are you doing this?" The maid whimpered once more.
 
"W-why are you doing this?" The maid whimpered once more.
Line 281: Line 281:
 
But that wasn't the only thing on his mind.
 
But that wasn't the only thing on his mind.
   
Before yesterday, if someone had told him that the arrogant, condescending, judgmental, obstinate, intolerant -- he could go on for a while -- ''Runelord'' Pascal would apologize to him over the source of their enmity from years ago, Perceval would have responded that celestial enlightenment was more likely to sweep across Hell first.
+
Before yesterday, if someone had told him that the arrogant, condescending, judgmental, obstinate, intolerant --he could go on for a while-- ''Runelord'' Pascal would apologize to him over the source of their enmity from years ago, Perceval would have responded that celestial enlightenment was more likely to sweep across Hell first.
   
 
Maybe it had. Part of him wondered what other miracles the Holy Father orchestrated last night.
 
Maybe it had. Part of him wondered what other miracles the Holy Father orchestrated last night.
Line 287: Line 287:
 
But that left him the dilemma of how to respond.
 
But that left him the dilemma of how to respond.
   
Years-long grudges did not disappear over a single apology, no matter how thorough and sincere it was. Perceval certainly had not forgotten how hurtful it was back then, when a younger him had been convinced, utterly certain, that his incompetence in most fields of magic meant his dreams would never amount to anything. As far as he was concerned, he would remain insignificant and uselessly boring throughout his life.
+
Year-long grudges did not disappear over a single apology, no matter how thorough and sincere it was. Perceval certainly had not forgotten how hurtful it was back then, when a younger him had been convinced, utterly certain, that his incompetence in most fields of magic meant his dreams would never amount to anything. As far as he was concerned, he would remain insignificant and uselessly boring throughout his life.
   
 
He could never thank his friends enough for giving him the self-respect to hold his head high over the course of two years. That was especially true for Ariadne, the most beautiful and popular girl in the academy who sat beside him, listening to his pessimistic complaints and encouraging him with saintly patience.
 
He could never thank his friends enough for giving him the self-respect to hold his head high over the course of two years. That was especially true for Ariadne, the most beautiful and popular girl in the academy who sat beside him, listening to his pessimistic complaints and encouraging him with saintly patience.
Line 367: Line 367:
 
Kaede was certain Ariadne's glove was glowing. There was simply no way someone could ''slap'' that hard without magic, regardless of how big a sword they twirled around every day.
 
Kaede was certain Ariadne's glove was glowing. There was simply no way someone could ''slap'' that hard without magic, regardless of how big a sword they twirled around every day.
   
The force of the impact lifted Pascal's feet off the ground and threw him backwards like a rag doll. He crashed into the ground several paces away on his back. A red handprint now adorned the left side of his face. His skin quickly bruised with internal bleeding under the partial cover of his soft golden curls.
+
The force of the impact lifted Pascal's feet off the ground and threw him backwards like a rag doll. He crashed into the ground several paces away on his back. A red handprint now adorned the right side of his face. His skin quickly bruised with internal bleeding under the partial cover of his soft golden curls.
   
 
"Owww," Pascal remarked as he sat back up, his hand rushing to cradle his swelling cheek. "I do rot rememper drawing plood with mere words."
 
"Owww," Pascal remarked as he sat back up, his hand rushing to cradle his swelling cheek. "I do rot rememper drawing plood with mere words."

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)